An autistic brony who is the owner of an OC pony named Charming Thunder and a big fan of Star Wars.
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This story is a sequel to Charming Thunder's Arrest
Luna has finally taken her sister's throne as queen of Equestria and Charming Thunder plots to help take it back with the help of his cousin, Blueblood. Charming Thunder plans to use his memory spell to wipe the memory of believing that Twilight is the daughter of Luna in order to restore peace to Equestria.
A sequel to Order 66 by Violet Runner.
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Yes, I can't wait till the next chapter.
I approve of this.
4029405 I'm glad that you liked it.
did i say that lol
i hope luna doset plan on useing them on me that would be unwise
4030039 Need me to spell check something from there?
4030060 No, no. The music just goes with that part.
4030071 What music?
4030079 I posted a video with it. it's the music that plays in episode 4 when Luke and Han are rescuing Leia.
4030101 Can you find other quotes that go with the music you find? I might make a soundtrack of it. You can help make it if you want.
4030160
Nice but the picture is broken.
4030455 I changed it just now.
4030461 still broken. try this url: http://images5.fanpop.com/image/photos/25800000/Acclamator-Class-Assault-Ship-star-wars-25879610-500-199.jpg?1393889595835
4030475 Got it.
this is poorly made and useing vary out dated ships and do research on your ships the Providence-class is a crusser not a carer and uses turbo laser batterys not laser batterys yes they are different
This fanfic will be based on Star Wars and My Little Pony combined. no this is mlp with starwars stuff not a crossover you have a few thangs from starwars but thats it and fix your tags
I think this goes with this chapter:
The theme for this chapter:
Good chapter But over all I think that things are going a little too well for the rebels. A failed mission or too would make it a little more interesting.
4048664 thanks for the feedback
I think for the duel part for this chapter, the music should be this:
4077013 And this:
Good Story
You get one like from me 
The cover art already makes me want to shy away from this story. I shall read it still,though.
I would have had Twilight end up fighting Luna near the end. That way you could have had the whole "I am you're mother!" thing.
Duel theme for Maul vs Charming Thunder:
Link to the next episode: https://www.fimfiction.net/story/180159/equestria-wars-episode-ii-the-lunar-republic-strikes-back
The Force is Strong with this one.
Sorry, couldn't resist. Totally reading this.
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I sure am glad you included pictures, because your descriptions are terrible.
This story needs inhumane amounts of editing...
Oh look, it's the non-canon version of the Phase 2 Dark Trooper!
Do you have a proofreader? Because you seriously need a couple of them.
You know, rather than including a picture of every faustdamn thing you should describe them. But do it without infodumping.
4249647 sure.
EEEEEEEWWW
Can someone tell me when this story takes place from "Order 66" because I find it odd that the ponies got futuristic technology in such a short amount of time seeing as how ponies like Blueblood and Shining Armor are still alive and seem to have not aged that much since "Order 66."
you did a good job be is like star wars ep 3
6591611 thank you my friend
6591611 but I thought you said he did a good job.
This should be interesting... You have my attention!
I like the story, but I think that the rebellion has a large lack of morals, they just separated a mother and daughter
7691621
i agree
okay so who is Charming Thunder mother?
To quote every Star wars ever made.
-"I've got a bad feeling about this."
Glad to see I'm not the only autistic star wars brony here.
My OC is Light Sparker, (human name: Marc Wayne Kurtzman.)
He's an alicorn and a real God, the God of Light to be exact.
He can control Harmony without the Elements, and he likes swords. His CM (Cutie Mark) is the Yang symbol and-.
Anyway, you can use him with Charming if ya want.
I like this so far. Keep it up Sonicdash123
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Indeed. But RD is head of the SB? Daaaaaaamn!