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Aegis Shield


Also known as "TtheWriter" on youtube, if you're into Dungeons and Dragons stuff. :3

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Fluttershy moonlights as a masked pianist at a local nightclub to pay a few extra vet bills. Known only to the patrons as the beautiful and mysterious "Piano Mare", they lavish her with love and coin each time she comes. But one night Big Macintosh and Rainbow Dash are in the club at the bar, and they spot her. Will they see through the flimsy ribbon mask? (Song Fic based around Billy Joel's "Piano Man", Rated T for implied filly-fooling)

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I kinda like this. Piano Man is one of my favorite songs of all time and is my go-to "i need a drink and a smile" song. bravo to you for such a well written piece.

I love this song, too. It just get's me in the chest every time. And with Fluttershy's compassion for others, it'd definitely be a heartfelt rendition.
Great story, the atmosphere was perfect as the song played. And I sang the lyrics as I read it. Fun that. Fluttershy is once again best pony :rainbowlaugh: For now :derpytongue2:

Ah, the power of allusion. Great job Az, I liked it.

Wait... how did Fluttershy get the hickie? From whom?
I mean I get she's the piano mare but who gave her the hickie?
I won't let it bug me, though. I really liked the story, fav'd.

337236 There's a span of time between the alleyway scene and when Dashie ended up in the library... :rainbowwild:

Beautiful, I'd say fucking awesome, but it seems far too uncouth for the excellence portrayed in this writing.

337581 Perhaps my other story, "Music of the Night", would be more to your taste, then. :twilightsheepish:

337677

No I'm saying it deserves an amazing rating, not that it wasn't fucking awesome, it was, but this story carried an elelment of grace that would be ruined by:
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There you go, I've ruined it XD anyway, I'mma go read your other story now...

Wow this was great. I normally don't really like song fics partly because the plots are often forced to fit the song, but you managed to blend them together very well. You also managed to adapt the song to the story. The ending was awesome too. 5/5. That is my 2 bits anyway.

339926 I'm glad you liked! If you'd prefer something larger, perhaps romance-oriented? I've done a rendition of Phantom of the Opera, starring Princess Luna. "Music of the Night" is my masterpiece, and its also a song fic, haha... :twilightsheepish:

339959 I suppose I have nothing against song fics, it just that the majority of one I have read are not very good. I will read "Music of the Night" because I know you are a good author. I have also read"Fluttershy Fury" which I enjoyed.

340232 Oh cool! Be sure to leave a word or two on what you thought of it at the end! :pinkiehappy::heart:

Another Great Story, Cleff. :pinkiesmile:

Absolutely fantastic!

Whenever I hear this song it brings up a tightness in my chest, like I want to laugh and cry at the same time. You have replicated that magnificently. Now I will never be able to listen to piano man without thinking about the Blue Parasprite. For me, this song and story will always pull on my heartstrings, no matter how much I read/hear it.

:flutterrage: :rainbowlaugh: :eeyup:

Now I will think of this fic every time I hear that song. Someone should make a PMV with your words in it.

708454 I would be watching/listening to that every sunday should someone make it because sundays are slow and dull.

This is a glorious fic Aegis Shield and should somepony let me know how I will track you. :raritywink:

Good Story. Big Mac and Rainbow spewing cider at the mention of their names was funny.

Oh on a off topic note: I'm looking for another story. Its about monster hunters working for Celestia. I don't know what its called but anyone with info on it would be greatly appreciated.

Wait. "Some dance to remember, some dance to forget"? You sneaky bastard, I see what you did there...

This has got to be one of my favourite stories. I love the song 'Piano man' and I think it fits in with the story really well.

:yay:Cute, sweet and with a perfect open ending. :rainbowkiss:
:duck:You sir are my no.1 fimfiction writer and you keep delivering pure awesome :raritywink:

OH I see what you did there!!, now Twilight is the only pony who knows!!!

I think I have a new favorite song now!:pinkiehappy: And a new favorite pony!:yay:

Billy Joel is fucking win

Welp. A good find here. New favorite to read again in the future, be it near or far. Hopefully near. :pinkiehappy:

And thanks to this fic, got a new song to listen to. Thank you, dear author. :twilightsmile:

Someone please, actually sing Piano man with these lyrics. I'd love ya if you did (no homo)

This totally needs a sequel... hehe, poor Dashie - all these thoughts running round in her head and no way to know if its true or not :rainbowlaugh:

Amazing story about one of my favorite songs :twilightsmile:

That was AMAZING!! I Love That Song!!!! :yay::yay::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

It needs like, another story, she shouldn't reveal her identity though. I like the 'secret fluttershy' maybe everyone should have a little 'secret' :ajsmug::duck::yay:

Beautiful as always, Aegis. That's one of my favorite songs, and you melded it so well with the story! Bravo!:yay:

That was a very nice story to read. It was quite the change of pace from what I am used to reading. I liked the little bits of comedy sprinkled throughout the story. I am looking forward to reading more from you in the future. Keep up the great writing!

My favorite song, now with ponies! Ageis, you did it again!

Hahaha! I actually had this song come on while reading this. A good story I think. Both amusing and tugs at the old feelings.

This was a sweet and hilarious story, but I hope that a full story was written about what happened between RD and Twilight that caused her to learn that lesson about money.
And if not, that story needs to get written.

I think Twilight got some last night, don't you?

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