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TheNewYorkBrony
The name's Dash. (Previously Ronnie) And I write humanized pony stories. Welcome to my humble page.
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Wellllllllllll, that thumbnail looks...
...like the logical place the humanized fanart was bound to go after this episode.
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You're telling me!
Flutterbat is too sexy not to clop to...but "sexily" is not a real word. Even if it was, it's would be a terrible adjective. It doesn't really describe the tone well.
If I may:
So, that's my only nitpick here, and that's because I've seen some people starting to use this faux word in clopfics, and their works are suffering for it. I don't want it to get to the point where half the clopfics I play are a drinking game.
orchid
Also pointing out "orchid".
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Wanted to post a Hello Nurse gif, apparently the internet is fresh out.
Need more please!!! I beg you
3703399 thanks for pointing that out. I dunno why I thought that was a real word. My autocorrect should have picked it up.
Author. Stahp. Author wat r u doin. Are you TRYING to make me gay?
Like I said on RD's Secret, you're really good at making characters come to life in the way you want them to, such as turning my thoughts when I see Shy from "awww she's adorable" to "asdfghjkl" in this story. I dunno whether you're a teenager or not, but you write them really well. Great job.
Few things: it's orchard, not orchid. Also, Sam Hell, not Sam Hill.
3704433 ah. thank you.
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Aaaaaaw shnap! Gotch gu fasht!
Anywho good job =p
One thing in particular,
I see in the comments that many people have corrected you about the word "orchard," but after all that, the very first sentence is still talking about flowers rather than trees. Oops.
Also, at Fluttershy's introduction in the darkness, a part of her dialogue uses a lowercase "i," which is incorrect. And during the sex scene, the word "fastly" is used; a word which does not exist. There are a couple of other things I noticed, but I can't recall what those things are.
Other than that, good job on this story. Very manipulative and experienced writing.
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Actually it can be said Sam Hill or Sam Hell. My mother tends to use the second and my grandmother the first. Just depends on whether of not you actually care about cursing.
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Mine unfortunately doesn't pick it up either. A fan fic called "My Immortal" is apparently where the word started, and it's said to be the worst fan fic of all time. I guess that's where the word started and somehow it got added to dictionaries when somehow simple words like "teleport" needs to be added manually to browser dictionaries.
Okay, who is that artist?
yeah, we need more AJ and Flutterbat fanfics, i thought there would be a lot of these pairing fanfics by now, WE NEED MORE OF THOSE STORIES (or at least i do XD) /)
3709798 I do too! Fuck yeah! /)
3708713 manicpaint
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Thank you...
TO GOOGLE!
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I highly agree with Tyrant Alex, we need more Flutterbat X AJ shpping! Thank you for writing this, TheNewYorkBrony.
I am highly curious to the nature of Fluttershy and AJ's relationship after the events of this story.
3703399 holy crap, he actually changed it
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word
n. a single distinct meaningful element of speech or writing, used with others (or sometimes alone) to form a sentence and typically shown with a space on either side when written or printed
More to the point, "sexily" clearly means "in a sexy manner," just as "stealthily," "militarily," and "voluntarily" mean "in a stealthy manner," "in a military manner," and "in a voluntary manner," respectively.
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For a first timer it's pretty good
Look forward to your future works~
good story you should make a sequel to this story i want to see what happens next for flutterbat and applejack
Love it, need more human flutterbat yuri
Great Flutterbat Fanfic 3710197, I I found two words that need correcting though...
Sight
Vampiress
so because AJ got bitten and survived, does that make her a vampire as well? or did Flutterbat just suck some of her blood?