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Aegis Shield


Also known as "TtheWriter" on youtube, if you're into Dungeons and Dragons stuff. :3

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Ha. Ha. Haha. Hahahahahahaha! That was hilarious. I saw that coming actually, but funny all the same. Keep on writing!

I need more stories about horn lasers.

I thinks the title's a bit misleading

I love stories about misunderstandings like this. Very well done.

Ha, not bad, not bad at all.

Rainbow's like; :rainbowderp:

Then Twilight's like; :twilightoops:

Then Fluttershy's like; :fluttercry:

Then they're all like; :rainbowhuh: :facehoof: :yay:

Sorry, not really feeling it. This exact joke has already been done by the show.

The bit about the horn laser was pretty good, though.

If that's her NORMAL chiropractic method for tougher animals and ponies, I'd think twice about coming to her. But then, who can say no to Fluttershy? Plus... can't argue with results.

That was pretty amusing. :pinkiesmile:

us or her twilight? US OR HER?! :rainbowderp::twilightoops:

>>>>>"Fluttershy could turn anypony or animal into dough in her hands."
>>>>To dough in her hands.
>>>Her hands
>>Hands

WAT

:derpyderp2: All of my derp

Amusing little one-shot. I've had my chiropractor basically twist me into knots to get some of the spine kinks to re-align, so I can imagine what that might look like to an outside observer; and we know that Dash tends to make snap judgements from time to time. Nice touch with the "horn laser" comment, though given what we saw for the season finale with Pinkie and Twilight, I'd say that at some point she rethought her stance on offensive unicorn magic, so this fits right into canon. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Twilight_Sparkle_lolface.png

Although, as someone else mentioned, I didn't know that Fluttershy had hands. Are they some special removable item that she puts on her hooves before starting a chiropractic session? dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/sillyfilly_Fluttershy.png

I will never visit a chiropractor because of reading this....... :rainbowderp:

268762 Horn lasers now canon, says Season 2 finale! :heart:

Very funny one shot. Really made me chuckle quite a bit. Can't help but think it might've been entertaining to see Pinkie rather then Rainbow be the one to discover the 'murder' and then have to deal with it in a serious fashion but regardless of my personal feelings really enjoyed this. Favorited and archived on my Kindle.

Rainbowdash?!?!
Phillies?!?!

>Rainbow Dash
>Fillies

:ajsleepy::facehoof::raritydespair::fluttershbad::rainbowhuh::pinkiesick:

Yeah, the hands thing is a pretty easy mistake to make. Not many are used to writing about sentient cartoon horses. :pinkiecrazy: Just all the more reason to run a find and replace in your chosen word processor. Other than that, cute and funny. In character even.

Pinkamena Diane Pie has got nothing on Fluttershy:pinkiecrazy::flutterrage:

Stay out of her shed! :rainbowlaugh:

This was lots of fun. :pinkiehappy:
Even your older stories are great. :scootangel:

A half bald Fluttershy would be an interesting sight, I'm not sure if my heart could take it though. :fluttercry:

excellent story! makes me wonder why Twi never did anything when seeing Shy do that to the bear that episode

was wonderin’ if you could help me like you did for Big Macintosh all those weeks ago?

some reason this makes me think of the show King of the Hill. Dales wife with John Redcorn giving her a 'message' for her 'headaches'

you will RUN FROM MEEEEE!!!!!!!:flutterrage:

:twilightoops: umm...wow...

Funny but a little weird too.

Rainbow Dash and Twilight just made me facepalm so much in this story... :facehoof:
It was very funny! I liked it! :rainbowlaugh:

Fluttershy could turn anypony or animal into dough in her hands

what are these hands you speak of? :rainbowhuh:

This was funny. Loved the cupcakes reference by the way.

Hey, you know, your story somewhat inspired me to write a similar story where Sunset Shimmer thinks she heard EQG Fluttershy murder EQG Rainbow Dash. Hopefully, you'll check it out.

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