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Look into my eyes... It's where my demons hide... Don't get too close, it's dark inside...

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We are interested in pinkamina pies case. Thou hast written a good alternate ending but We feel the element of loyalty would be hospitalised for longer and thy story reads a little rushed. However thou hast good writing skill so keep up thy writing.

Whoa, that was rushed. And the problem is that this had potential. I wanted to be there for Rainbows recovery, I wanted to be there as Twilight and her friends struggled to come to terms, I wanted to see Pinkies hearing in person. Instead we got a very rushed epilogue. It was a shame.

It would be cool if, like, Pinkie Pie would escape from the dungeon somehow or if the story continued with her since she's so crazy :pinkiecrazy:


That's actually not a bad idea... I just might do that! Thanks for the idea!

2561676 You know what would be really fun? If we collaborated on a fiction! Since we both write the same stuff, and I really like your writing :raritywink:


Sure, that sounds really cool! I'm in if you are!

2561797 Yeah! I'll message ya about it :pinkiehappy:

This is really AWESOME:yay::trollestia::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::duck::ajbemused::derpytongue2::scootangel::rainbowlaugh::rainbowhuh::rainbowdetermined2::rainbowderp::rainbowwild:

Indeed, this is more interesting

2560872 Ah Princess, 'tis good to see another who speakth of the tongue of olde:moustache:

This alternate ending is more interesting and happier. I like it. :pinkiehappy:

At least you tried even if i will forever see cupcakes as this terrible thing to ever exist.:pinkiesick::ajsleepy: I was kinda hoping they would try to cure her why do writers never go that route? i mean you cure her of killing ponies and bam you have the real pinkie back. but instead the writers rather use the lock her away and all is right in the world. you have to remember the mane six have a strong bond, so i feel that they would try harder to help her instead of giving up like most writers make them do. So how do you feel about that? i mean i think it would be in character for them to try and help her and remember the good times they had with her instead of just ya know quickly dropping her just because she killed a few ponies I mean if i were them i would find out why she did it and try to cure her insanity. but that's just me.:eeyup:

This is better than the original one :twilightsmile:

oh please oh please let them not hate her right a way and find out why pinkie did this so they can try to help her like good friends are supposed to do!:pinkiesad2: these fanfics never do that though they always have rest of the mane six quickly turn on her and do nothing to try and help they just hate her and thats it. no trying to fingure out why she did it or anything just oh even if we have good times together lets not find out why and just throw away months of close friendship over this.:applejackunsure::twilightangry2:

This is going to be a really long story... Because of this, and for other reasons, I don't want to say anything about it and spoil it:pinkiecrazy:

Well ok then I will wait and see.:pinkiehappy:

As I remember it, Pinkie had no clear motive in the original story. Memory may be fuzzy since the original story is something I try to purge from my mind and instead indulge in alternate endings
Hope Dash will be okay :fluttercry:

Thank you! It seems everyone likes to make fucked up torture stories about Rainbow Dash, I never read the original "Cupcakes" thank god for that but I did read, "The Fire in her eyes" I wish I could burn that memory of that story. Thank you for making a good ending... funny thing I haven't even read it yet, I'm basing this off of the other comments.

2639292 All I can say is that if I ever meet the author, I most likely might give him a good punch straight to the nose just for even thinking about that story. I would never do any real damage but that story was just fucked up! By now you can probably tell, I really care about Rainbow :rainbowlaugh:
I just read it because the title made me think it was going to be different. I wish I didn't read it now.

2639435 True, I probably wouldn't do that, but still that very least I would've done is tell him how screwed up a mind he has.


I read "The Fire In Her Eyes" also... Most fucked up story ever


All I'm saying.

FINALLY an alternative ending :yay:
Looking forward to the ending :pinkiecrazy:

Interesting. Faving and hoping Dashie survives.

And that Pinkie is executed or banished (preferably to the moon or somewhere not on the same planet) rather than imprisoned. I saw an alternate ending where she was arrested... only for her to break out and murder Dashie at the hospital so you'll forgive me for being cautious about fics where the insane/evil character survives.

I never read the "original ending" of Cupcakes. I view it as the bad ending for poor Dashie. However, there are several better endings that are good, undecided, and better then the "bad" version. While I hope you will continue, I won't read this till you do complete it... I will be very happy once that day comes.

By far the best Cupcakes "Ending" is the Consequences arc. That was just like what I knew of the original. I am avoiding the Applejack and Fluttershy victim arcs, but I am considering Rarity's. I may not even read that one as well.

I am even considering making a Cupcakes Alternate, Alternate Universe where everyone is a killer and AJ unknowing tries her hand at it. She is taught by her sister. She fails miserably at it and causes poor Apple Bloom stress. Though compared to Cupcakes it is more along the lines of making fun of the fact that AJ is NEVER a killer, rather then torture and gore.

Talking about it and doing it are two different things that I need to separate though

Comments like that are the reason I hate cupcakes sometimes. If people separate cupcakes!pinkie from the real one is one thing but you said pinkie should be executed without trying to help her first.:facehoof: if my friend did that I would find out why before making any decisions on said friend's fate then again that's me i like doing detective work.:twilightsheepish:

For some reason I am rooting for her.:pinkiecrazy: I hope they all die one by one take that assholes you don't deserve pinkie as a friend:flutterrage: sorry about that I rather they try to help her instead of try to stop her. I mean if they are truly her friends they would try to help her instead of being douchebags i mean you should get your friend help but instead they rather be assholes. so if they die they asked for it sheesh what terrible friends thwy are being to poor pinkie.:pinkiesad2:

2707386 I assumed one would automatically differentiate between canon Pinkie and Cupcakes Pinkie, even if only the word "Pinkie" was used.

part of that was sarcasm. since there are so many of these and different potrayals of cupcakes!pinkie. sorry for the confusion there i will now be on my way until this story updates.:twilightsmile::twilightsheepish:


I will get this updated as soon as I have time. Not sure when that will be, but hopefully soon! Don't give up on this story!:twilightsmile:


What fic was that? An alternate ending should be where Dash survives, not murdered later. No need to worry, Dash will survive... probably.

1,2 Pinkie's coming for you:pinkiecrazy:
3,4 She'll lock your doors:pinkiecrazy:
5,6 Grab your crucifix:pinkiecrazy:
7,8 wanna play a game:pinkiecrazy:
9,10... DAMMIT I GOT NOTHING:flutterrage::pinkiecrazy:

Awesome story. :pinkiecrazy: I cant wait for the fourth one.:flutterrage:

I'm willing to wager that Pinkie Pie is possessed and that in either the next chapter or in a future one she'll escape in some bloody way but that's pinkie:pinkiecrazy:

But Discord has been reformed... Wouldn't he make a good candidate for the new element of laughter?

2912559 I bet she is Possessed by Evil Marie [Boss of Haunted House in CarnEvil]

2912719 Okay. That problem is dealt with. And oh my, I have been wanting to say this for a long time!

shit,that it i'm bringing the assassins in.(sent's a few letters to the assassins around the world.my top best assassins)they should be here soon

I bet Pinkie is Possessed by a demon

*sharpens knife* maybe I should pay the a visit *grins psychoticly*:pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:

2902824 How bought this

1, 2 pinkies coming for you :pinkiecrazy:
3, 4 she'll lock your doors :pinkiecrazy:
5, 6 grab your crucifix :pinkiecrazy:
7, 8 she won't be late :pinkiecrazy:
9, 10 all over again :pinkiecrazy:

2638245 Never heard of "The Fire in Her Eyes". You say it's fucked up?
Hold on, I'll be right back. I Love that type of stuff.

some of us... are cannibals who cut... other ponies open like cantaloupe

i see what you did there :pinkiehappy: :pinkiecrazy:

You got the reference!:pinkiehappy::pinkiecrazy:

Aaand... How was it?:pinkiecrazy:

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