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Darth Atrox


I find your lack of faith disturbing

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never did like these stories. Really with the pony master thing,
but the description might change my mind.

seems someone's taking a page from ole madmax it does...jes:moustache:

"Alright. I'll take him off your hands, Applejack. I promise I'll take good care of him." She said.

Wat? Did someone switch AJ's species while I wasn't looking? I think you meant 'hooves' here.

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Actually, seeing as how humans exist in this world, and hands are more versatile than hooves, the expression remains the same.

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Ah, but saying 'off your hands' implies that AJ had hands, which she does not. If you notice, in the original story, the phrase is still 'off your hooves,' and other such phrases are 'hoofful' and 'lend a hoof' etc.

Ask MadMax if you don't believe me.

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Hold your horses!

You don't have horses, yet the expression still applies to you. Applejack doesn't have hands, but the expression still applies to her.

Also, my story is a spin-off. It doesn't actually take place in the exact same universe as MadMax's story. Otherwise, Twilight would currently have max, right? Seeing as she doesn't own Max, it's obviously not the same Universe.

hmmm i was wrong...... they treat them nicely.

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I think the whole abuse thing is exaggerated in MadMax's story. Think about animals with us. We use them and keep them as pets. It's only a small minority that abuses them, has sex with them or makes them fight. I'm doing something like that here.

There will be mention of The Pits, and owners having sex with their humans, but you'll hear about it as often as you hear about it in real life. Not very.

just gonna say experiment 626, smile at my own comment, and then read this

How come you made popular story list and I didn't? WAAAAHHHH!!!!!:raritycry:



:rainbowwild:

I bet celestia has something to do with why the humans are as smart as trained dogs. Also burn the ponies to the ground and ripe them limb from limb.!!!:flutterrage:

3702230 HERETIC! You will burn under the glorious gaze of the God Emperor of mankind! You and your pony allies will be crushed under the might of the Imperium when humanity comes to your world, sounding the drums of war and burning your "Sunbutt" alive in her own chambers!

This expire meant is now under the command of the Sontaran Empire!Surrender your women, weapons, and fan fics!

Please, continue this!

*puts helmet on* prepare for possible shitstorm :pinkiecrazy:

Six-Two-Six?
What you did there. I see it.

Ya got the lelo and stich reference when you stated Rubens #625

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A lot of people didn't watch the show.

3706660 So... experiment 626... you.

Comment posted by Neverheardofhim deleted Dec 31st, 2013

yesterday he could fight. today he can talk. tomorrow he'll rise. ave Homo Novus.

Congrats for getting into the popular story list! :pinkiehappy:

This fic is really interesting, i will keep an Eye on it.

"However, I have modified the serum. This serum has been altered to only use ten percent of it's original power, while maintaining it's original objective."

Just like how humans only use 10% of their brain power.

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Actually, dude, we use all of our brains, just not all at the same time. A man who's using all of his brain at the same time looks an awful lot like a man having a horrible, horrible seizure.

boo! I was hoping for Orion to start talking and making planes to kill all the ponies!!!

I... was kind-sorta hoping for a longer chapter. But the scientific study approach suits this quite well, so no real complaints there.

3709601 agreed, but I do want to see a rapid rate of learning. both for Orion and for Twilight (about Orion).

I cant really say I enjoyed this, im getting the VERY bad feeling about this story, I'll be keeping watch from here on out, giving advice, also I don't recommend making short chapters like this, people, myself included, tend to find this annoying, and spending twenty minutes JUST to write this? not a good sign, spend MORE time writing longer chapter, then go back, read through what you wrote and ask yourself "does it make sense and where do I want this to go?" don't just write a story as it goes, plan the ENTIRE thing out first, then as your writing, go into details.
Just trying to help - AuzzieJustice

Twilight becoming a surrogate mother? This early?

Hell, I would have expected more time than that, maybe set over time for a relationship to grow.

Really good story.Thou the only reason why I cant fully enjoy is because of the very... complex words.. I don't even know :raritydespair:
But I dont mind :scootangel: .Anyway's I wanna ask, is Orion and Twilight gonna :heart: in future chapters? :duck:
Anyways, like I said, excellent really good story,can't wait for more :pinkiehappy:
P.S you should add some detail to the background or the movements of the characters.It would really give the story a more.. 'realistic' feeling.If you understand o.o

short, but still well done.

Pssst, could I ask you something?

I was wondering you could add a plot twist of somehow sentient humans survived that war and return to provide weapons to the soon non-feral ones.

I'm not expecting him to read Shakespeare. He needs to WRITE SHAKESPEARE WITH A TYPEWRITER, AFTER HE INVENTS ONE!!!!


MAY THE ALMIGHTY SUNBUTT GRANT UPON THIS HUMAN HER BLESSINGS, AND MAY HER LARGE AND PLUMP FLANK LEAVE UPON HIM THE MARK OF INTELLIGENCE.

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Sorry, I should clarify; We do use all of our brain generally but not at full capacity, or else, like you said, horrible seizures.

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MAY THE ALMIGHTY SUNBUTT GRANT UPON THIS HUMAN HER BLESSINGS, AND MAY HER LARGE AND PLUMP FLANK LEAVE UPON HIM THE MARK OF INTELLIGENCE

Best thing I've read all day!

Interesting chapter.....but OH so short!

3709345 I'm sorry, but your avatar is hilarious.

Looks like someone got locked out of the vault. :pinkiesmile:

3708795 I hope that's a joke about how stupid people can be and not literally how much of the brain is used. Otherwise, I'd say you are using 10%

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Don't worry, it was a joke.

This can only end in pitiful disaster...
And so I wait, popcorn in hand.

3709595 well while planes could kill the ponies he would need a PLAN first

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Agreed

I want a human just talking to them normally like nothing is happening the started to kill them

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