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Professor Coruptus


Let's try again.

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Short bit of family fluff.

Scootaloo and Pinkie Pie wait for a certain somepony to come home after a long tour.

Inspired by the single word prompt: Taco

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Now with Dramatic Reading by ObabScribler
[youtube=https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Hl8nnJKqkK8]

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Gah, if you're going to indent paragraphs please fix the first one! It bothers me more than it should :c
please unicorn eat tacos with me, please unicorn

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For some weird reason, it is considered "optional" to indent the first paragraph of a chapter, and there are actually some people out there who will tell you not to do it and criticize you if you do.

Yeah, I don't get it either. :facehoof:

Indentation doesn't bother me as much as the typos. Really, you should get a proofreader.

Hmm. Pinky you naughty mare~

Nice to see something from you again. Short and sweet this time.

Yeah. I've totally never done something like this. Nope. No way

Funny, a fic that started out in a prompt thread with the word 'tacos' turns out to be one of my favorite PinkieDash short fics. I was looking forward to seeing what would come out of the word tacos, and I think this is about as good as it gets. :rainbowlaugh:

It just boggles my mind that this is the first fic that has really touched on the subject of having Pinkie, Dash, and Scootaloo as a family. It's something I thought of when I first saw Sleepless in Ponyville, and I can't imagine that no one else has thought of this, but this is the first time that I've seen it explored in a fic. No idea why...it's ridiculously adorable, and a really interesting dynamic to explore, as this little fic illustrates. Gotta love those little non-verbal moments (as well as the verbal moments...sneaky sneaky Pinkie Pie).

BTW, the prompt thread is right here if anyone wants to participate: http://www.fimfiction.net/group/230/rainbowpie/thread/37173/pinkiedash-prompts

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Thank you for the praise! :scootangel:

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Yeah I have no idea what I'm doing. For some reason the auto-indent doesn't indent the first paragraph.

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I used to have one. Then he took an arrow to the knee. :trollestia:

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The first paragraph doesn't *need* top be indented. Indeed, for online stuff, many prefer double spaces with *no* indents.

Books typically won't indent teh first line, but they also do drop caps, so it's kinda almost indented visually.

Very cute Pinkie/Dash fic. Also first Pinkie, Dash, and Scootaloo as a family was a cute concept. I hope to see more of it. At least i hope there will be more to it.
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Hi there. I hope you don't mind, but I liked this fic so much I have put together and audio version on YouTube.

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You.... you are like my favorite person in the world right now. :pinkiehappy::rainbowkiss:


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Great Scootaloo by the way.

i heard the reading too. it made me laugh a lot. first rainbowpie i ever heard of.

kinda made me wanna write one myself, but couldn't really think of one, so i just fused them together into one pony:raritywink::trollestia:

Why aren't there more rainbowie scootaloo family fluffs!

5827893 THAT is an EXCELLENT question.

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