That's...kind of wrong manipulating dreams like that...

Welp, I've seen something like this before, not as well written and slightly different, but the "pretend you don't exist and then fuck you silly" luna was a thing there too...

Between us thought, this is written better...if only by a small amount you shameless, shameless monster of a writer.

Okay, that happened. Looking forward to more.
Keep up the good work.

Keep Calm
And
Write more

Dame. Dat dream

Poor shmuck

Luna, what are we gonna do with you?

Sooooooooooo much Unf

Luna enchanted her guardspony and copulated with him when he was asleep. Its rape. Where is dark tag?

4466308 he got to bang luna (in a way) so i think he's just fine

4466895 While that might be true, he also has a princess attention driven to him now. He will never get a chance to rest

Socks! Accursed socks! The bane of any sane man's dreams!

4465937 so wrong, but so, so right!

Luckyist guard! AKNPEILJKASD!!!! So Jelly!

4466876

Oh, I know how it'll go...

(Pouty voice) No fair Lulu! Share with me!

Luna must be realy insecure about herself to go around it that way.

Or just kinky.

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Been a while since you've put out a clopfic.
It was worth the wait.

4494357 Next chapter is Cadance

And it may or may not involve a leash

Oh Luna you.

Suggestions! Take em or leave em!

my transfered

This should be "me transferred".

the dungeon duty

This might be better as either "dungeon duty" or "the dungeon".

Watching her out f the corner

This should be "out of".

That's all! Now, I'd like to say, what in Tartarus are you people talking about? Rape? Dream? He didn't sleep until the end. It was an illusion Luna used to appear as Celestia, but Pike was awake and willing, more or less. Probably a little hard to deny the princess, but she never forced him to do anything. She just asked if he'd like a taste.

EDIT: Oh I think I see it.

Celestia’s composure seemed to falter at that, her brow furrowing and wings giving an uncertain flex, before a slow, sly smirk spread across her features.

Hmm, but he was pacing just prior to her intrusion, unless he fell asleep while waiting down there and dreamed of work... Curious, I'm not sure what to think now.

With that out of the way, woo! Damn you've got some skill at this. Your descriptions are spot-on and it's difficult not to see the scene playing out in your head. Extremely well done, and I'm interested in seeing where this goes, and how Celly is going to react when she finds out Luna's used her image to seduce a guard! Leash? Oh yes.

Please keep writing, I'll keep reading!

but the question is, will this ever be updated?

OMG this guard is such a wuss if i was him i would be like http://youtu.be/11e8XyUBqRQ

This is really good

This is going to be SOO AWKWARD with Celestia later xD

4466776 Not sure why all those down votes are there. You're EXACTLY RIGHT. No different than drugging someone and sleeping with them while unconscious. So yea... this story just got VERY dark.

4494706 HOWEVER, being a fan of a certain other work of yours that is very dark at times, (most recent chapters just had a major supporting character murdered), I am not complaining about this one being dark. Merely pointing out that this is a rape fic now and thus SHOULD have the Dark Tag. Also I want to know who is wearing the leash because that's my thing, among others.

5586441 the guard will be wearing the leash

5586449 Works for me. You still need that Dark tag though.

5587173 I don't consider this dark, honestly.

If the guard was unwilling I would add the dark tag.

5588499 Well... you're walking a VERY fine line. This could be seen as no different from taking a drunk person home, only in this case you forced them to get drunk without ever telling them. One can argue that were the guard not in a dream state/hypnotized/whatever that he would be quite willing, but the point is that he isn't being given much of a choice. Combined with the fact that even the Sunbutt he thinks he is servicing is effectively ORDERING him to do it, thus taking advantage of her authority. It's pretty much walking on the razor's edge while trying to claim there isn't an edge at all.

HOWEVER, I'm going to keep reading regardless. It IS quite good after all.

The power of boners is strong with Sturdy Pike, one of the most unfortunately-named ponies in history...

Although I doubt I'd be complaining if I was in his situation

Feels finished to me, why not stamp it as such?

5910797 There's a Cadance chapter coming up, with a collar and leash! And then an actual Luna chapter where he confronts her.

But that's a secret!

5910955 ...I didn't read anything...
Something about Cadence, I think...can't be sure

Shhh

Looking forward to it...I can imagine Cadence is going to be quite curious as to what she's feeling from her aunt about a guard...but that's just me rambling, pay no attention to the madpony with a box

Is this story dead?

I ask again. Is this story dead??

6272759 Not exactly. I'll get around to writing the next chapter sometime!

6272875

sometime

Valve time*

I'm having a hard time picturing how he was standing behind her, lapping at the larger standing mare, yet she somehow folded herself to wrap a front hoof around his errection. I really got lost as to placement of bodies at that point and had a difficult time regaining it.

Otherwise, nicely written and a nice continuation of the previous chapter. :)

Do you want a taste? By the moon i didnt know i can laugth that dirty... I love how you make me do that

There is a royal guard tag, I've seen one for both Solar and Lunar guard, or at least Bat pony for the latter and Royal Guard for the former.

8169302 The royal guard tag was added a few months ago.

This story was last updated three years ago. We didn't have a royal guard tag then.

8169310 Ah, thanks for the info. I don't know much about the tags, I'm mostly just here for the great stories though I've been entertaining the idea of writing my own.

Wonder if this will continue someday.

Congrats! Fimfiction has a Royal Guard tag now!