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Workable Goblin


Exceptionally slow writer, exceptionally fast reader.

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When Twilight Sparkle makes a shocking discovery during a visit to Fluttershy, she may have to seriously reconsider her opinion of her friend.

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Quite surprising...and good!

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Despite the wall of text this was an intresting concept. :eeyup:

An unusual idea and well executed. Well done. :twilightsmile:
Just one small note for the first paragraph:

getting together over tea to discuss what I we had read

You have an extra "I" after what.

I've seen this before, but everybody just assuming that the local know-it-all... well, knew it already was a nice twist.

:twilightblush: seems a bit appropriate. is all I'm saying.

Anyway, well done.

Could be extended. Otherwise, a good read.

Lololol hillourous espilay the part with big Mac .

Needs an epilogue/expansion.

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