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nutcase4real


The rarest and mightiest possession of the human spirit can only be discovered by means of story and by no other process of thinking; to know all this and to have it as your own is to have much.

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It has been a while since the girls had gotten together, and now they all begin to realize something that is very important.

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Comments ( 10 )

Aww, this story makes me feel warm and fuzzy :3

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Thank you. Hope you enjoyed it.

I liked it a lot, but I think that five seperate mentions on how lonely Fluttershy is feeling might be a bit much.
The more subtle touches, like FS reading the same book, or staring at the birdfeeder her friends made, were more effective in conveying that feeling In my opinion.

I want this to be featured.

I like it. It puts the feeling of loneliness first, then injects warm and fuzziness into your gut

seriously, :ajbemused: Fluttershy has an even more fragile psyche than Pinkie Pie. ooooh yeah. i went there! :rainbowdetermined2: look back at the show. how many times has Pinkie Pie gone, as she would say, "Loco in the coco." :pinkiecrazy: i can think of one. (as in, 'party of') Now how often has Fluttershy broken character or had to deal with her past trauma? Hurricane Fluttershy , Best Night Ever, Putting Your Hoof Down, Power Ponies and Filli Vanilli, from what i can remember.

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seriously, :ajbemused: Fluttershy has an even more fragile psyche than Pinkie Pie. ooooh yeah. i went there!

As did I, but light heartedly of course.

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Thank you all so much. Have a nice day and I hope you enjoyed it.:pinkiesmile:

I had not thought about the idea that RD might have a very busy schedule in winter. Interesting take.
You'd have to wonder a little bit about if she really wants to be a wonderbolt at this point if she knew it would take her away from her friends a lot.

Also, after the first paragraph, I grabbed a notepad.
The following might need a quick fix:

It was that time of dy

Day*

tht any normal group of ponies

That*

Rainbow Dash shuttered at the thought of it.

Shuddered*

but with winter approaching she just had to much work to do with the weather.

Too* much

, nd she would have to get up early the next morning and do it all over again.

, And*

"Hey Dash! We have to finish zone four today right?", Cloudkicker asked to which Rainbow Dash simply nodded,

Remove comma before 'Cloudkicker'

helped move the bahemith of a cloud into position.

behemoth *

Rainbow Dash took of through the the night air and almost immediately began planning out her two hour lunch break.

took off*

and she placed the photograph on th nightstand next to her bed.

the*

She had no where to be

nowhere*

Tomorrow she would be sappy without antpony realizing it, but it would still happen.

anypony*

never say you're to busy to the ones who need you

Too* busy

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