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Any plans on making a sequel I would love to see one.
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No sorry, this was a sequel to Nursing Old Wounds and the final idea I had in that universe.
3403510 well that sucks but i still look forward to whatever story you come up with next ^^
Not bad
Hm. Kinky
It's not bad, but a few things. First, coming at this cold like I am, I have to wonder if it was a spell that made the princesses futa, or if they're naturally like that. Secondly, we get no transition from Luna's hooves to Luna's cock in Twilight. Finally, this could do with some foreplay. That being said, it's a good bit of clop, but could use some expanding.
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Reading back over it I can understand how some of these things are confusing, I probably should have been more obvious in my writing.
This bit in the story was supposed to imply a spell that Celestia cast to give the two of them male genitalia.
Here I was trying to imply Luna still grasping Twilight's rear as she probed the entrance. It is rather vague I know, but it was intentional to convey Twilight's perspective in the darkness, all she can sense is touch and sound.
Everything said thank you for the feedback, I know my writing needs a lot of work and every bit of constructive criticism helps.
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...Please include a note in the introduction if you're serious and this actually contains (however artificially) futanari.
Because I'm totally not reading this if it does, that's not something I enjoy, and I know I'm not the only one who would appreciate it.
Hmmmm, this sounds hot. Will probably hafta give it a read soonish.
Goooooooooood stuff.
I approve of this story. Why have I not liked this yet? I've already read it. Something must be wrong with me.
Why you don't have more likes on this is beyond me. Good work good work good writer.
Why does it sound like Luna and Tia have penises in this story?
5143811 This is because I tried to imply that they do for part of it.
Hi there!)) I've read "Nursing", and I think it would be a good idea to mention that story not in the bottom note only but right in the description as well; that story explains the first part of this one, and it's pretty nice itself) Well, if the matter is still actual for you. And if you have no idea for a sequel, it may be this: next time Twilight casts Celestia's spell on herself and enjoys princesses the way they enjoyed her in "Tastes Like" x)
And I agree with "a good bit of clop", it really is)) Best wishes
Wow! My only regret is not finding this story sooner!
This was so sweet