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Fluttershy thought all this vampire pony nonsense was over but when Apple Jack showed her that apple… The beast within felt like taking over. Confining herself to her cottage, Fluttershy refuses to see anypony but her beloved bunny, Angel, out of fear of rejection.
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Nice reference with the title.
I am offended that this is not a TwiShy. You do wrong Seri, you do wrong.
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Thanks! It was my friend's idea.
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I didn't want to do a romance.
3712686 SEEEEEEEEEEEQQQQQQQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEllllllllllllll
A very cute little story.
3712769 NNNNNnnNNNNOOOOOOOOOOooooooooooo TwiShy is an amazing thing! I'm so glad there was none,
Edit: to clarify, I'm glad there was no twishy. And I dislike it, miswording fouled me up.
3713937 You saying my Serina's story was not good enough for TwiShy?
You win everything with that title.
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Thank you!
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Thank ToixStory
Interesting.
The new existence— acceptance achieved.
May the vicious fall into darkness and begone.
Excellent work, dear Author!
Heck yes! I loved this story! Flutterbat is best pony!
3715013 I dislike Twishy. Or any main 6 pairing. It cheapens their friendship.
3717678 Depends how it is approached, most choose the cheap "Oh I have a crush I cant seem to find the courage to act on" approach.
Keep an open mind child.
DAMMIT 502 ERROR!!!
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What sorcery is this?! This is the first comment I see from you that isn't 100% yellow!
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Oh, hello there!
That's because it isn't me speaking. That's Tenko.
3717678 Amen
Very nice story. Yay for Flutterbat.
MORE MOORE MOOOOOORE
and apples on the sides please
3717699 Sure, kid. But I'm afraid I'll still disagree.
3724804 I am sure not thinking is bliss my son, keep riding that horse I suppose.
3727059 I do think, I've not told you you can't cognitively function, let's please not throw insults. I disagree for multiple reasons, but this is my last comment on the subject- regardless what you say next. The author doesn't need spam.
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Thanks for commenting and taking your time to do some corrections on my story! I took most of your advice and fixed almost everything and I have a few answers to your questions!
It makes sense in the way of that she can't really lose control anymore. Not like she did last time. That's explained at the end. She just is so afraid of losing control that she fears what she doesn't know, really.
I can. With what she went though. Think about it. Pinkie probably exagratted the crap out of it to Fluttershy on the walk back to the barn or Ponyville where Fluttershy became terrified of the image of her being like that. So when she realized she craved apples like before she was terrified. The bats link back to a bad incident. A incident where she attacked her friends as a "monster."
They're upset because she's not embracing her gift of being a vampire fruit pony. She apologized for doing something that was natural for them to do.
Baby bats. This is totally headcannon but I think they act nuts when they first feed, that's why it causes such disaster for farmers. They eat every fruit in sight until they get full then they don't act crazy anymore.
Hope that helps!
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Gah more work. I'll have to look over the story and see if I can squeeze anything in!
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Hm, alright. I suppose if anyone get's confused they could always ask me.
if only this could become a series...
3728437 wow. This deserves a gold star. Good job.
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I can't start another multi chapter story! I can't!
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Thank you!!!
3744846 aw man this woulda been a good multi chapter story
well it seams some one was in my equestria and was stalking fluttershy to write this
That was a good story. It was nice to see Fluttershy learn to control her Flutterbat side.