Fluttershy fails to appropriately use the buddy system, goes into the forest, and gets turned into a seductive snake-woman thing as a result. Kinky hijinks ensue.
It's eating vore as "light vore" which is really better known as "soft vore," where there's vore, but written, changed, or altered in such a way as to be non-fatal. Which this story does. People get eaten in the story, but nobody gets digested.
Well, yes. I'm sorry. That bit didn't cross my mind. I was more just trying to describe that she somehow escaped despite the fact she really shouldn't have been able to.
Perhaps a comparison to Batman or James Bond would have been better.
Twilight gave him a pitying look. She gestured for him to follow her. "Come on." She led him and Cadence up the stairs, to Rarity's guest room. Twilight opened the door and …
Didn't even give Cadence a hello.
Sweetie Belle was much too young to be having stomach-tentacle sex! Or sex with any kind of tentacles! Or stomachs! Especially not stomachs!
That sounded way too wrong. 😣
"Hmm." Fluttershy tapped her chin, idly wiggling her tail as she tried to think of something to make Rarity open her eyes. "Ah-ha!" She snapped her fingers, having an idea. Rarity had been surprised by Fluttershy slapping her, but she saw the ploy for what it was. However, what Fluttershy did next cause her to lose it. Not thinking, Rarity opened her eyes to scream at Fluttershy. "KINDLY REMOVE YOUR TAIL-"
Oh I thought Fluttershy would use her thorn on her hand.
When Fluttershy stopped for a minute, Rarity looked around the puddle of milk-fogged water she was now sitting in. “Fluttershy! That is … not what they mean … when they say “milk-bath!”
“FLUTTERSHY!” A masculine voice roared that Fluttershy recognized as Shining Armor. “We know you have Rarity in there! Come out with her unharmed, preferably not turned into a snake, and with your arms and tail where we can see them, and we won't have to get nasty.” Fluttershy winced and froze, stopping the flow of aphrodisiac from her barbs. Rarity whined, oblivious. “Nooo! Why'd you stop!?” *disappointed aww" Thought we would finally get another sex scene so far there's too much story and not enough of it.
“I WOULD, Twiley, but I can't cast a spell with her restricting my arms! Gah!”
Really?! that's how your gonna do it?
“Wow!” Pinkie Pie said. “Did you see the way they move through the dirt? They're like mermaids in water, but with dirt! Dirt mermaids! Dirtmaids!”
Pffff 😆
“No I'm not, I'm a chicken!” Pinkie chirped. “Wait. I think I did that joke already.”
yaaaaaaaaaaaaay she finally realizes not to repeat jokes!!
The vendor Fluttershy goes after and gives to Rainbow Dash for eating is the same as the one with the glasses in “Putting Your Hoof Down.” I figured he'd make a good victim with the whole “nerd stereotype” angle going on, so Fluttershy and Dash could seduce him easily.
Oooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhh I never caught on to that!!
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It's eating vore as "light vore" which is really better known as "soft vore," where there's vore, but written, changed, or altered in such a way as to be non-fatal. Which this story does. People get eaten in the story, but nobody gets digested.
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Thank you very much, sir! I try.
Snakewomen? I know a few guys who can take care of that. Probably.
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But seriously now, the story's shaping up pretty good. Keep it up!
Um, generally magicians escape the box because the box is built to be escapable...
But it's Pinkie so maybe she did just open a secret compartment in the coils to escape.
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But this is an awsome read, i look forward to future updates
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Well, yes. I'm sorry. That bit didn't cross my mind. I was more just trying to describe that she somehow escaped despite the fact she really shouldn't have been able to.
Perhaps a comparison to Batman or James Bond would have been better.
It... Feels like ... I need.. To kill something
Didn't even give Cadence a hello.
That sounded way too wrong. 😣
Oh I thought Fluttershy would use her thorn on her hand.
“FLUTTERSHY!” A masculine voice roared that Fluttershy recognized as Shining Armor. “We know you have Rarity in there! Come out with her unharmed, preferably not turned into a snake, and with your arms and tail where we can see them, and we won't have to get nasty.”
Fluttershy winced and froze, stopping the flow of aphrodisiac from her barbs.
Rarity whined, oblivious. “Nooo! Why'd you stop!?”
*disappointed aww" Thought we would finally get another sex scene so far there's too much story and not enough of it.
Really?! that's how your gonna do it?
Pffff 😆
yaaaaaaaaaaaaay she finally realizes not to repeat jokes!!
Oooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhh I never caught on to that!!