never did like these stories. Really with the pony master thing,
but the description might change my mind.

seems someone's taking a page from ole madmax it does...jes

"Alright. I'll take him off your hands, Applejack. I promise I'll take good care of him." She said.

Wat? Did someone switch AJ's species while I wasn't looking? I think you meant 'hooves' here.

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Actually, seeing as how humans exist in this world, and hands are more versatile than hooves, the expression remains the same.

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Ah, but saying 'off your hands' implies that AJ had hands, which she does not. If you notice, in the original story, the phrase is still 'off your hooves,' and other such phrases are 'hoofful' and 'lend a hoof' etc.

Ask MadMax if you don't believe me.

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Hold your horses!

You don't have horses, yet the expression still applies to you. Applejack doesn't have hands, but the expression still applies to her.

Also, my story is a spin-off. It doesn't actually take place in the exact same universe as MadMax's story. Otherwise, Twilight would currently have max, right? Seeing as she doesn't own Max, it's obviously not the same Universe.

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You know what, fuck it.

HERETIC! DIE IN THE VAST BURNING CATACLYSM EMBLAZONED UPON THE FLANK OF OUR GOD-QUEEN SUNBUTT!
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CONVERT OR DIE!

hmmm i was wrong...... they treat them nicely.

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I think the whole abuse thing is exaggerated in MadMax's story. Think about animals with us. We use them and keep them as pets. It's only a small minority that abuses them, has sex with them or makes them fight. I'm doing something like that here.

There will be mention of The Pits, and owners having sex with their humans, but you'll hear about it as often as you hear about it in real life. Not very.

just gonna say experiment 626, smile at my own comment, and then read this

How come you made popular story list and I didn't? WAAAAHHHH!!!!!

I bet celestia has something to do with why the humans are as smart as trained dogs. Also burn the ponies to the ground and ripe them limb from limb.!!!

3702230 HERETIC! You will burn under the glorious gaze of the God Emperor of mankind! You and your pony allies will be crushed under the might of the Imperium when humanity comes to your world, sounding the drums of war and burning your "Sunbutt" alive in her own chambers!

This expire meant is now under the command of the Sontaran Empire!Surrender your women, weapons, and fan fics!

Please, continue this!

*puts helmet on* prepare for possible shitstorm

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What you did there. I see it.

hehehehehehehehe

Ya got the lelo and stich reference when you stated Rubens #625

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A lot of people didn't watch the show.

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Humanity Shall Rise and Prevail!

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3706660 So... experiment 626... you.

yesterday he could fight. today he can talk. tomorrow he'll rise. ave Homo Novus.

Congrats for getting into the popular story list!

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RISE OF THE PLANET OF THE APES

This fic is really interesting, i will keep an Eye on it.

"However, I have modified the serum. This serum has been altered to only use ten percent of it's original power, while maintaining it's original objective."

Just like how humans only use 10% of their brain power.

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Actually, dude, we use all of our brains, just not all at the same time. A man who's using all of his brain at the same time looks an awful lot like a man having a horrible, horrible seizure.

3709345 I'm sorry, but your avatar is hilarious.

Looks like someone got locked out of the vault.

3708795 I hope that's a joke about how stupid people can be and not literally how much of the brain is used. Otherwise, I'd say you are using 10%

3702809 Twilight is now ohana

Okay, WOW... I don't care how good Twilight is at hiding her experiments, but 625 dead humans...? Applejack knows exactly what happened to Sunshine. She's not stupid.

Also, if he's 16, he's old as fuck for the YHAY series, as they live for ~20 tops. So... Might want to either fix that or mention it as well.

Orion was a tall human. One hundred and eighty centimeters tall. His body was fit and muscular. All classic signs of a human Alpha Male. Looking up at his face, she saw strong masculine features, strong, squared jaw, angular face. His brown, messy, medium length hair shone in the light and bounced with every step he took. His deep brown eyes shone in the sunlight... Twilight could easily see why the female humans would seek him out.

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Subject is Twenty-one years old

Wow. That's pretty goddamn old.

"The average human only lives for fifteen or so years."
-Your Human and You, chapter 14

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Actually, both of those are myths. We use all of our brains, all of the time.

True that some parts of the brain are not required to allow the continuation of life, but you still use all of it. Every case of lobotomization, accidental or otherwise, has come with reports of personality change.

Your super strength means nothing without the leverage to build up any energy.

That isn't actually true. We can channel force from our back muscles through, and further enhanced by, our arm muscles. It is a core part of the "Snake Style" of martial arts. I myself have used this to overpower an opponent's grappling.

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Still underscores how much punishment humans can take and keep going.

By the way, does anyone else get the feeling that Applejack wouldn't have sold Orion if she knew Twilight was going to perform a highly lethal experiment on him? I think she would have been...displeased.

Hm... for the YHaY version of humans, basically mostly H.S. Neanderthalensis with a little H.S. Sapiens mixed in, Sunshine is a bit tall and light while Orion is a bit tall and heavy.

oh for the love of celestia sapient refers to our scientific name not our level of intelligence. the correct word is sentient. i'm not trying to be mean i've just been seeing alot of people make that mistake.

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Sentient - responsive to or conscious of sense impressions.
Sapient - possessing or expressing great sagacity.

Most real-life animals are sentient, but not sapient.

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You would count an oragatang as a semi-sapient animal since they are closely related to us.

4039139 in other words you mean

Sentient: to feel (to feel)

Sapient: to think (to think)

I see a planet of the humans coming to smack equestria in the face soon...

Wait. Humans have to learn language before speaking anything at all. How'd he learn how to speak that fast?

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Spare Twilight for without her humanity would have never again gotten their sapience back.