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READING THIS FOR LIVESTREAM-oh shit too long.
Eh... a bit too saccharine for my tastes. There's romance, and then there's bubbly waifu schmoopy-doo stuff. Still, well written, all in all.
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Thanks. I don't claim to be an expert at this, but it's good to know my effort is good enough.
javascript:smilie('');javascript:smilie('');javascript:smilie(''); happy lives. Fluttershy is lucky to be with him. :3
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Celestia dammit, Geo!
Beat that, sugarcube.
: What is this place, filled with so many wonders; casting its spell that I am now under?
Sorry. Couldn't resist.
Congratulations, Fluttershy! You're the new George Takei.
Old joke is old. Sorry!
dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Discord.png : Oh noes! Haywick made Angel Bunny want to reach for the brain bleach! How terrifying!
The thing with Angel being under the bed at the end was bucking priceless!!!!!!
I would like to hear more about each and all of the couples. I mean...... if you want to continue writing that is?
Angel is gonna need some serious therapy after this.
3910397 I think Fluttershy forgot to kick him out and Angel's traumatized by this entirely.
Besides the few minor mistakes I found while reading... I got to say it's a sweet loving story.
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Mistakes such as... what, exactly?
I can't fix them if people don't point them out!
After reading the entire story (and I must say, good job), I only found one problem
That hang should be a hanging, mate.
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Fixed. Thanks, and thanks for the nice comment!
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No problem.
Are you sure the human tag should be there, with the mentions of hooves and whatnot?
Anyway, I don't see many clopfics like this. I usually see the ones that have ponies do it just to do it. But I really like stories where the ponies actually show some curiousity about what they are about to do, as well as concern for each other. Most that I read have the characters doing it roughly and making it seem like it doesn't even hurt the mare for the first time, which seems kinda unrealistic, after having looked up information about sex and how it feels for girls (because I have a story planned as well).
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John and Geo are both humans.
Also, thanks for the comment — I like to try and add a pit of story to my clop.
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Oh... I must have missed something. I don't remember any indication that they were humans, unless I'm just being stupid.
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This story is part of a (very long) HiE series.
'I nodded and followed Fluttershy outside, closing the door behind is.' *behind us* also, was Fluttershy's alteration of speech intentional when she was talking about not knowing what to do for Haywick?
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'Alteration of speech?'
Elaboration, please.
'Wow," she breathed. "I've never seen a stallions... penis before." She spoke the word 'penis' as though it was foreign to her. "I-I'm not sure I'll w-what to d-do when it c-comes to o-oral." *I-I'm not sure I'll KNOW w - what to do . . . * My bad, not an alteration of speech, just a word left out. :)
Ship it like Fedix, SHIP IT!
Why is there a human tag? When the main characters of the clopfic are ponies?
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Because humans appear in it.
Uh... The hymen breaking isn't what makes it hurt... There are no nerves in the hymen for you to be able to feel it.
Are we gonna see a JohnxApplejack clop?