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A group of terrorists has declared war on the Crystal Empire: attacking civilians, planting bombs, and taking hostages. Soarin and Spitfire, visiting the Empire on vacation, are the only ones who can stop them. Edited by Skeeter The Lurker.
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Oh sweet! It's up! I have to say, this was fun to assist with.
I look forward to seeing where it goes.
More like pre read... Your choice, though.
~Skeeter The Lurker
I am not ready.
But nice work with this, like it.
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so who's the traitor?
Good pacing, no real grammatical errors and pretty interesting premise.
I'll keep an eye on it! Hopefully, my expectations for a Cussler-esque technothriller will be met -- and met well.
Ooh, the suspense
At first i didn't have high hopes for this story. Then i saw it was written by Carts, and my interest was peaked. He can be a little insufferable at times, but he's a damn good writer.