One night, some time after the incident with the vampire fruit bats, Applejack decides to take a late night walk in her orchard. What she wasn't expecting was to find Fluttershy there...And much less a Fluttershy that has red eyes, bat wings and fangs, and that seems fixated on eating certain apples Applejack always has on her. Applejack is forced to defend herself from the feral vampire pegasus, but can she do that to her best friend?
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and the second fic to come from flutterbat....
damn. fluttershy out for blood for some reason.
though that is a bit of a question. does she simply have fangs or is there still some vampire left in her?
After Applejack got up and went through her day she wearily layed down to rest.
"Why am I so darn outta energy, I didn't do that much today."
She checked her cutie mark where Fluttershy had bitten before she went to bed.
The wound had completely healed.
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Later that night she woke up, unable to find sleep and had a sudden craving for apples, her red eyes scanned the apple trees outside her window and decided to go for a peaceful walk out in the orchard...
3698021 Just the second? Huh, yay for me then!
Yes! I have been waiting for this type of story since the episode aired. THANK YOU SOOO MUCH!
Nice daww there at the end between the two.
Definitely rushed and a simplistic/reflexive with the details, but otherwise not bad.
3699458 As a non-native english speaker, I can be really simplistic on details, but I do as best I can.
3699644 No worries, written english is unnecessarily complicated. Though I will say for a non-native writer you have a good grasp of it, the grammar and stuff was fine, it simply lacked a certain flair that comes with complete mastery; if that makes any sense.
BATS IS MY FAV EPISODE EVER!!!!!!!!!!
This was great. I really loved the ending between Applejack and Fluttershy. It showed that even though Fluttershy may be a supernatural creature, she can still feel and even cry. You made it so that Fluttershy's transformation is cannon, but she is still Fluttershy and that there is still hope for her. Very well done.
Short and sweet. Honestly glad that blood is the only thing that makes this a teen rating. Pretty much, I like it.
The tag... is somewhat misleading. This fiction is more of 'splice of life' rather than sad or dark.
3705129 I wouldn't consider this slice of life since, well, this doesn't happen usually. The Dark was because of the obvious thing with Fluttershy/Flutterbat, and Sad because of what Applejack goes through during the fic. Then again, I'm not good when telling the difference between slice of life and not slice of life...
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Dark would usually mean there would be tremendous amount of blood spilled or even deaths.
Sad doesn't always equal to ponies crying. This fic wouldn't be actually considered sad since it didn't really touch one's feeling all that much.
Splice of life has every-single-thing. It does include minor blood spilling, a bit touchy or even a short adventure.
I love it. You did a good job.
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Is it bad that I read that as 'spice of life'? But still, it is true. Kinda reminds me of slice of life.
You can has review!