After a party, Rainbow hints to Pinkie that she likes her. Unfortunately, Pinkie starts avoiding her and begins hanging out with Fluttershy instead, even going as far as to give the shy pony a nickname. Rainbow sees the writing on the wall and decides she'll put her own feelings to the side and get Fluttershy to admit she likes Pinkie.
Meanwhile, Fluttershy and Pinkie try to come up with a way to get Rainbow to admit that she likes Pinkie.
What could go wrong?
As usual, edited and pre-read by Key Tapper and CookieMonstar
There will be two chapters to this story.
Chapters (2)
You finally posted something? Sweet!
I was thinking there'd have been a little flashback or dialogue scene regarding the Dash and Pinkie party thing, but it's still good. And all I know is this:
This is gonna be good.
Pinkie likes RD and RD likes Pinkie
RD thinks that Pinkie and Fluttershy like each other
And a possibility of Rarity liking RD because she really exaggerated the whole welcome thing.
Am i missing anything?
Anyway good story.
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You missed one thing, Rarity was mostly excited to see RD because she needed someone to model for her at the moment. That's why she went from murder mode to joy in ten sec-
Well... you get the idea.
The second chapter is almost done and should be edited and completed within a week.
4761773 Cool, cant wait.
Absolutely fantastic work! Can't wait for the ending!
Is thee going to be a sort of sequel to see who fluttershys crush is?
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I'm thinking on it, but right now, the answer is no. I was going to add it into the story, but it would have increased the scope of the fic.
Ah, a sweet continuation. An enjoyable read.
You know what I did when I read this? I stopped. I stopped and sat back, wiping my forehead with my hand. The drama levels hit the roof here, and all I could say was, "Rainbow, you moron." Of course she didn't know, but this is how the one-sided believing things work. They cause a conflict with something like this, and you know what? You pulled it off great. The confession was heart-warming, especially when Dash was telling Pinkie what she liked about her. She likes crazy a bit, and I can see it. And stepping back and allowing her two friends to bask in a relationship even if her own feelings got hurt? Oh damn, that's something. Pinkie had to go out with her then.
I thought the punishment was going to be paddles, not going to lie. I don't know, the cloaks set it up. But a lovely ending for them all. Most of them more like, considering Dash's position. Hidden as she is, I bet she was loving what Pinkie was doing though. I would have liked to know who Fluttershy's crush was though. I get why you didn't expand on it, but you left an open door. Not a bad thing of course, but now I'm left guessing. It's Twilight, isn't it?
Two PinkieDash fics in a row. A good choice. I'm going to be look forward to the next thing you cook up.
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Thanks for the kind words. I think people underestimate how important loyalty is, and that's one of the reasons I like Rainbow Dash like I do.
I'll pull back the curtain a bit and tell you you're right. Fluttershy does have a crush on Twilight.
I AM thinking about a follow up story to this since like, 5 people read it. Since you're one of the five I'll tell you I have another story probably going up tonight. It's just a friendshipping story between Pinkie Pie and Fluttershy.
I'm glad this story didn't disappoint!
Cute.
4793607 Very well said my friend.
Looks good!
Ohmygod this is SO AWESOME!
Pinkie tilted her head. "Maybe I have been avoiding you some. But Fluttershy? We're just good friends who hang out all th... huh. I see what you mean."
Said The Pink Earth Pony To The Cyan Pegasus
Poor Pinkie, always worried her friends are going to abandon her. Great beginning, looking forward to where this goes.
This was quite touching. I really felt for the characters.