NOTICE: This story does not go against any story or website. Everything in this story came out of my own head.
What happens when Rainbow realizes the reason ponies are ruining her is because of a few stories? If you're a Rainbow Dash lover like me, you'll see.
Update: I see from the number of dislikes that this story isn't nearly as popular as my other song-inspired one, "Rainbow Dash's Biggest Fan", and I'm sorry. I just had to get this one out.
I would like to thank Mudvayne (one of my favorite bands) and their song, "Happy?" for inspiring me to write this story.
Rated Teen for some dark themes and brief strong language.
Chapters (1)
you have this story listed as complete, but there is not a resolution. I hope you continue this.
dark chaos emerald:(bathed in dark chaos energy)they will all DIE.THIS I SWAR.no one hurts rainbow dash.i will always be there for you rainbow dash
I'll save rainbow dash of the FUCKING pony's
"...alicorn Twilight Sparkle..." Probably should say Princess.
"I can't believe ponies read these! I thought they all loved me!" I don't think Rainbow Dash is that arrogant.
Rainbow Dash is way to dramatic. I'm pretty sure she cares more about what her friends think than what a bunch of background ponies think.
And why does she walk through town? She always flies, and if she didn't want to get teased she'd just fly over town.
Oy vey.
Too much telling, not enough showing. If you want us to empathize with Rainbow Dash, you have to show us what other ponies are saying about her, and why those things are hurtful. Also, there was no point to having Twi and AJ console her. She didn't take their advice to heart, and just continues feeling depressed. There's no reason for her to do that.
The idea of ponies reacting to fanworks is an interesting concept, but you have to do it right. This, I'm sad to say, is not done right.
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A-are you roleplaying sonic characters?
2531980 hmm in a way i guess i am.the chaos emeralds are sonic. but the dark chaos emerald is mine.
this story is perfectly fine, i dont know why everypony hates it. you could have added a few of the insults that they were saying to her, but otherwise i really enjoed it. p.s. that song was my fave for quite some time, and it surprises me how not dark this is compared to that.
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Yeah, it's kind of funny. The end lyrics of "Happy?" (Are you fuckin happy, now that I'm lost left with nothing) don't really match the end of the story, but I thought that would be a slight twist, making it a little happier. By the way, "Happy?" Is probably my favorite Mudvayne song, I really like it. Glad you like the story, by the way! I feel Happy now.
>Comments.
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Wrong story
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Who said I was looking for it?
The simple problem with this story is that it barely specifies what the content in the stories about Rainbow Dash was, as well as the fact it doesn't give much of an actual sample of the mockery towards her, leaving the reader wondering what exactly are the other ponies making fun of.
It's like you want to go against FIMFiction, but are scared to actually fall through with it, thus you dance around the subject when you finally have the opportunity to go right for the jugulars. Don't be scared to do it. This community, more than many others, deserves a good whuppin'.
The ponies laughed, so it was either a hate story or a... Nope not saying it... 'Bed' story.
But they won't laugh once they read Rainbow Factory...
No more laughing after Rocket To Insanity...
And by My Little Dashie, they'll be crying...
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This is why ponies shouldn't have the internet.