Aegis Shield is a writing pony, a Lunar Stallion for Princess Luna's private guard. He doesn't publish everything he writes, though. Let's have a peek into his scrap basket and see what he's been hiding...
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- Member Since 26th Feb, 2012
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Aegis Shield
Also known as "TtheWriter" on youtube, if you're into Dungeons and Dragons stuff. :3
Aegis Shield
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Oho... THIS looks intriguing...
So, meta!
I wonder if Luna knows about this...
Maybe there will be a few more stallions in Season 3? Who knows.
That was entertaining though, and I agree with Chaodiurn, I wonder if Luna knows Aegis was writing either their 'experiences' together, or creating his own little fantasies.
Interesting idea.
[Insert seal of approval]
Oh, this ought to be good... *marks for reading*
Edit: I would read a story like this so hard...
That explains the dissaperence of this story for your account.
Please more?
Also you know we will want you to resurrect some of these eventually right?
Story Deja vu. Where have I read this before?
You're just torturing us now aren't you? A bunch of first chapters to what would undoubtedly be awesome stories which will unfortunately never see the light of day.
You big troll you.
How about we find out what its like working for Celestia. It could be from a guard's POV. Like he/she rises from the lowest position to Capt. Shining Armor, perhaps?
Killing people quietly and not making a big deal of it. The exact opposite of a Spartan. Sounds pretty interesting to me.
Yeah, I can understand how it would be pretty hard. I wouldn't even be able to imagine how he would meet applejack and the relationship between the characters.
"We was a big fan of things like Forgotten Realms, The Wheel of Time, and certainly Harry Trotter and World War Z."
.............. "The Wheel of Time"
.............. OH thank Celestia I'm not alone! I was starting to think that I was the only one left in the world who even knew what the heck "The Wheel of Time" was! No one else I have ever conversed with besides my dad has even heard of it! Oh, and i think this story could have been great if continued. Oh well.
Now what would be cool is if you wrote about Spartan Shield and Ninja Star going at it, quite similar to the Spartan vs. Ninja episode of Deadliest Warrior!
Grammar Nazi Powers, ACTIVATE! Form of a Grammar Nazis, go!
"He reaching, noisily unwrapping his night’s first moon pie." No, no, no! Write it like this. "Reaching, he noisily unwrapped his night's first pie." In fact, you never did say where he was reaching.
"She ventured forth only occasionally, when the sun touched the mountains of Canterlot, until she was tired in the night." ...until she was tired in the night??? Try this, "...until she grew tired at the end of the night." Not the best I know, but this way the sentence just dosn't drop off.
"Occasionally stop a falling terracotta pot from creaming somepony." stopping
Whew! I must say that was some fun. I think I need a cigarette after that.
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....zzz.*snrk* huh? Wa..what? O..oh uhh, oh yah. Form of a, uh, of a...grammar...porcupine...er...something...
"We was a big fan of things like Forgotten Realms, The Wheel of Time, and certainly Harry Trotter and World War Z." He Unless you're saying he's writting in the Ubonics style.
"He had a meager little bookshelf in his apartment, not full of books but certainly lovingly cared for." Also, he had a...
"Emerging out into the practice field, she saw Soarin’ stuffing his face on a sideline." onto Could have sworn we already had a discussion about the differences between emerging onto something and entering into something else. Must be my imagination.
"“Goodbye, Spitfire…” he said, wilting at her as she turned to go." Get rid of 'at her' because 'wilting' is the action he's performing as she turns away from him, and don't forget to put a comma after 'wilting'.
Ok, now where was I? Oh yah
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SOMEONE GET THAT MAN A RAPE WHISTLE
Why was this scrapped? You usually list a reason for scrapping it.
1057319 Too many projects right now, I don't wanna burn myself out.
Hope that this will get more later.
Well..... This was an...... interesting read. I think I'm gunna go re-read Luna's Story.
*shudders*
Changlings........
Well, I'll just post here what I was going to with the first chapter. Funny thing actually; when I finally came up with what I wanted to say, and hit "Add Comment," the circle just kept turning. At first I thought the site was just having problems (again). But I edit-cut the comment, hit the "back" button, and the story didn't exist anymore!
"… and what was that hanging from the ceiling."
Is there suppose to be a question mark at the end of that? Also, I still don't understand the answer to that question. Was that the bed before it got lowered?
I'm all for sex scenes when they fit into the story, whether it's touching like the end of SS, wild like the beginning of Nuptials, or creepy like Diaries of a Teenage Foalsitter (and I'm guessing here as well). But the situation feels kind of slapdash. Not much tension, and not as easy or engrossing to read as your other works.
If you're going to make an "alternate universe" fic, you need to firmly establish how it's different. If it was her goal all along to sieze Shining, and not the Capital, why have her changelings attack the capital. She got away by absorbing the build-up of love magic within Cadence. Did she plan on Twilight breaking her out?
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This is a bit...violent.
[Aegis Shield: One point of canon I must uproot it about Ponyville. According to canon Ponyville is maybe 100 years old at most. In this story, Ponyville is much, MUCH older than that. Nothing else is different, just the age of the town itself.]
Actually if you ever read Urban Moose's The Stranger and Her Friend, you'll find that the Ponyville of Twilight's time wasn't the first.
To our loyal subjects.
An unprovoked attack most cowardly and foul has occured in our borders of Equestria by Crysalis and her forces. Who this Crysalis is, we do not know at this time, but rest assure we will find out.
This attack has struck several high ranking members including Shining Armor, a highly respected officer of the Royal Guard who was taken from us , His wife Princess Cadence(Beloved Wife of said Shining Armor) and most importantly My sister, Princess Celestia.
To Twilight Sparkle: We owe deepest thanks and deepest Apologizes to her. It was she who saw the dangers,. It was she tried to raise a warning and she was repulsed much to our reget.
As of this moment Equestria is a nation at war. How? Why? Doesn't matter. This attack upon our peoples and it leaders will not go unanswered. We must strike such a fear into the hearts and mind of Crysalis' and her peoples so great that never will they think about attacking us in anyshape or form.
So i'm calling upon all ponies from every walks of life in our fair Equestria to walk into the recruiting offices and take up arms againsts this most evil enemy. We princesses/Goddess are with you.
Signed Princess Luna. Co ruler of Equestria. Goddess of the night
Big Macintosh. The stallion who could pull a house, running speed, across town, struggles to pull down a giant dead tree?
Hrm.
And that would have been difficult. Interesting to read, though
I was sad to see this one go.
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So, does this mean I finally get to use my special talent, without having friends and family to fear me, because if so, I'm in.
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Princess Luna approaches Warhorse_Legend and says: "Sign here, Mortal."
"I'll assume i don't have to go thru the long and boring process of explaining why thou is signing on and what my sister and i expect from thee?"
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*Warhorse signs the paper and puts it on the table.* "Just tell me what you want me to do"
Luna: "We fight and if necessary......................Die".
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Oy you two. Remember what Knighty says about RP in the comments section. I don't want you guys to get in trouble.
We're just fucking around, Aegis.
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Sorry Aegis, but your stories are so good! This is what they do too me!
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Warhorse:First to fight, last to die.
Although, this little screwing around could make for a good story. I would write it (even with my terrible story telling and writing level) but if you rather wouldn't since it's kinda based off one of you stories, or would rather write it is up to u.
Shame you didn't continue it, seeing the interaction between fame dazzled rainbow dash and weary Spitfire would have been really interesting. Also much like in the Spartan story you have someone who needs to earn a living with few transferable skills...
The fact that Big Mac should be instantly recognized would fit perfictly as a Superman allegory. Don't be silly Scootaloo, Big Mac can't be super stallion, super stallion doesn't wear a yoke.
Y U QUIT
Hmmm.... I remember seeing this one around the time the RL hammer landed on my head. Given the other stories you were working on at the time, I can see why you back-burnered this one. You're leaping way off the canon path with this story, and I can see where it's going end up needing a mass of Changeling biology exposition to pull off the story correctly, and that's a mass of work to pull off. If Chrysalis' primary goal was acquiring a strong male breeding partner, and the whole invasion was a secondary objective, you'd have to put in some time with backstory to explain why things were allowed to progress to the point they did in canon. You'd be spending a lot of work setting up just why Chrysalis didn't abscond with Shining Armor much sooner, and in a way that didn't have the whole of Canterlot in such a paranoid furor over a potential threat. This is not to say that I doubt you couldn't give us a worthy plot line for it, but as you've said, you've got a lot of projects higher on the priority list for now. Here's hoping that you come back to it sometime, I see... potential dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Queen_Chrysalis.png
This'd be a good one shot if you continued it. You're probably right about it not having a series in it though.
Still, it's interesting as it is.
Was this story going to be about Equestria going to war so enough souls could be sent to Tartarus to keep War from waking?
It would have been interesting to see where the story went, because I read and loved the first two. But I can understand why you want to leave it at the two and not add a third.
Hey I was reading that!
Sad face...
Aww...
I wish this continued
What? How could you?
In the words of so many before me:
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Ooooohhhhhhhhhhhhh you are EVIL!!! If there was one series I was shitting myself in anticipation for, it was this! BUCK! It feels liek Season three of Pony was canceled. *FUCKINGSADFACE*