King Sombra has returned. He's stronger than ever. And he's not out to take the Crystal Empire this time- he's out to take over all of Equestria, and he's starting with Ponyville, where there's no Crystal Heart protecting the town. Looks like Twilight and her friends are going to have to fight him up close and personal... But are they strong enough to beat him? Looks like it's gonna be another one of those days for Twilight and her friends...
Suggested official rating: PG-13 for violence
Notice: The rating of this story may change to Mature as I continue working on it.
A shout-out to whoever did the original artwork, it's awesome.
Chapters (2)
Your story is missing a very important presence. The gang detoured to pick up Rarity for the search party, but not Spike for some reason. And his character tag is missing.
Pretty interesting. It's got my favorite.
>reads description
>"King Sobra"
>iambrony.steeph.tp-radio.de/mlp/gif/nope.gif
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I posted it in the King Sombra group. It's a story about King Sombra. I honestly don't understand why you "Dislike" stories just like that. You SAW the title. You SAW what group it was in. Thanks for the dislike (which I know you gave without even reading the story).
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as a matter of fact, I didn't dislike it. and I don't particularly hate King Sombra stories; I've read some that were rather fascinating. I was merely stating that when you have such a typographical error in the opening paragraph of the story introduction as to misspell the main character's name, it can potentially put one off from reading the story itself.
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Shit, my bad! I just got a dislike right after you posted that comment, so I hope you can see where I thought that. Please forgive me?? I'm too quick to judge sometimes...
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it's fine. I know some people can be dicks like that, and I was just wanting to let you know that I'm not one of those kinds of people.
This looks pretty cool. Definitely gonna give it a read later.
But... what were the sprinkles made out of?
So... Is this story dead?
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No, it is not. Hiatus.
Man. Why can't I find stories that AREN'T on hiatus?
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I was actually about to start working on this again... I'll try to get the next chapter out in a week or so, possibly less.
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Holy crap. I don't know what's scarier. How quickly you responded, or the fact that I found this at this point in time.
Fuh-REAKY
This is getting good.
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I sure hope whoever that was at the door is a friend.