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Mudraynebow

Look into my eyes... It's where my demons hide... Don't get too close, it's dark inside...

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adamdwarf
adamdwarf #1 · May 10th, 2013 · · · The Game (part 2) ·
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HAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAAAAAAAaaaaaaa :pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy: NOT EVER GONNA GET ME HAHHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHH:pinkiecrazy:

Serendras
Serendras #2 · May 10th, 2013 · · · The Game (part 2) ·
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You managed to made me read an almost grimdark story, and like it. Even if I found really strange that Rainbow is gone so crazy, is she manipulated? Either way, it won't well for Applejack :unsuresweetie:

Unused
Unused #5 · May 11th, 2013 · · · The Game (part 2) ·
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I dont like it.

I LUV IT!:pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiehappy::pinkiesmile::rainbowlaugh::pinkiecrazy::raritystarry::twilightsheepish::twilightsmile::yay::trollestia::moustache::eeyup::duck:

General Soarin
General Soarin #6 · May 12th, 2013 · · · The Game (part 2) ·
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Sir. You never cease to amaze me. Keep up the good work!

Pyrotechnic
Pyrotechnic #7 · May 13th, 2013 · · · The Game (part 2) ·
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It is about time Dash got a proper killing role. Rainbow Factory, she never actually did any on screen killing. Well, she did, but it was so quick. Now Scootaloo just needs to be there for her. Together both mares can rule the world:pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:

*Laughs maniacally*

PhoenixLight
PhoenixLight #8 · May 14th, 2013 · · · The Game (part 2) ·
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Wow, this is 20% cooler than cool.
It's awesome.
I'm hoping you'll write another sequel to this; I'll read it the second it comes out. This series has an awesome idea; you certainly don't stumble across a mass-murderer-Rainbow Dash-fic everyday...
As for the cliffhanger...I bet AJ will be saved just in time by Pinkie!
Buuuuuut, then Pinkie is actually Pinkamina and she and RD murder Applejack together. And then, the murderers fight each other in a duel to the death. :pinkiehappy: Naw, I'm just kidding. It would be pretty funny, though.
Over all, splendid work, I'm looking forward to seeing more!

Dark Colt Sabata
Dark Colt Sabata #9 · May 21st, 2013 · · 1 · The Game (part 2) ·
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Rainbow Lied? ( Elfen Lied ponified mind you, not implying that Rainbow has been lying or something )

Sakura
Sakura #10 · May 21st, 2013 · · · The Game (part 1) ·
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"Staring at everything but seeing nothing..." I see what you did there:pinkiegasp:

K Prime
K Prime #11 · Jun 22nd, 2013 · · · The Game (part 2) ·
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* Pulls out Raiden's katana and slices your head off*

One down. Rainbow to go. :pinkiecrazy:

Rainboomer97
Rainboomer97 #13 · Jul 10th, 2013 · · · The Game (part 2) ·
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WHY WOULD YOU ENJOY THIS TWILIGHT IS DEAD :twilightoops:FLUTTERSHYS DEAD:fluttershyouch: RARITY DEAD:raritydespair:

Mudraynebow
Mudraynebow #14 · Jul 12th, 2013 · · · The Game (part 2) ·
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WARNING: The following story contains pervasive strong horror violence and gore, and may affect your appreciation of certain My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic characters

(See description)

Giggle Fit
Giggle Fit #15 · Jul 17th, 2013 · · · The Game (part 1) ·
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hmm one elmemt dead and another crazy . this would be the perfect time for discords return .

:facehoof:

exitdoesnotexist
exitdoesnotexist #16 · Aug 23rd, 2013 · · 2 · The Game (part 2) ·
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My Feels throughout this fic.
Twilight's Death: "Oh well! :pinkiesmile:"
Guard Gutting: "Just how I like my gorefics!:pinkiecrazy:"
Fluttershy's Death: ":fluttercry::flutterrage::fluttershbad::fluttershysad::applecry::raritydespair::raritycry::ajsleepy:"
Rarity's Death: "Muahahahaha...:pinkiehappy::pinkiecrazy:"
Waiting for sequel: "MOAR:flutterrage:!"

Mudraynebow
Mudraynebow #18 · Sep 8th, 2013 · · · The Game (part 2) ·
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2556958
I know I'm like WAY late in responding to your comment:twilightoops: but did you read the first story in the series? This one is the second one, and reading the first story will really help this one make more sense.

Doctor NOOOOOOOO
Doctor NOOOOOOOO #20 · January 4th · · · The Game (part 1) ·
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"...and that's how I was named!" Applejack looked up, confused. "Wait, ah thought you were just talkin' about the cupcakes you and Rainbow Dash made yesterday." Pinkie Pie also looked confused. "I was?" she asked. "I don't remember saying that. Do you want me to tell you though? Oh my, silly Rainbow Dash ate so many cupcakes yesterday, she could hardly walk-" "Ah know that, Sugarcube," Applejack said. "Ya jus' told me that." "I did?" Pinkie Pie asked. "Okie Dokie Loki." Suddenly, Pinkie Pie screamed, causing Applejack to jump back. "Oh my - I promised Mrs. Cake I would be back inside in fifteen minutes to help her finish that cake, and it's been a lot longer than fifteen minutes, hasn't it?" Without another word, Pinkie bounced back inside Sugarcube Corner. Applejack thought for a moment. It had been longer than fifteen minutes since Pinkie Pie had came out to talk to her - and it had been over an hour and a half since she had last seen Twilight and Rainbow Dash. What the hay was holding up Twilight? Surely it couldn't take THAT long to talk some sense into Rainbow Dash's head. "Ah guess ah can head over to Twilight's and see what's takin' so long," Applejack said to herself. "Maybe even ah can talk to Rainbow and try to help her." Applejack walked away from Sugarcube corner in the direction of Twilight's library. As she passed through Ponyville, she forced herself not to run. In her stomach, she knew something was wrong but she told herself that if she didnt run, everything would be alright when she reached Twilight's place. After about five minutes, Applejack reached Twilight Sparkle's library. She went to the front door and rapped on it with her hoof, but no one answered. Very worried now, Applejack opened the door - it was unlocked. She went inside the library. "Hello?" Applejack called nervously. "Twilight? Rainbow Dash? Any of ya here?" No answer. Applejack walked into the library and for a moment, she just stood there, unable to believe what she was seeing. Her breath seemed to have gotten stuck in her throat. All she could do was groan in horror. Twilight was dead, that was pretty obvious. The princess was lying on her side in the middle of the room, unmoving, with a small knife sticking out of her right eye like some kind of grotesque tumor. Her side had been slashed open and her intestines were visible. Blood was splattered all over Twilight's body and all over the library floor and some on the bookshelves. As Applejack tried to comprehend what she was seeing, she realized something - there was no sign of Rainbow Dash.

Please work on the spacing in your story.

it was unlocked. She went inside the library. "Hello?" Applejack called nervously. "Twilight? Rainbow Dash? Any of ya here?"

No answer


That would be better

Doctor NOOOOOOOO
Doctor NOOOOOOOO #21 · January 5th · · · The Game (part 2) ·
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It's not as disturbing as I'd hoped but considering what I've read I have very high standards :pinkiecrazy:

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