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Why is this getting such negative votes? I mean... come on, people!! Read the entire friggin' thing! Jeez...
That said, good job with maintaining the fantasy right up until Mac broke it. I honestly thought that was the direction you were going, if only because the title and everything was too shameless for a fic this well-written.
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I mean, the grammar could use some work...
It's mindless horse porn, what do you want me to say?
Uh, objectively good?
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4168438 No subject Tags. In fact I am surprised it even got through moderation without them.
4168517 Harp Flank raises a valid point. Tags are now had.
At first, I thought this wasn't going to be good considering the votes but it was a Mac and Twi clop so I had to at least go through it. My guess, most of those who down voted only did so because they thought this was a real rape instead of kinky sex. Too bad for them.
4168768 Well, it was designed to be a fake out, after all. So I guess that means I did my job well enough.
4168438 Curses, I was found out. Glad you thought it was well written, though.
4168482 Aw man, the grammar was one of the few things I was hoping was actually solid about this bizarre train wreck. Ah well, that's why you're supposed to get proof readers, after all.
Big Mac, you idiot. You dun goofed, now, boy.
I'll admit, I kept thinking the WHOLE TIME "Twilight... YOU CAN TELEPORT!"
And then it was all explained. Upvote!
I'm a sucker for some TwiMac.
And the faux rape thing was FABULOUS AND HILARIIOUS.
Really, screw those down voters.
Although i think you'd have a better reception (like featuring as this story is well worth it) if you had a cover image, the title was more peotic, the description alluded to it being fantastical sex and not real rape.
That's just my two-bits, sadly people judge a story by its cover.
BUT HOLY BALLZ THIS WAS AMAZING AND I UPVOTE, FAVORITE AND CAM LIKE THREE TIMES.
I do agree that a different title might help a lot - as it stands, it looks from the description and all that the title is a direct description, and that it doesn't go anywhere beyond that, while this really, really does.
Oh, and when are we gonna get "Twilight Sparkle Rapes Big Macintosh" as a sequel?
It threw me for a loop when I found out it was just kinky sex. But it was REALLY good. The transitions from the rape to encouraging Mac the gentle giant he is to continue even though its difficult for him. I loved this fanfic and I hope there's a sequel with Twilight going full on dominatrix! First time I read a MacXTwi clop. 10/10 for me!
I enjoyed reading this story
I think it deserves a much better rating than it currently has. Alas, it seems people really seem to judge a book by its cover... or its title in this particular case
... Sequel?
now im hot
I seriously LOLd at that.
Not often I feel compelled to comment on a clopfic, but this is really well-written (I wasn't paying much attention to the technical writing skill but apparently that was good enough to not bother me). The relationship stuff, the kink stuff, the handling of how kink plays out in particular... I was particularly pleased to see acknowledgement of the 'dominant''s need for a safeword, and a possible role-swap even for rape play. Not to mention ponies reaching their limits and having limits that run counter to their desires in the first place, having different limits to their libido and stamina, and taking care of each other when the scene was over.
Overall, I liked this very much.
Also, much amusement at Twilight topping from the bottom. More than one reason Mac's suggestion that she top from the top is a good one.
I jacked off SO hard to this, I know tmi but the point is I was disappointed when I found out it wasn't really rape... Very rarely do we get such a struggle in these fics this was beautiful I will favorite and use it a lot.... Thank you. And sorry for the tmi.
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on a side note i found out when searching the above image if you type the phrase 'shut up and take my upvote' into google and set it to only bring up line drawings you will find a picture of a colt forcefully face raping diamond tiara on the second line... was not expecting that....
The ending. Does that mean we're getting a sequel? Is Twi gonna violently ride the shit outta him?
Despite the name of this clopfic, it's actually a rape-play clopfic where both Twilight Sparkle and Big Macintosh do some sexual role-play. I have to say that this did a really nice job on not only clop scenes but the actual shown consent during clop such as safe words, character development, etc. Keep up the good work!
A surprisingly sweet fic, given the underlying premise.
Also, anal with no prep? then vaginal?
I hope the next story is Twilight's horrible Yeast infection.
4168438 Well, for my part I'm disappointed that I was promised a rape in the description and didn't get a real one. I mean it was funny and all, and I suppose the author wanted to make us apprehensive about Twilight's safety then surprise us, but when I get promised with a rape disclaimer, I expect to get an actual rape, not some pussy cop out.
Is this why people read my stories and then complain even though I put up a disclaimer? Because pussies like you have taught them that no means yes?
Anyway, you asked about the down votes, and that's my theory.
Wat?
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This.
Well done with this fic! It was perfectly executed.
Twilight you naughty little mare
Omg I love it 😂😂. But seriously. The struggle had my heart pounding. I have a very..active imagination and..holy shit. And I love the whole sudden twist 😂