For the Tiny Toons episode inspiration, it's right here!
Scootaloo talks Sweetie Belle into stealing a grand cupcake from Sugarcube Corner when they have no money to pay for it. Despite that Sweetie Belle is hesitant in doing so but goes along with it due to her own hunger. They succeed in stealing it, but the question is, what will they do about it?
Co-written with StormySummer and yes, is intended to have been written out this way. It is based on an episode of Tiny Toons, which she is a fan of.
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That was a pretty great story. Seems like it would be a believable episode, one that I'd certainly be interested in watching. But I really couldn't help but cringe and facepalm when they were actually stealing. It was hilarious how bad they were at it, but obviously that was the point.
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This is a pretty good story. And it seems like it could even be an episode! You did good. I can see them now when they're trying to steal the cupcake.
You did really good though.
HMM do you use the one hoof discount or the human equivelant the five finger discount?
Oh i LIKE this... have no idea why it's labeled Comedy but... eh whatever. Thumbs up from me!
you reused an old tiny toons episode plot for this fic , also rainbow dash and rarity did something equal or worse in the friendship express episode .
"Rainbow shook her head, chuckling a bit." Win.
This was fun. You really have a knack for writing in the show's style, with the right type and amount of comedy, and you do a great job at writing the ponies like their characters. Thumbs up
1042424 Did you even read the description? I stated outright that it was based on an episode of Tiny Toons. And YES, I know that. Not every fanfic is to the show's continuity.
1042554 XD Okay, the whole nitpick of using the word "chuckle" was funny the first time, but if you're going to do that for EVERY fic I write, it's just going to get old. But thank you anyway, I'm glad you enjoyed it!
1042650 i forgot to click more in the description . rainbow dash dosent feels like the one to teach this moral she broke into an hospital to steal a book , it is too hypocrite the way she reacts.
it is not only the continuity , rainbow dash isnt the type who belives in rules .
1042940 Who's to say there isn't character development? And no, she did not steal the book from the hospital. Twilight gave it to her to read. Yes, Rainbow Dash breaking into the hospital was wrong, to be sure, but she didn't steal anything. It was still technically her book. And then yes, she did steal a bite of cake back in the "MMMystery on the Friendship Express" episode. But who is to say she didn't learn her lesson? She isn't a thief and I highly doubt she would condone stealing to that degree. Not believing in rules? Uh-huh. Did you not watch "Hurricane Fluttershy"? She seemed to adhere to the rules present for Tornado Day.
Look, I don't want to get into a nasty argument about who's right or who's wrong. If you can't enjoy the story for what it is, that's fine. I understand.
I think, the story is great! It was real fun to read!
The scene with the talking cupcake was priceless!
And I agree with some comments. It would be a great episode for the show!
The lesson was very good.
1042554
Honestly, stop your "chuckle"-nitpicking already, please. It's not even funny.
It's also similar to a Foxtrot comic, where a friend talked Paige into slippibg a CD in her purse. She was unable to go through with it, and put it back before leaving the store.
And that was a good thing too, since mall sercurity saw the whole thing.
1043824 Really? I haven't read that one! That's pretty cool, though.
this was a good story. i tend to read more adventure fics but this one was very well written.
you get five out of five spikes.
As always you never cease to amaze me, keep up the good writing! ^.^
me: "huh, the only thing I was most interested in this story was the cupcake.... it probablywas good. OFF TO STE... erm, I mean BUY THE CUPCAKE! " Angel looking at me angrily. me: Er, yes, I mean steal.
This story was awesome and very beliveable
Also made me wonder about how Sweetie and Scootaloo where before they met Apple Bloom becouse they were friends based on the show
Great job.
I am about to read this, just added it to my Nook for reading later (laughs manically) judging from the comments about a "talking cupcake" reminds me of the Simpsons episode where Bart attempts to steal a game. That was probably not the inspiration (I know Tiny Toons) but still the game characters DID talk to Bart and try to get him to admit that he was wrong..... Anything involving the lovable Crusaders should win for best story..... unless they are killed
Then my wrath will be upon thee 
2097764 XD Never in my life would I kill them. Don't worry, there is no tragedy nor dark tag here. You can be rest assured.
I kept thinking this would end like the steal the balloon episode from spongebob
This is rather similar to an episode of Tiny Toon Adventures.
3059748 I stated in the description that it was.
3059794 Huh, I mist it. Silly me.
This actually did seem like it could be an episode if I had a little more meat on it. Well done.