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Aegis Shield


Also known as "TtheWriter" on youtube, if you're into Dungeons and Dragons stuff. :3

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Princess Luna falls comatose and is revived by the love-sick kiss of one of Celestia's guards. As a reward, she leads him to the ancient hidden barracks of her long forgotten guardian force. Their slowly blossoming romance gives birth to a breed of royal guard not seen in 1,000 years. The Lunar Stallions!

Chapters (11)
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Comments ( 502 )

I demand you write more!

I am sufficiently entertained! You shall write more!

In all seriousness, there's something really quite enjoyable in the writing style. Jolly good fun reading it. Plus, Aegis's character is interesting, and the fact that he is a gelding presents an opportunity for a unique take on a relationship. He'll probably be a bit ostracised by his peers for his actions and the new post of Lunar Guard.

As a variant of Lunar Stallion myself, I find the idea of an origin story fascinating.

This is great. Love this story :heart:

Nice job, this is very interesting.

Mostly
Obsessed
Reading
Eagerly

So far,

Slight spelling errors, "noone" becoming "none".

Grammar, cannot find any faults.

Story, AMAZING, your description of Luna, your thoughts on how the guards are formed, all brilliant.

I hate giving number scores for what i read, i prefer to let others decide for themselvs. But i will say if i would reccomend the story. And i would most definitly reccoment d this story.

This story is THETWILIGHTSPARK approved.

All of my yes. :heart:

I like this story, and I like where this is going.
Please, do write more. You know if that's ok...:yay:

I'd have to agree with the above.

MORE!!! :flutterrage:

If that's alright, of course. :yay:

457215 theres another in my faves called that sweet sensation if u want to read anonther luna romance fic its good to see there are luna fics that are not all death or evil or sad :twilightsmile:

this is starting to seem a little less romance like

On a side note:

Where do i sign up for the lunar stallions?

I mean look at me ive got armour already.

I'm wondering if/when we will be getting a second lunar stallion (Luna did have two pulling her Nightmare Night chariot after all). Maybe the guard from chapter 1 who got kicked off his post by Celestia?

459830 I just wanted to take the time to establish everything, and all the rules that the lunar stallions go by. The romance part is coming up in the next part, promise. :rainbowwild::heart:

I like it so far. Wait for the next Chapter and Track!:twilightsmile:

Brilliant chapter, I really enjoyed it. Lunar Stallions are awesome :rainbowdetermined2:

I'm loving this so much.:yay:

Please sir, can I have some moar?

U GOOD SIR GET A MY :yay:s

is every chapter gonna have the word thy in it?

462074 Yep. It's Luna's Story, after all.

Oh, my... Naughty Luna, you...

Finally a story with Luna as a main character :pinkiehappy:

If you give use more I will give you 5 fluttershys:fluttershysad::yay::yay::yay::yay:

She's got the hots for him:ajsmug:

it would bad if they want to get more intimate since he is gelded, unless the night guard armor gives him his bits back since in the oath lust is mention so i guess the night guard did not get gelded.

Okay not to be nick-picky, but the proper form of the title should be "Defend Thine Honour" because its showing possesion of an abstract noun. Just thought id let you know, i studied middle english for a while.

Hmmm... Some one is being naughty.

man I really new that new chapter coming along soon :flutterrage:

MOAR BOAR WANTS MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR:flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage:

I really like this story so far especially since the characters are all believable and interesting. Keep up the good work!

M-O-R-E M-U-X-I-X N-E-E-D M-O-R-E

lolol awksauce........... :trollestia:

Good start....was afraid this would devolve into something I wouldn't read.....never thought I'd be glad to know what the word gelding means.

Oh man, how much more awkward can you get?

Seriously, these guys must be getting paid millions or something to willingly take a job that requires them to get castrated. Also why would :trollestia: want to physically handicap her own guards? Low testosterone would cause loss of muscle mass, weight gain and poor stamina, kind of important things for a soldier. :ajbemused:
Now with that said...
MOAR!!! :flutterrage:

Don't geldings just get their balls chopped off, and not the whole package? I mean, that's where the testosterone is produced, so there's no real need to cut everything off. Although, I guess it makes for better context in the story.

About time for a an Upload damnit, Impressive as always ya better keep them coming fella

Technicly spaeking, geldings dont get their balls chopped off, just the tubes connecting he balls to th rest of the body, it causes the same effect, but the gelding can still theoreticly get a "boner" as it were.

468462 Most of the research I've looked at says the testes can be removed, yes, and that it makes the stallion much calmer and well-behaved to suit his work vocation. As far as the... length, I'm not sure. I can only research so much horse virility online before I gotta stop for a few days. :pinkiesick:

I'm interested to see how you're going to deal with the fact that Aegis is a gelding. Particularly given that so far Luna's attachment to him is almost purely physical. Not to say that it won't cause problems further down the line, it certainly will, but given how their relationship is starting it's going to cause enough problems even now.

That aside, fantastic story. Keep up the good work :moustache:.

470751 Yeah, but the road goes both ways. The armor inspires his lust as well, even though he's technically incapable. With no sex there's greater opportunity for a more unique romance story. As close as you can get to clop without BEING clop can be interesting too. Its like tasteful lingerie without ever seeing the woman naked. :pinkiehappy::heart:

It just seems like something will have to change in the future. Particularly with how sexually charged their relationship is right now. I mean, yeah the armor ramps up his emotions, but at the end there he wasn't wearing it anymore. That was all him. The last time he almost jumped her, as soon as the armor came off it was like he jumped into a cold shower. This time he didn't even break stride so to speak.

I definitely like it as an element in the story, particularly given that you're trying to build a relationship between a near immortal goddess and a normal soldier. There's a lot of emotional depth to explore there. But it just seems unrealistic that it would work in the long run unless something drastic changes before the end of the story. Relationships have to have an emotional AND a physical component to work long term. Completely cutting out either one will end up making this story some sort of bittersweet unrequited love thing at best.

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