• Member Since 23rd Mar, 2013
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Mudraynebow


Look into my eyes... It's where my demons hide... Don't get too close, it's dark inside...

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Will read later though, but dear lord, can a cover art be any more creepier?

Comment posted by RandomHamster33 deleted Aug 1st, 2013

It was very good. I half expected Gilda to kill Pinkie Pie, she did leave before Pinkie could get to her. For all we know, she could have been lazing around on a cloud and saw the whole thing happen.

EDIT: Is it complete or not? It says incomplete.

Im sorry, but this is disgusting. in a good way, the attention to detail, the DETAILS, I cant help but feel nauseous.
But that's why I clicked on this one, because nothing can match the image put into ones mine by stuff like this.
I definitely feel bad for Applejack and Rarity at the end, but NOONE is allowed to be sad on pinkie's watch.
And no one will ever know what happened to the Sad little ponies of Ponyville Theatre.

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I'm making a sequel:pinkiecrazy:

I'll get to this story later, but I certainly do like the way it sounds! Exactly something I would say," Why didn't I think of this?" But it really does interest me! And I will get to it as soon as possible!



~theviciouskiller

I shouldn't have read this before dinner... OH WELL!:pinkiecrazy:

The writing was good, but I have such low-blood-tolerance when it comes to reading, that it's not even funny:trollestia:.

added to fave and liked bravo sir. best GOREFIC ive read in a while.

I approve of this, continue~ :pinkiecrazy:

Meh.
I guess I liked it.
Would have been better if you had included wild animals, electricity, swallowing live parasprites, actual party's and more dismemberment.

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I'll get more of that in the sequel:pinkiecrazy:

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And that's all I need to know... :pinkiecrazy:

Comment posted by Kittzel Sticks deleted Oct 15th, 2014
Comment posted by Mudraynebow deleted Oct 15th, 2014

2996853 I'd be happy to give it another chance.:pinkiehappy:

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Thanks!:pinkiehappy: I do hope it's better now.

During the period of time in which I read this story, I uttered but one word.
"DEEEEEEEEELISH!":pinkiecrazy:

holy... :pinkiegasp: This will be on my to read list... But it'll take forever for me to finish this... It'll probably be worth it though :pinkiecrazy:

This makes Smile hd look rated G.

Hahaha :D this is the perfect mix of creepy and in some undefinable ways adorale.

Comment posted by T-bone deleted Oct 14th, 2015
Comment posted by T-bone deleted Nov 4th, 2015

Great except that being the Element Of Honesty means Applejack would or should have seen through Pinkie's lie VERY easily.

This isn't your average Pinkamena Gorefic- this is... ADVANCED Pinkamena Gorefic! AND I LOVE IT! Please continue! :pinkiecrazy:

You can keep deleting my comments all you want but what ive been telling you is the FUCKING Truth!

This was SUPER gory but well written, you really did awesome!!!! Keep up the good work!

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'Tis incomplete. Working on part 2!

this was really really good!! my only problems with this story is

1. I noticed some of this was inspired by Cheerilee's Garden – Scootaloo acting in the play, the last death drowning in her friends' gore, the unintentional murder of Snips, the death of the CMC and Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon, and the whole thing going up in flames at the end to destroy any evidence
2. during the part when Pinkie was torturing Snails, she kept calling him a "silly filly". that should be "colt", not filly. Fillies or a filly is a female horse under four years old. Once she is four years old, she becomes a mare. A colt is a male horse under four years old, and becomes a stallion once he reaches for years.

and AMAZING gorefic in total! I really enjoyed it. this was awesome.

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