• Member Since 23rd Mar, 2013
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Mudraynebow


Look into my eyes... It's where my demons hide... Don't get too close, it's dark inside...

Comments ( 16 )

Awww, I wanted to see some fighting!
Yes, I was looking forward to seeing one filly mutilate others for her own pleasure.
I don't care what you think of that.

Anyway, not bad. I'll grant you a like, even if I wanted more.

3112800
I can always write a sequel:pinkiecrazy:

3118107
While I would enjoy seeing what happens next, as well as the aftermath of it, I do like the ending. Indeterminate endings are always fun.

Are you trying to make it hard for me to chose a favorite story that you wrote. :trixieshiftleft:
And you better write a sequel
Please :fluttershysad:mlp.bartstuff.eu/mlp-pplease.png

That... was... AMAZING!:pinkiehappy:
I really loved the cliffhanger at the end, it's great how you just left the rest to the reader's imagination.
Definitely giving this one a like.

3112800 That is not frowned upon, or at least not by me.

I just imagined DT and SP dying in about ... 50 different ways :duck:. My favorite is Red Rose strangling them both with each others intestines. :pinkiecrazy:

Oh, and... *cue dramatization* :raritydespair: SEQUEL!!! WE MUST HAVE A SEQUEL!!! :raritycry: *gasp*:pinkiegasp: please... :fluttershysad:

Very real... I like. good work

The story os good, but the writing is...shobby...ummm...yeah, if you worked on that you would be fantastic, if you like these types of fics, I recomend reading the carnage and murder crew fic, it shares several details, but its longer and the writing is more...refined

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Thanks for the suggestion, I'll work on editing this a bit:twilightsmile:

WELL THEN; that was.... interesting,in a good way.:pinkiecrazy:

This story seems incomplete. We do not know what happens as a result of her desire to slash up the other fillies' faces. Does she succeed in slashing up any faces? Whose faces? Does she kill somepony? Does somepony stop her? How much damage does she do before she's stopped? Does her resolve fail at the last? All these outcomes are possible, and we don't know which actually happens. We should know.

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It's supposed to end like that. It's a cliffhanger, what happens next is left open to imagination.

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