This story is a sequel to Equestria Wars Episode II: The Lunar Republic Strikes Back
The Lunar Republic is building another Death Star even powerful than the first one. Charming Thunder must confront Queen Chrysalis and his father, King Sombra and put an end to the Lunar Republic once and for all while the Rebels try to destroy it. Will the rebellion be able to defeat the Lunar Republic or will they be defeated?
Wait... What?
4248847 Link to the previous episode: https://www.fimfiction.net/story/180159/equestria-wars-episode-ii-the-lunar-republic-strikes-back
Um...what?
TBH, I think Sombra has more authority than Chrysalis.
4260511 Yes. But Chrysalis has the power to take his life away.
4260608 And Sombra is the master of dark magic.
4260658 Chrysalis is the queen of the changelings. As King Sombra is the king of dark magic. They're both different.
4260670 True but Sombra just seems more menacing.
But honestly, this story concept could work if it didn't directly rip off Star Wars.
4260684 Its a different concept. You'll see.
4260689 But you're directly copying lines from the actual script and replacing it with everything pony.
4260705 Can you help me make some changes? I'd appreciate it.
4279671 kind of. why?
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commander sonicdash123 the time has come execute order sixty-five, sixty-seven, and thirty-eight
and you, and you, and you too
You have a tendency to call Charming Thunder 'she' at times...
This seriously follows Star Wars too closely, it feels less Pony and more... Star Wars
Just like in the movies.