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Darkryt Orbinautz
Still slowly trying to disentangle from MLP. It is ... slow going.
Darkryt Orbinautz
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Well well well, this should be good. Will read when I have some time later
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this sounds prmiesing hope for tommorow and se what would Twilight do?
Hmm, this story... it seems interesting, and I like the idea that the orbs are some kind of conversion chamber or something from what I've seen in how the story was going.
Wat.
What. 
What!? 
WHAT!? 
...if there's one thing I learned so far, it's that I'm hardly going to stop reading this. I was going to stop somewhere earlier in that sentence, but I decided not to.
Yeah man, update this!!
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Updated. Be arbitrarily happy now.
.......
wat
Okay... right, gonna have to down vote and stop reading this... seriously the amount of plot holes and pacing issues in this are far too plentiful to be contained as we all know Twilight wouldn't be stupid enough to let ANYONE be alone with Dash when SHE JUST FINISHED FUCKING EXPLAINING THAT FLUTTERSHY WAS ABLE TO HYPNOTIZE PEOPLE AND TURNED HER INTO THE SAME CREATURE SHE WAS!
I honestly can't enjoy a story that only can accomplish it's goals by making characters clutch the idiot ball to the point that it's a deus ex machina.
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I understand what you're saying here - and I don't like idiot balls or deus ex machinas either. But I suppose this falls under "Authorial Intent." The intent being that while Rainbow Dash did just explain all that, she was still behaving like Rainbow Dash. She seemed to still be herself. Whereas Fluttershy was certainly not behaving like herself, so that's why Twilight didn't exercise as much caution with Rainbow Dash as she did with Fluttershy, because she figured Dash's mind was still normal while Fluttershy's wasn't based on their behaviors.
But still ... failed execution is failed execution.
I'll try to do better next time. I hate idiot balls too.
4895344 Mate, I'm gonna be frank but, the fact that they only saw Fluttershy normal last night and she's ALREADY ACTING like that would let Twilight know not to trust Rainbow for any length of time and if someone DOESN'T STOP RAINBOW FROM EATING AND CONVERTING PINKIE PREFERABLY VIOLENTLY then there isn't any hope for this story as the deus ex machina would have tainted your story beyond salvation.
Authorial intent loses all validation when you say you don't want to use the idiot ball yet you give EVERYONE one to hold.
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Well, I certainly didn't intend to use a Ball for everyone, did I?
4895444 It does feel like it sadly. I mean everyone who wasn't a Lamia didn't even think about that?
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"Everyone who wasn't a Lamia" figured "Dash is tired, she needs rest. She won't get into trouble because she's too busy napping." And she was doing her best to cooperate when Fluttershy wasn't, so they didn't have much reason to doubt her.
And they do stop her from eating Pinkie next chapter, if that makes you feel any better.
4895566 Fine, I might as well see what happens next. Though if Twilight continues to clutch the idiot ball at this point then there isn't any hope for this story.
That lactation part was so hawt.
before i even atempt to read this story i just have to ask by "light(non-fatle) vore what do you mean that just confuses me is it the reguler you get eatin vore(whitch i highly doubt is non fatle) anal vore,or vaginal vore aka"unbirthing" bolth of wich kinda almost seem always fatle please elaborate beacuse the subject of vore can highly confuse and unsettle me again please explane when u can thank you
Annabell242~
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It's eating vore as "light vore" which is really better known as "soft vore," where there's vore, but written, changed, or altered in such a way as to be non-fatal. Which this story does. People get eaten in the story, but nobody gets digested.
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Thank you very much, sir! I try.
Snakewomen? I know a few guys who can take care of that. Probably.
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But seriously now, the story's shaping up pretty good. Keep it up!
Um, generally magicians escape the box because the box is built to be escapable...
But it's Pinkie so maybe she did just open a secret compartment in the coils to escape.
4902682 that or she is known for breaking the 4th wall from time to time
But this is an awsome read, i look forward to future updates
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Well, yes. I'm sorry. That bit didn't cross my mind. I was more just trying to describe that she somehow escaped despite the fact she really shouldn't have been able to.
Perhaps a comparison to Batman or James Bond would have been better.
i can tell that u have great talent in conveying the point across, and for describing in great detail what happens, can u make a squeal, or maybe an epilogue
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I didn't and don't have any plans for a sequel or epilogue.
But I have thought about maybe ret-conning the story back into the "Poison" continuity and then letting Tsukiko return in "Last Glass of Poison," which has a lot of open, undecided space in its plot and story at this point. But I wouldn't want Last Glass to be "buried in OC's" as the complaint goes.
4906447 although the whole oc thing, the poison thing sounds like it can be just like this story, am i right?
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Not entirely. The "poison thing" has a much darker tone and is much more an elaborate tapestry of story than this is.
4906512 forgive me for not using proper names, but, i dont mind reading anything dark, as long NOTHING bad happends to fluttershy
, but other than that i would be ok with anything else 
I hope that you considering rewriting this with snake people winning!
ps: make a sequel im sure you can out do yourself if you work hard on it.
pss: i think predetermined chapters is a good idea but you definitely need to pace it out more.
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Mmm, sorry. No. That doesn't sound like a very happy ending.
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Yes, I figured that pacing thing out myself. I had no plans for a sequel, and I could argue this is the sequel - or rather, a spiritual successor to my other Lamia-fic, "Shying Up To Sunsets."
4932163 would you consider my request at least... you were brilliant and you could make it into a trilogy i know its worthy of at least that, i would also be willing to help if need be.
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As much as I adore being praised ... I don't have that level of commitment for this.
Unlike other works I've written, I myself don't feel the need for a sequel. Some other stories I wrote I felt the need for sequels, because there were things unaddressed. There was more to be told. There was more to be had, and I ... just don't feel that way with this story. There was a lamia, we learned her name was Tsukiko and what she did and why, Shining Armor nearly killed her, she survived, she will likely have another adventure with Fluttershy and company in the future. The end.
As always when this happens - that people want a sequel and I don't particularly want to make one - I give free permission to anyone interested (including you, syndrose) to make your own.
4935055 thats pretty cool of you. usually with other stories (from other writers) i usually have to sign some papers to do so, copyright and all... go figure!
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Well, you still have to put "Based on/Sequel/Spin-off to Darkryt Orbinautz's With Honeyed Claws" somewhere, but other than that, yeah. Knock yourself out.
Let me know when/if you publish such a story.
It... Feels like ... I need.. To kill something
Nice story
Well, cripe.
You just can't get enough, can you? 
...still a better story than those stories with insane amounts of typos.
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... can't get enough what?
5120661 You can't get enough of... whatever it was in this story. new2.fjcdn.com/thumbnails/comments/And+then+rainbow+dash+got+rejected+by+applejack+oooooooooooooooooooooooooo+_045b826a37dcb0ad59dc08cd81b23fb8.gif
such amasink.
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... you mean the hypnosis?
5123936 I think so.
Then again, I'm not sure. 
... Oh goddess!
This is so... Awesome!
I'm personally wishing there was a sequal or a band of alternative endings or something. This was not only really hot it was nice, lengthy, and very well written. I absolutely love finding gems like these to.
Before reading this, just gotta ask. Did this come before you wrote shying up to sunsets, or after?
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After, though I don't remember my exact thought process ...
Heh...heh... OMG
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LOL
Oh I think she's gonna turn into a snake next.
That was too fast for that much time to go by!
Knew it!!!
Rarity got to the school just after the bell had rang, so she had to wade through a sea of leaving children to find her sister.
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This was the best I could find but I think you get my point.
My favorite fetish is milk so I was happy to see that.
Got a link to that poison series? 
Didn't even give Cadence a hello.
That sounded way too wrong. 😣
Oh I thought Fluttershy would use her thorn on her hand.
“FLUTTERSHY!” A masculine voice roared that Fluttershy recognized as Shining Armor. “We know you have Rarity in there! Come out with her unharmed, preferably not turned into a snake, and with your arms and tail where we can see them, and we won't have to get nasty.”
Thought we would finally get another sex scene so far there's too much story and not enough of it.
Fluttershy winced and froze, stopping the flow of aphrodisiac from her barbs.
Rarity whined, oblivious. “Nooo! Why'd you stop!?”
*disappointed aww"
Really?!
that's how your gonna do it?
Pffff 😆
yaaaaaaaaaaaaay she finally realizes not to repeat jokes!!
Oooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhh I never caught on to that!!
Oh I think I can see what's gonna happen.
Definitely enjoyed the happy ending
I really wonder though how she survived but I think she had the same reason as Missy did or The Charmed ones did. To get people off her tracks. But the snack could have communicated better to Fluttershy when they met.
Really liked the story but I really thought this was gonna be a clopfic