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So many updates, love it.
I am kind of torn about Celestia's feelings though. I get the vibe that its a sorta-crush/love thing that she has for Fae, and her comment a few chapters back about how she sees Twilight.... it will be interesting to see where this goes.
Can't wait see the next update.
Raise the sails. I SEE A NEW SHIP!
It seems kinda cruel on Tia's part to keep forcing Fae to be female, after all it was her that stuck him in a female alicorn form just to be a troll and he can't change it and now she's making him a princess. This despite his repeated assertions that he prefers male titles and names and repeated self-identity issues, she actually seems to be performing a bizarre sort of mental torture.
Hoping for some Celestia shipping regardless.
And now you're not even trying to hide the foreshadowing with Celestia.
So yeah, Celestia is definitely infatuated/in love with/crushing on Fae.
And I do hope everything works out for Twilight, Fae, RD, and Celestia in the end. In a way, Fae is already acting as a protective older sibling or parent to Sunset anyhow.
Fae, y u so obvious?
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Personally I'm of the opinion that if the walls of propriety were taken down, the Mane 6 would probably end up dating one another in a herd. They eahc have something that compliments and contrasts with another. They're already close, and about as good of friends as friends can be without taking the step into romance.
As for Celestia and Luna, I think they BOTH have issues with 'outside looking in'. I think Celestia desperately wants the kind of love and care that would come with being involved with that, and from what she's seen (but not been able to be a part of) she does truly love the ponies around her. I think she's just hinting toward Fae because no other pony has been able to get that close to her that ISN'T her sister. They do spend every night together just talking, sharing stories, and keeping each other company. Not to mention that she's taken into the extra-ordinary circumstance of being VULNERABLE to someone, and that someone keeping her safe. That's so far outside of her range of experience that her emotions are more than understandable.
So... Yeah. My personal hope is that the mane 6 (plus Fae) end up together in the end, but for now I'd like to see Twi-x-Fae-x-Dash-x-Tia, but that last one is gonna take longer for the girls to get used to her as Tia rather than Princess.
It's freaking fantastic just keep up I want to see this coming ps when fea become queen it will be before at the time or after tirek return?
Hm..Dash...or Tia...Both? Hell, if you really wanted to, you could add in Luna..Considering that Dash and Twi are two of the most famous mares in the Mane 6..And saved her from the Nightmare (Whatever it is in this universe.)...Having a supreme crush on either of them would not be unbelievable.
5034444 I'm sorry, but yes they complement each other personality wise, but a all the time heaping of pinkie, rarity, and fluttershy would drive me bonkers. Rainbow would as well but the first three most definitely.
I like random, random can be funny....but too much random drives me up the wall.
Rarity would be so so. Its not that the personality traits she has is awful, its more that the affectations and the drama she injects into her own life would mean issues with keeping everything going on a even keel. Emotional manipulations and a emotional rollercoaster do NOT make for healthy.
Fluttershy would be the most frustrating unless being in love would make the pushoverness recede a bit. I mean that dammed rabbit pushes her around (well meaning though it is), people like that are way clingy when they find something that they like and that clingy can get into epic levels of scary . Love is about give and take and unless she's insanely comfortable with someone, she's a doormat. Doormats get abused and taken advantage of even without you meaning to, and that's not healthy.
Fae, you have more in common with celestia, you just want rainbow because she's hot and you may have a chance....
Celestia on the other hand is all but asking for you yo pick her.
I can't wait to see Fae coronation, I don't think he needs to wear his makeup in the crystal Empire anymore after all he did save the crystal ponys, so they better be fucking grateful, I mean he literally save the kingdom with rock music! but don't have Fae try to save Canterlot with rock music I don't want him to grab one of Luna's batponys and pulling an ozzy osbourne
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Counterpoint - Not all activities would be shared and not all time would be spent as a cohesive group. This is speaking from experience. More individual bonding or 'time share dating' as it were does occur and things still work out OK as long as everyone gets their turn and everyone just... relaxes about it. It's not so much a gaggle of ponies going everywhere together, they'd piss each other off within a week at best... More OPEN to each other and frankly I think a lot of their personality flaws would even out as time went on and they spent more time and energy CONNECTING like that. Especially since they might feel they could (or would need to) actually have discussions like 'Rarity you really need to chill out' or 'Pinkie, this is when you really desperately need to give us some quiet time.'
It'd be really rocky off the start but eventually I believe that things would even out and they'd all be better for it. Being surrounded by that much love and care is just.. It smooths out a lot of rough edges and can give you a feeling of contentment and peace that I simply cannot put into words.
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I am aware. While changeling magic isn't identical, it's similar enough.
Fae is really dense for someone who have a direct emotional link to Celly. She clearly want more with her/him, and its not like he missed her actions when he was in the hospital bed, the way she talked and he woke up with her inches away from kissing him. Her constant hints he keep missing.
Can't wait for Fae to get his Fridge Logic moment.
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Loving this story to bits! Keep it up.
why do I fore-see the later points of this story involving one massive lesbian orgy herd family grouping between the 6, Fae, and Celly? I only say 'lesbian' because I get the distinct overwhelming sensation that this story is going to keep pushing the main male character being stuck as a female until he inevitably gives the fuck up, probably just about the time that a solution is finally found.
Fairy and Celestia together is an HORRIBLE idea, because it would give Twilight Sparkle a mental breakdown, besides the fact that Fairy ALREADY had Celestia in her head, so if they fight or something it would be a nightmare.
5772420 You have to admit, it would create great conflict, and a story without conflict isn't much of a story (if what I know is correct, it's pretty much required.)
I wouldn't be opposed to it as long as the resolution isn't shit.
Honestly why did Tia hold the coranation in the Empire? I haven't seen any reason since this chapter to point to why.
6197187 it would be a show of support to omni, and after saving the crystals in plain sight, they would be stupid to deny it. No matter what their hero said about omni.
Her hare... herd is going to have 10 peop... ponies in by the time she's done, calling it now. (10 including herself that is)
6197187 I'm going to guess because she mentioned it being one of the top romantic places in Equestria, on top of the fact she just confessed her love to Fae.
Tia's crushing on Fae, isn't she?
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Super fucking hard.
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I wonder...
7694787 yeah yeah, I tend to Not readcomments before I make our own.
We feel it brings a nice refresher for those who went bherocx.
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altar.
How can a pony owe allegiance and be loyal to
two threefour princesses?increments.
redundant "with", delete one
After coming back to this story, I again am remembering why I found it hard to keep reading it... I just am at severe odds with so much of Fae’s stances on things.
The whole ‘polyamory is always bad’ mentality. Polyamory can’t be loyal, females giving oral sex to males is bad, it’s just... he takes these strong stances against things that I support, even when he ends up accepting (like the herd situation). It makes it hard to enjoy the story. It’s not just him, either- A lot of characters take extremist stances (Spike, for example) or say or do things that fall so far out of line of their ordinary characterizations.
It’s more of a personal opinion issue than a story issue, of course, so I think I’ll keep it as ‘liked’, and who knows, maybe I’ll come back again some day.
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I kinda agree with how the author handled everything. The polyamory concerns he had were legitimate concerns that are observable in the real world. Also he didnt habe a problem with blowjobs he had a problem with himself giving blowjobs, which the hornthing reminded him of, because he still sees himself somewhat as a heterosexual man, ie no fun stuff with phallic objects. To a lesser extent, he would not let Twilight do the suck with changelingFlash because he hates the idea of FlashXTwilight.
I loved how the author extrapolated Spikes issues too. I mean looking back at the show, spile was kinda nuts. A basically enslaved child who was hatched to serve as an assisstant. And thats all he knows. When Twilights interest shifted to Omnifarious, he felt that his entire purpose was being taken from him, so he latched on to the only logical reason (to him) that twi would leave him, mind control.
SHIPPED
Okay I get the whole thing is meant to be "being a better person, or ponies are better than humans". But in all honesty, I don't think I could put up with all the stuff the main character is putting up with.
If I were having this conversation with Tia I fear it would go more like this
let out a groan. “Can you at least not call me that when I’m all the way male?”
“Absolutely not"
"..."
"What?"
"Do you hate me so much?"
"W-What, far what do you mean, you are one of my closest frie-"
"Yeah right."
"You've never been a friend to me, I'm just treated like a toy, or a doll for your amusement. You don't care one bit about me."
"F-Fae, where is this coming from? I thought we already got over the whole-"
"Where's it coming from? Let's lost it off, shall we.
Everyone i ever knew is effectively dead to me as I'll never see them again.
I get changed into a completely different species.
I'm practically born having to be the bad guy.
Even when I try to be the hero and save the day it backfires and I get my ass handed to me, Twice!
I practically get forced/guilt tripped into a relationship with twilight by cadence and twilight.
I have everything in this world trying to rip away my masculinity and gender identity.
You try, no you succeed in forcing me to play dress up by manipulating rarity and twilight.
I get called a monster by ponies I don't even know and have never done wrong by.
When I have a mental break down the pony who claims to love me can't even be bothered to check on me. And when I get back from nearly dieing through that ordeal, she's made at me! Well I'm sorry that I had my whole life ripped away from me without even a moments rest twilight, maybe you'd like to give it a try if you think it's so easy.
I've got to tiptoe around my own home because terrified if I do something wrong I could sent the incredibly depressed young girl into thought of suicide."
"Wait, WHAT?!"
"Everyone always expects me to be the one who is patient and understanding, but whenever I try to share some of my thoughts or concerns, there just tossed aside or ignored, like I don't have the right to get upset!
And speaking of rights, its bad enough that the pony who claims to love me to constantly remind me that she hates my face. But you actually made it a LAW that changelings aren't even allowed to show there true forms in public. I can't believe I actually allowed that, but there I go again just letting you do as you please without a fight, because once again I'm trying to be peaceful. So much for building trust and friendship between our species when one party doesn't even want to look at the other. So much for ponies not being racist, oh sorry speciesist.
I risked my life fighting to save that stupid little empire and what happens, that little BASTARD of a lizard lies to everypo- no everyONE, and steals all the credit. He then uses my stolen Valor to try and get a scared young girl hurt, or worse, and tries the same with me. And twilight, again the pony who is supposed to be in love with me, takes his side at every chance. Even now I think she still believes he's innocent, or "he doesn't understand what he did, he's just a baby". Bullshit he is 15 years old, he should damn well suffer the consequences of his actions."
"Fae."
"I-I....I don't even know what I am anymore. I just want one place were I can still be me. But I can't even have this place. So tell me, why do you hate me so much? Why do you resent everything about me?"
"Fairy i don't, we all love you."
"Except for everything you want to change about me."
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"Omnifarious, i-im so sorry I didn't-...I thought, I thought if I ignored your troubles you might start to think them not so large, and that you could overcome them. That you might come to see them as small and insignificant.
But all I did, was make you feel even more alone. Like you had to face them yourself. I'm sorry i-"
"This actually reminds me of a quote from doctor who. "if you take a broom, replace the handle, replace the head, handle, head, handle, head you do this so many times. Is it still the same broom? Answer; no.""
"Fae, please"
"Please leave?"
"What?"
"Wake up for ten minutes, I'm going to change this place."
In tears Celestia silently fade from the dream. When she reappears she's wearing a plain, but pure white, dress. She immediately sees that the room has shrunken considerably, as if a wall was run straight down the center, to separate the two halves.
All she could do was sit down wither back to that wall, and cry.
"Hic-I, I'm sorry, I'm sorry. Forget the sun, hic-my special talent seems to be hurting anyone foolish enough to come near me." And she cried.
On the other side of the wall, with his back against it, Omnifarious cried too.
Ok I am so sorry that that dragged on forever, I also apologize if it sounded to much like a rant, sometimes I get started and don't know where to stop. And I regret writing this on my phone....I'm not joking, so please forgive any grammatical errors on my part.
Now after all that I will admit, I love good drama stories. And I am loving this one.
You author are truly gifted, eberytime I think I know where the story will go next, you pull the rug out from under us, flip the room around, and still make it make sense . And I love it.
Seriously please keep making awesome stories.
O crap... What a dense Changeling Queen...
Beautiful chapter ♡
Kinda wonder who Luna will go with?
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yeah lol they're characters
I had fun reading this whole thing, but this is quite the long story. I will have to come back to this sometime later.
Dumb bug, love the sun!