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i know im supposed to be invested in this but all i can think about is when Rainbow Rocks happens and Omni beating the ever loving shit out of the Dazzelings and the human would reacting to Omni (mostly just the human cast reacting to Omni)
so let him be
his self
problem fixed.
Huh, I think this is the first human breaking down into tears in these fics that I didn't immediately scoff at.
This chapter seriously disturbs me. They are forcing him to submit to their methods of resolving PERSONAL issues simply because they disagree with his when he differs from them completely in the one and only place that matters, the mind. I do not believe I would be able to be anywhere near people that are willing to corner me and force me to change simply becuase they disliked the way I was doing something, never mind be in a relationship with them. I get the feeling that omni is just being a huge door mat every time I see stuff like this in the story and it irritates me.
Oh just had a weird thought maybe I'm being human supermisist about it or something, "pony methods are different so they are bad" or something?........ Ehh doesn't matter, it doesn't change my opinion.
Let thy comments rain down from on high for my body is ready!i1.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/original/000/131/443/tumblr_liebpzbCOv1qdkf2k.gif
5509886 Talking about your issues isn't just a pony thing. It's what counsellors are all about. It's just a method the large majority of people try to avoid like the plague, much like Fae's doing. In a lot of cases, they really do have to get a full intervention from all the people that care about them (hay, me and my friends have been trying to get another friend to stop ignoring his troubles for a couple months now.) Celestia might be pushing the 'accept you're a girl thing' a bit much, but on one hoof Fae is a girl in this life, and on the other she's also supporting the attempts to find a gender swap spell that won't mess up Fae's natural changeling abilities.
Also; door mat? Fae's been ignoring this issue for about a couple chapters now. This is about the third time Celestia's tried to get him to face it. And she's also right about his tendency to end up making things worse by coping out... The Amulet, the Week of Reality Rejection, the Relationship Confusion with Spike...
Also, he does admit to being a doormat when the girls directly confront him. Hence all the running away and avoiding direct confrontation. They just cornered and tagged teamed him, thanks to the magic of Equestrian Coincidence, this time.
I want to punch your character in the nose... So bad. This who back and forth with the gender issue is ridiculously infuriating. One minute they're fine and the next? Boo hoo I'm a girl, my life sucks balls. Fae / Fairy / Omnifucknuggets needs to sort his / her / its shit out. This isn't Tumblr.
Don't get the wrong idea, I'm not slating your writing at all. Quite the opposite, I actually get angry when reading your stuff, the only other person who has done that for me is The Descendant
In a nutshell - great writing, great character (despite how annoying they are). You do a great job at conveying someone who actually has a problem, and a great job at flaring my anger towards them for not getting their shit together
I know, I'm a heartless prick
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I have to agree with Duncan on this. Forcing Omni to talk about it just felt off (I know if I was in his position, I would have pushed back hard). Talking about issues with people who most likely never truly experienced (or have any personal understanding of) what the person is going through has the greatest chance of backfiring on certain (if not most) issues. I had to hold back a friend of mine, who had just returned from a tour of combat with PTSD and the Army made him go to a shrink for "treatment", to keep him from trying to hit the counsellor when he didn't listen to my friend saying, "I don't want to talk about it", when questioned about certain things he saw/did over there. That "counsellor" only made things worse, despite his sincere wanting to help (my friend never actually talked to the shrink from then on, as all sessions lasted just enough time for him to check in and then leave). However, when he talked to fellow veterans who have PTSD and experienced similar things to what he went through, things significantly improved. So much so that he started talking to me (someone who enlisted, but was medically discharged during training and never deployed) about what happened.
I know what it's like to be on the sidelines watching someone you care about nearly self-destruct, and it's not fun (I can't say the number of times I nearly cried from seeing my friend in so much pain due to his combat tours). However, when trying to help, sometimes the best option is to just be there, and let them come to you, not you force him/her to talk about it. What helps the most is not a stranger being paid to say, "Tell me about what you feel," no matter how sincere the stranger's intentions are, but rather the fellow who places a reassuring hand on the shoulder and says, "I've been there too."
If anything, Sunset is in the best position to actually help, even if she doesn't truly understand what he's going through, and she doesn't even really need to do anything. She just needs to offer him a shoulder to lean on and an ear to listen.
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Because it HAS been building all along. The reader gets to know Omnifarious more before the breakdown that's usually chapter one in these things.
Y’know, I think it's a toss up between the chapters where Fae breaks down and where he kicks ass that are my favourite things about this story. And this one was a long time coming, and I liked seeing it get pushed into daylight.
So yeah. Great work eagerly waiting to see the fallout.
5509886 I don't know about that. This seemed more like an intervention than brainwashing or something. OmnI was obviously not dealing with his/her issues and it was bad for both her friends and for the safety of others (being uber-powerful and control a race of warrior changelings)
Now there's a thought. Is this foreshadowing, or what? At some point he's going to have to split and lay some eggs, right? If this mess gets worse before it gets better, I can see this being his last resort.
In my opinion, it's about time. Looking forward to more.
Keep up the good work. Deus tecum.
"labido"
libido
"There might have been no pleasure at seeing myself decked out in full gown with lace and everything else Rarity could put on my dress to make it princess-worthy, but there wasn’t any revulsion or hesitation either. I felt no need to compromise with my thoughts to say it looked like German military wear"
...Um. I think I must be misunderstanding something here? I'm reading this as saying that lacy gowns are German military dress, which... I'm pretty sure is not the case. What does this mean? Sorry.
Glad to see my most favorite fic ever updating once again excellent chapter btw
and no I'm not flatering you so that you update more often when did you get that idea?
ok.... maybe a little bit does not make the fact that this is my fav fic any less true though keep up the awesome work I shall await your next chapter patiently... or die trying.
oh and about omni finally opening up about his/her problems all i have to say is:
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I hope you don't mind a little bit of anal retentive nit picking but I believe you intended this to be etiquette rather than educate
Welp. That's been building for a while.
clique
5511254 It's basically saying that he felt no need to deny and repress the fact he was in a coronation dress about to become a princess by forcing himself to think it looked like a uniform from one of the most militaristic and brutal war 'machines' (e.g. it's called the nazi war machine) in history to keep some semblance of belief that he is a guy mentally as well.
This ties in to the fact that he felt nothing at all about it. Hope that cleared things up :D
Also, as a side note, 8086 words more and you will have reached the 400k word milestone! Congratulations!
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...Huh. Well, thank you, that does clear up what the words meant. It still seems... really, really odd to me, though. Then again, he wasn't in the best mental state at the time, so...
I really like this story, read the first one and this one up to the chapter before this one over a weekend and i love the shenanigans Omnifarious gets up to as a changeling queen/pony princess to be. The only thing that is a bit confusing to me is the whole feelings aspect that plays such a great role, in most other fics there is one or two chapters where the character has some kind of problem but then it gets fixed and everything goes on, in most cases pretty badly at that.
And here is the thing, in this story that whole part is threaded through the story and is really believable without being forced or just magically waved away. I just don't get it. On some level i know that what is being discussed and happening makes sense but then i try to think about it myself and i just don't understand it, especially when its all about relationships and people talking about their feelings and stuff like that.
I hope that made sense.
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Rainbow rocks can't happen because the person with the connection strong enough to Celestia strong enough to tear holes in the fabric of reality is back home....without her magic, body, friends or a connection to the rainbow of light. So basically, omnifarious made sunset's life worse than canon, go him.
5517681 oh god if thay ever try to return to earth its under the jack boot of the dazzlelings!
I do so hope we don't have to wait too much longer for another chapter.
5517681 Oh it's worse than that.
He's also, obviously, made Spike's life worse.
He also indirectly caused the Lavan incident, as the story came from the comics and had Celestia go with Spike, and she made sure nothing went wrong.
Also the pirate captain was searching for a 'jewel'. In the comics they helped him track it down and it turned out to be a sea pony he had been searching for for years. In this universe they didn't get reunited cause of Fae.
He almost caused Rainbow to join the Wonderbolts at Rainbow Falls too.
I'm waiting to see how his presence is going to royally screw up Tirek's Return. Like stopping discord from helping, so he doesn't switch sides, and doesn't get the pendant, which leaves them missing a key.
I like the story a lot, don't get me wrong, but I can also see how his influence is ruining parts of the world unintentionally.
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Bad ideas in the ponyverse: Fucking with the rainbow.
Which would include sunset...
Omni is reaaalllyyy fucked the moment tirek shows up.
Also would like to add that this needs an update.
Time travel forward!
THIS WAS AWESOME AT HOW YOU LAID OUT THE PSYCHOLOGICAL RESPONSE! IT WAS SO AWESOME!
I really love this story so far! While there are plenty of grammar issues and what-not, the story itself is written in such a way that it grabs you and doesn't let go. Bravo I say!
About bucking time they corner his dumb ass and force him to see how much of a retard he's being about locking stuff up. I really hope he changes his ways... but I'm not going to hold my breath. I honestly skimmed through most of this chapter whenever he started thinking about stuff.
5602697 Maybe, but maybe not.
5602703 That's along the lines of what I thought when I read that part too.
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(S)He can't help bring human. We bipeds are a stubborn bunch that refuse to plague others with our troubles because when we even speak of it, it is human culture that looks down on it.
5517681 I'd say wrong. Sunset didn't bring her book, so it's still in Earthquestria. It just depends if the girls find it and figure it out.
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Well, you are entitled to your own opinion and preferences, but to me, this is exatly what makes Omnifarious such an interesting character. This fic has gone very far trying to explain Equestria and the ponies that inhabit it, which I greatly appreciate.
The main character has many things that could've made him a Gary stu, he even has his harem and is pretty much an alicorn. But, he's not. I ove his mental state, how strongly he feels about things, and how wrong he can be at times. I love that his mistakes do catch up to him, and I love seeing him go through real emotional conflicts like this one.
This, to me, makes for one heck of a great story.
While rereading, I got to thinking. Why does't he just wear tuxedos? They're guy clothes and girls can look good in them just as well as guys.
you're*
trotting
glad someone else noticed that bit at the end of Winter Wrap-up
placation
etiquette
compliments
overrode
tenant's lap.
you're
“Right, Sunset?”
everypony's
Words can not express how much I am loving this story.........
The way things are going, it's only a matter of time until Fey wakes up in the hive mind one night as a woman instead of a man.
At the start of the previous story, MC was edgelord "I'll cut off your legs and let you crawl out of the gutter I leave you in!"
Now you really get it across as them being a person, and you make those moments of violence feel like they are really just there to cover what is going on beneath the surface. You really came a long way in writing, especially subtle nuances like deep seeded internal conflict, and I'm really glad I stuck with it to this point to see it.
Fi-fucking-nally, i've been waiting for Omni to blow-up like this. He has his gender AND race changed, and he has been coping really well, to me that is.
If i were him i would the Alicorn Amulet to turn back into human, or at least male with a d. Fuck changeling race, they could go extinct for all i care im not gonna lay egg for them.
Now it's turned out that Omni has been repressed his emotion the entire time, using violent as his coping mechanism. It's made him easily angry at smallest thing. Worse, he has been distracting himself from his promblem by focused on other pony promblems.
This made Omni a better Man than i am. Or a better brony.
Huge chapter. Hope it helped him... Brilliant chapter
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She's stressed because she feels like she's losing herself, much like some kind of mind control/alteration her new form enforces on her basically