Nice so far, but you mussed up an end italics tag

4425984 Thanks. I went in and fixed it.

Id really like a fanfic like this to touch upon the possibility of one not being sexually attracted to ponies. You can love a person, even romantically, but be drier than a desert when it comes to sex with them. Oh well.

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I'm really hoping for a good explanation of why Derpy disappeared for a week and left Dinky to think she had been abandoned.

Guess I'll just have to read the next chapter and hopefully find out.

Well, she isn't dead.

Damn it.

“I cannot see the future, Sam, but I believe that if you truly love her as much as she loves you, then there is always hope that things will turn out for the better.”

LIEZ!

But in all seriousness, I'm really liking the story. Dropping you a thumb's up!

4426012 No mistakes in this chapter! That's a record. :3

4426310 this one ?

YAY!

Freakin' magic man so op, had a small fit of rage when I read the part luna used magic to lull him to sleep, just doesn't seem to matter every story I read they use magic for someone to do something, maybe just to clear some things up, but it just doesn't seem right to me you don't even give them a choice. But whatever good story ethier way.

I don´t know if i needed the Luna scene, but actually i think Luna only give something to think and don´t say to much. Well so far i still love the story

4448777 I think you are right, everytime they used there magic if they are mad or something and show the Humans who seems to be the boss.
I don´t like it if they allways use there magic to do what they want to the Humans, a bit like "If you cant use magic then back off and do what i said or let me do what i want!"

Wel i still like the story but you are right.

I felt a warmth in my chest; this little filly, the one who who not that long ago couldn't stand to be in the same room as me, was snuggled up close, almost as if she thought I was her...no, I'm not. I'm just a family friend.

Correction:I felt a warmth in my chest; this little filly, the one who not that long ago couldn't stand to be in the same room as me, was snuggled up close, almost as if she thought I was her...no, I'm not. I'm just a family friend.

Luna smiled, as she got up, and started walking away. Suddenly the the whole world began to fade in and out of focus.

Correction: Luna smiled, as she got up, and started walking away. Suddenly the whole world began to fade in and out of focus.