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This is a request story from Chazkopa, and is an alternate ending to Canterlot Wedding. It's based on this, but when Twilight's about to kill Chrysalis, the changeling queen creates a portal and escapes, realizing that with Twilight so powerful in dark magic, she'd be unable to conquer Canterlot.

The Mane 5, Shining and Celestia apologize to Twi, but it's too late. She doesn't forgive them. Twilight angrily turns to them, and broadcasts a recording of what happened at the wedding rehearsal. The wedding guests were furious. Also, when she broadcasted it, not only Canterlot, but all of Equestria saw. And then...

Why don't you read the story now? :derpytongue2:

Chapters (10)
Comments ( 228 )

This is really good so far if it gets finished I will probably put it in my favorites.

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Thanks! And this is going to be a long ride...

This is good. I'm glad Twilight forgive Spike.

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Thanks!

Twilight: Spike's a much better brother than Shining Armor could ever be. Of course I would forgive him!

You are bringing the bad memory about this site in 7-8 years ago.

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You're welcome. I'm glad Spike get another chance.

Not a bad start.

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The memory when everyone rewrite this episode. I don't want tp remember it.

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Oh. This isn't a rewrite. It's gonna be much more. Twibra, maybe murders of two princesses, and meeting some foals.

It's going to be a long ride.

Since T.W. mentioned that the images she displayed has now been shown to the rest of Equestria, will this mean they'll be an angry flash mob waiting for the others outside the castle?

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*Go out the story immidiately when hearing that* say like this but do another. How nice!

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I think there will. (Why didn't I think of that?!)

Twilight’s new dark magic enveloped and invaded Chrysalis’ body, violating her, and forcing her innate transformation magic to activate the way Twilight wanted it to. Thus, Chrysalis was forced to assume the form of Shining Armor. Twilight snarled, sharp fangs bared beneath glowing red eyes.

At least it's not rape. :twilightoops:

This continued for some time, each restoration leading to a new form being forced upon the Changeling Queen, a new calling-out from Nightmare Twilight, and a new horrific death before the next resurrection. Applejack – apple tree roots growing through her body, eventually punching their way out in all directions; Rarity – turned to gemstone and then shattered, one section of her body at a time; Pinkie Pie – stomach rapidly filled until her torso burst open; her mother, her father, the adult forms of a few of her fillyhood bullies; only Chrysalis’ inability to assume forms too much smaller than her true form spared Spike and the Crusaders from witnessing their own horrid demises, and even then they were plenty traumatized just from being forced to witness all of this, clinging to each other in terror. Ponies in the captive audience were nauseous, terrified, in tears, screaming and begging Twilight to just end it already.

Why her mother and father too? Then again, they are very neglectful.

“ I’m going to seal you in a pocket dimension, isolated from base reality . In it, you will be subjected to constant, endless, agonizing pain and suffering. You will be unable to die, no matter what is done to you. You will be unable to escape into the refuge of madness, as some torture victims do; the magic of that realm will force you to remain totally sane, always fully aware and understanding of everything, and forced to remember everything that led up to this. Age will not bring death; you will live forever, in your own private realm of eternal torture. The seal holding you in there will be so great in strength and complexity, that no power short of the Four Elder Gods themselves will be able to free you . Goodbye, Chrysalis ! Welcome to Hell!! ”

Reminds me of a highly advanced Genjutsu from Naruto. :pinkiecrazy:

Also, who are the four Elder Gods?

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I'm not really sure... As mentioned in the author's note, I asked DKN117 for permission to use their idea of a different ending to the Canterlot wedding. So they own the first chapter. But the ones after that belong to me.

Kind of wonder what she thinks of Luna at the moment?

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She doesn't blame Luna for anything, since Luna never did anything to her.

this is going to be good

Will Luna, Twilight's/Shining's parents, and even the real Cadence be pissed off at Celestia, Shining Armor, and the Mane Five?

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Probably. Considering if the leader of country had the head of the enemy pretending to their family under nose and they put everything ahead of noticing that something was wrong they would have a lot of explaining to do.

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Agreed. :twilightangry2:

Not to mentioned that she has unintentionally turn Twilight over to the Dark Side.

I haven't read this yet--but currently reading it now, but I have to ask: How is this in the Spike's Harems group??? Unless there are some future surprises (no spoilers, please :raritywink:),, it seem that it not in the correct place...

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I think somehow you got the wrong story. This au on the wedding episode.

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I think somehow you got the wrong story.

I don't think that's the case. I also got the notification that this story was added to the "Spike's Harems" group, despite the fact that the premise does not seem to involve Spike with any harem whatsoever, even if I haven't read it.

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Must have been a glitch somewhere because this au for the wedding episode. Report it to the site and try to find your story.

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I checked the folder it was supposedly in under Spike's Harems, and it's right there. I've already reported it as a misplaced story in the wrong group.

P.S.: If anyone else is reading this, I swear this is NOT an attack. There's just been a mistake with grouping this story.

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I'll tell you there's going to be some surprises later on.

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Everypony! It's supposed to be in the Spike's harem group! You'll find out later on in the story why.

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For me, this story was placed in the correct group: Canterlot Wedding Blues. Whoever put it in the Spike Harem's group did not even read the story and thought that it was for the Spike Harem's group.

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It's supposed to be in the Spike's harem group. Could you tell me who added it there?

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Ok.

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Chazkopa said he added it, and he was the one who requested this story. So it's in the correct group.

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Ok, sorry. I thought since nothing in the description mentioned anything about a Spike harem, it shouldn't be in the group.

To avoid confusion, you could try subtly mentioning Spike's impending relationships with the Mane 6 or whoever will be in his harem in the description (without spoilers), instead of just relying on the content, so other users won't feel obligated to read the story through to confirm that it's a harem fic.

This is just a suggestion. It's up to you to decide whether to use it.

I can see that when Luna finds out, she'll be furious with the mane 5, her sister, and Shining Armor. I can picture her turning back into Nightmare Moon and joining Twilight and Spike. :twilightsmile:

(By the way, my Avatar photo is of a drawing I did myself of what Twilight would look like if she was possessed by Nightmare. Her name is Nightmare Nova.)

*After reading all the commotion

So, Spike does get a Harem out of this?

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She sure will! Luna turning into Nightmare Moon, huh? Not a bad idea...


And your drawing looks great! :pinkiesmile:

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Seriously, who? I know it's definitely not the Mane Five or even Rarity, due to obvious reasons. And Twilight will probably be with Sombra. And definitely NOT Chrysalis, for the same thing.

And since this is still a early season. Ember, Smolder, Gabby, etc. Don't show up yet. Maybe Luna/Nightmare Moon, and Gilda?

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