Prince Geo has been dispatched to the Gryphon lands on royal business while his wife, Princess Twilight Sparkle, has been left behind in Canterlot. Also going with the Prince are Spike, who will be the couple's primary source of communication and Geo's friend John, who is only going along for a change of scenery.
While Geo is attending to his duty, a letter from Twilight arrives — which explains in clear detail what she is going to expect from her husband when he gets home. Spike and John, seizing the chance to have some fun, decide to write a letter back to the desperate mare... which results in all three males getting a surprise.
AUTHOR'S NOTES
Reading the other stories in the 'Geoverse' is NOT required to understand and/or enjoy this one!
Many, many thanks to Mikazuchi for the idea!
Awesome job, I am proud to have been a part of this.
sorry bro, didn't like this that much.
dick move mostly by spike.
Not gonna down vote.
they are sooooo dead...
Dat grin.
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John: So what are you calling the act?
: The Aristocrats!
Yeah…hate the idea, not funny dude, not funny at all, it was horrible and I imagine Twilight must be fell terrible for what she just did, bottom line…no, not your best…
You know what, no, in my opinion it was horrible, mark him, put him under his will, RAPE him! For the love, you just RAPE him god, I…I just couldn't read after 'I want to be your servant' I just skip over hopping the air will be clear before something horrible happen, that ending…no…it not compensate.
The idea of the safe word and being dominated could had work WHEN BOTH PARTIES AGREE, LITTLE IMPORTANT DETAIL, If not its just plain down right RAPE,
If someone like it, fine, I will not judge but asking me, it was a complete zero, sorry but you had done some REALLY good job, and this…this is not Geo, this is just one horrible creepy pasta and I don't like that.
With that out of the way I hope…no BEG please don't let this abomination be cannon with your story PLEASEEEEEE,
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This comment deserves to be answered in a blog post.
my laptop just jumped off my lap.
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I must have done something right then.
It was alright not bad but alright, but it was funny at the end
I can only picture Twilight's reaction when she finds out it was Spike and John who set this up.
My guess is that she'll do some of this stuff to them in the non sexual 'I am going to kill you both' way. And Geo will watch with a huge smile on his face while he tries to tend to the burn on his ass.
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Oh but she's royalty now and can get some pros to show her how its done.
I can just see Luna, the OLD SCHOOL GODDESS -who's mindset is still back in the days of that as the primary Justice system- who would gladly loan her some of her special guards...
I am sure they can have Twi and Luna kick back with a tub of popcorn as they demonstrate on John and Spike just where her techniques had been lacking...
3971574 Amen to that.
You know Geo being locked in the dungeon is least of John and Spike's worries cuase when AJ and Rarity get thier hooves on those two, well I for don't want to think about it, oh nice bit with Flash at the end by the way.
I'm not really surprised Cadence had the outfit. Heck, I bet Rarity has a special selection at the Boutique, in the back room.
I bet the Princesses can offer some tips, heh heh.
Why is everyone thinks that Rarity its a dominatrix?!! she is generosity for pit sake! She GIVES, not punish, I imagine her more of the kind and wanted to make sure their partners enjoy not get greedy and insane, the fact that she is a bit spoil and snob don't make her a sadist not one bit.
Also, thanks it really help with some BIG fears I had
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Both a certain greed and a certain habit of letting others work for her own ends (just think of Spike) have always been part of Rarity's character. The Mane Six are not Mary Sues. All of them have vices and weaknesses, and most of the time their weakness is exactly the opposite of their respective Element. Twilight embodies Friendship, but she is socially awkward and can be controlling and obsessive at times. Rarity embodies Generosity, but she can be greedy and possessive. Pinkie embodies Laughter, but there are hints that she might have a tendency toward depression and maintains her cheerful attitude in order to deal with it. It's subtle, but I think she also has a tendency to set expectations too high for herself (probably for that very reason). Just think of what happens almost every time when she realizes she can't make everyone smile. Rainbow Dash embodies Loyalty, but she is the most individualistic and judging of the group (which sometimes makes me think that she should have been Honesty and AJ should have been Loyalty). Applejack embodies Honesty, and while it is true that she isn't a good liar, she has trouble to honestly admit when she needs help. Fluttershy's case is the most odd one. She embodies Kindness, but to such a ridiculous extent that it turns what is supposed to be her virtue into a weakness. Fluttershy is precisely at her best when she manages to drop her shyness and take a more assertive stance. In other words, in Fluttershy's case virtue and vice are almost inverted.
That said, I don't know if you have any experience in that area, but it's simply not true that a dominatrix can't be kind or generous. Seeing all dominatrixes as greedy, egoistic, aggressive, or insane is a HUGE misconception.
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Really? because well dominatrix are usually associated with wipes and…well domination of the partner so I though they had either a sadistic side or…that thing when they want to control everyone (sorry forgot the name for that)
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Well, things like control and physical pain are often part of D/s relationships, of course. But in a healthy D/s relationship, the submissive partner also enjoys this, and he or she can interrupt and refuse consent at any time. D/s relationships may look weird to outsiders, but they can be just as loving as any other kind of relationship. Different people simply have kinks for different things.
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Oh yeah I heard of those and I'm complete ok with that like you say people, simple have their taste, I just hate when they put D relationship as bad people that do what they do no matter what happen, and just force the situation into happening. Like you say its a consensual thing, and even if it something of the moment I imagine couple that enjoy this kind of things plan ahead for them or tell that it happen and develop system or something like that.
No just boom whip and domination whatever you like it or not, you don't just simple had sex with someone whatever the other is willing or not right? no because that is call rape, and they think just a latex making ok and not rape.
But yeah I see your point, sure Rarity because of her virtue and lacks could be both dominate or dominatrix (can go either way) but making her so aggressive, I think that is passing a bit don't you agree?