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People are like books. You can't judge them by the outside and it's not cool to burn a big pile of them.

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Today is Hearts and Hooves Day, and Spike finally gathers up the courage to tell his secret feelings to Sweetie Belle to ask her a very important question: Will you be my special somepony? And, it turns out that they both have something to say.


Spike and Sweetie Belle have been aged up to their teenage years.

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Comments ( 31 )

What if Sweetie Belle accidently drink the love poison and see Spike?

I don't really care for stories of the CMC or the others grown up but this one is cute and I like it thumbs up! :twilightsmile:

alas. i love SpikeBelle :heart:

This was pretty awesome! But I found a typo,

"I had a feeling that I could ne happier with you."

Isn't it "be", not "ne"?

Other than that, I loved this fanfic! :twilightsmile:

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Thank you, I didn't even notice that. I'll fix it right away!

That's pretty cute. I feel like they jumped into saying they loved each other too quickly, but I guess it fits with the type of story this is. Confession stories like this always feel like they should be at the tail end of something longer, but oh well. Still cute.

The story is so cute!:heart:
But, I noticed a typo

Spike sighed as he stared at the small bouquet of roses he got from Daisy, and rubbed the soft petals with her claws

Spike sighed as he stared at the small bouquet of roses he got from Daisy, and rubbed the soft petals with her claws

You made a mistake and you meant pt type

"His" claws

Spike sighed as he stared at the small bouquet of roses he got from Dasiy, and rubbed the soft petals with his claws

Spike sighed as he stared at the small bouquet of roses he got from Dasiy, and rubbed the soft petals with his claws

Hope I helped and I love this story and shipping too as well :twilightsmile:

So cute:heart:

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Thanks for the typo! I'll fix it. And, I'm glad you enjoyed the story.

Always love a good SpikeBelle shipping.

yes, my daily dose of SpikeBelle. Very cute. Definitely worth a like. :moustache::heart::unsuresweetie:

Could definatly use a number of touch ups but over all it was cute.

D'aww, that was so cute! It got me right in the feels... ! :yay:

Ah. It's a sweet story, but the sweetness is so condensed it's a little too much.

It's a little short but very good.

Alright it is indeed good and short.But it is also rushed and in my opinion should have been spread out just a little more and when Spike had shown that he had feelings for Sweetie Belle.That i think is where it started to be rushed the most.In a way its kinda like one of those old romantic (black and wight old by the way)movies and there is nothing wrong with that too so yeah.Still a good story/prequel for what was it i dont remember the sequels name at the moment sorry but yeah again good story and very little grammatical errors and if anything minor errors but anyway good luck in the future and i hope you become a great and astonishing author or writer in the future :pinkiehappy::twilightsheepish:

4271336 The sequel, that's what.

'Nuff said. :eeyup:

THAT PEWDIEPIE REF :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

You copy a little from pews dont you...:duck::raritywink:
P.s are you a Bro???

Blue mascara? :rainbowderp::rainbowderp::rainbowderp:

I hope you mean eyeshadow.

Awwwww! How cute!
This is so adorable! I mean the story! The story is also well written and short. I love it.

Pacing seemed a little fast, and some of the dialogue was a little unrealistic, but this was still pretty adorable! :twilightsmile:

Have an upvote. And a few bookshelves.

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