During one of Pinkie Pie's famous parties, and a bit of drinking, Fluttershy wants nothing more than to have the host of the party all to herself.
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stoopidity
I'm here to chew bubblegum and showcase my writing skills, and I'm all out of writing skills.
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This was great. Well-paced, atmospheric, and d'aww-worthy. But, alas, I noticed a few mistakes. You commonly switch between past- and present-tense, as well as leave out a few things such as punctuation during dialogue every once in a while. I'd recommend getting an editor/proofreader, and I'd be happy to oblige.
Like I said before, great story!
This was good. Really really good. I'm impressed.
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I appreciate the feedback again, and seeing as I made the same mistakes *cough* again, I'd be glad to have your help.
i definetly agree with your author note she is wierdest drink
great story by the way 5/5 moustaches
i meant drunk damn auto-correct......
Very well written!
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That iPhone tho
This is one of the few stories that it irritated me that Pinkie broke the Fourth wall. I mean it is a steamy romance and then it has a comedy jab. Gah I just need to get over it, it was a great story. I'd think that Fluttershy would be a lightweight as I tend to think of her as the smallest of the group. That's probably due to her presence though. Love the fancy British Fluttershy pic.
A pretty good story, yes
That was cute!
Good story.
Neither did I!
This is like the third fanfiction I've read where that happens.
Pinkie breaks the fourth wall!
You know in Steel Resolve's "Green", Fluttershy does freak out the morning after her first time with Rarity. But she was slightly intoxicated there too. 
I admit that was pretty funny, especially Rainbow Dash and Rarity showing up as they did when they did.
I haven't seen a lot of Pinkie Pie and Fluttershy pairings or Rainbow Dash and Rarity as well. I think because on the show you don't see them together much. But you do make a compelling argument for Pinkie and Fluttershy.
OMFG THIS WAS BRILLIANT. it is rare to catch me blushing at school, then i made the mistake of watching this brilliant fanfic. OMG i dont know if my face has ever been a brighter red before. i'm almost sad to see this end so quickly but non-the less it was amazing.
3459258 That's for you to figure out.
3460943 You read this at school? I would've love to seen that.
3461010 well i have straight a's so my teachers cant complain about the fact i goof off during class. XD i'm typing this during algebra 2
twas nice
This was very good. At first I wasn't sure how the Pinkie and Fluttershy would work out, but the way you wrote it,
I couldn't have said it any better.
Great story!!!!
Great story, but I feel like it needs some editing (for general flow).
Also, maybe ponies have a higher general tolerance, but 13 drinks would put most human girls in a coma.
Conclusion: Fluttershy is best drinking pony. 
The impending drunk-sex with Fluttershy was a bit...
A lot of folks would call that rape, since Pinkie is totally sober. And the way she reassured Fluttershy that it was OK to continue despite Fluttershy's inebriation was a bit... 
In my experience, sober people who want to have sex with me when I'm drunk are not relationship material.
I still liked this story, though. I especially enjoyed your description of Pinkie and Flutterhy making out, and Fluttershy's feelings for Pinkie are nicely elaborated upon. Plus, I'm still lol'ing at the random Rarity/RD drunk-ship!
There needs to be (if there is, point me to it) a ship-fic with mane six on mane six, but all of them forgetting the very next morning because of such intense hangover, that would even cause Celestia to refuse raising the sun.
Someone must write it for the hilarity, romance, and the complete randomness of it all.
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Damn mmmm.... then i guess that if... if Pinkie and Shy were together, and RD and Rare-bear (Rare-bear what the hay?), and no one have seem AJ and Twilight again... maybe... just maybe... O_O HOLY CELESTIA, TWILIGHT IS SAVING KANTO FROM THE ATTACK OF MEWTWO AND THE CLONES?, and AJ must be home in bed cuz she needs to get to work tomorrow, XD jajajjaa
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I approve.
3461815 I think ponies must have a much higher tolerance than humans 'cause of their larger size. And their multiple stomachs.
This was actually not as cheesy as I thought it would be. Good work. Although tbh, the wholw "fanfiction" statement was a bit unnessessary and sorta drew me out of the story a little bit...
3464156 Quiet Breeze
Anyway, since these are cartoon ponies, I think I'll let myself bend a bit on the tolerance thing. The fact of the fic is that Fluttershy's tolerance is what the author made it out to be, for whatever reason. 
Ponies (equines) have only one stomach (source). Also, if the Equestria Girls DVD cover is any indication, ponies are smaller than humans.... actually, now that I look more closely at that picture, I'm willing to bet pony Twilight has more body mass than skinny human Twilight.
I still couldn't drink 13 beers, though. I'd get all
3468036 Oh. Now I feel dumb.
I thought horses had two and cows had four stomachs, but thanks for clearing that up! And I doubt I could drink 13 beers either. I'd probably end up in a coma or something. 
That ending... XD
Cute (hot?) story, all around.
3468036 join the navy itll help with your drinking. I can take 14 shots and 8 beers in only a couple hours. 3 of the shots being japanese habu sake ( look it up if you dont know)
I like this story and i really hope there is more to come
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That's amazing! I think I'll pass on joining up, though... girls my size aren't usually considered Navy material. 
Also, I'm Canadian, so we may or may not be talking about the same Navy. 
H>>3475531 lol no i would advise against any persoN joinging the american navy just to get alcohol tolerance. This job sucks but its still a great story
3462724 hmmm... What do I receive for this endeavour
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An original story, the admiration that comes with it, a possible 'Featured' if it's done well and well circulated, perhaps a sizable following...
In other words, fame, glory, respect, others who have your back...
You know... The usual promise of power made by evil spirits in exchange for your soul.
3476517 you have a deal, message me your e-mail, ill hit you up
That was beautiful
That was adorable. Good job sir.
Very cute couples in this one, nice work.
^0^ I loved it
^0^ I loved it
Excellent story. You should make a sequel
Finally got around to reading this, it was pretty nice.
I can't believe I forgot to favorite this awesome story when I read it the other week! Now I see you have a sequel so..*runs to go read the sequel*
Simply exquisite can't wait to read the sequel I give props to the author
This was such a great story!
The hell was I reading...?
That was hilarious! Fluttershy obviously isn't only the weirdest drunk, but also the cutest... although drunk-Twilight might be major competition. Hmmm. There has to be a good all-the-mane-six-get-horribly-drunk-while-having-a-sleepover-fanfiction somewhere around...
Off to the sequel, I go!
Thank you.
how to kiss step one:find some girl/boy
Step two:find sunglasses
Step three:find out where some one else is kissing
step four:break in while kissing you'r girl/boy
step five:its time to party down stairs
Good job author! You've successfully won the (not coveted) Deadpool award!
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Omg I loved it SOOOOO MUCH!!! Best FlutterPie fanfic that I have EVER read so far!!
This and it’s sequel combine to make the definitive FlutterPie fanfic! But I’m always gonna be a bit bummed that this didn’t get a RariDash spin-off