'It was an unspoken promise between them. It was one that wasn’t just guarded; it was kept in a steel chest, wrapped in chains, locked tight with a padlock and the key thrown into raging rivers. It was a promise protected by the age long feeling of loyalty.'
Rainbow Dash is awfully good at breaking things. However, there are some things that she likes in one piece.
Pinkie Pie is one of those things.
Cover thingy doodled up by me.
Page generated in 0.106 seconds
Total duration
1,097 users online
1,737,022 hits today, 1,822,946 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
GAIZ... Gaiz. I really don't mind you down voting but I'd be super grateful if you told me why. If it just messes with your OTP then tell me. I won't be mad if that's your reason. If it's the writing then let me know what it is exactly about it you don't like.
I'm open to constructive criticism so slap me in the face with it and ram it down my throat if you like. Chances are I'll even thank you for it!
I can't improve this or my writing if you down vote then run away!
Have an awesome day and brony on.
I liked it i don't see any reason for the downvotes. pinkiedash will always be one of my fav ships.
2162830
And yes, I find PinkieDash to be one of the most adorable ships. I can only assume that some people just don't agree until they tell me otherwise.
I'm glad you liked it
that was beautiful
2163605
Thank you, my friend
You asked why people downvoted, so I'll say it may be in the way you've styleized it. Or maybe they just don't like
Pinkie.
Personally, I think it's a sweet story. This is how I think of Pinkie in my headcanon. Yes, she is happy most of the time. But she has sad days. And when they come, they are bad. I love it though, and like I said it's very sweet.
And disrupting an OTP is never a reason to do that. PinkiexTwi is my OTP but that doesn't mean I can't read a story and like others. lol.
2203711
Fun fact for you: First time around it got denied for submission so there's that.
Thank you for the comment and the input and I'm glad we have the same headcanon. After all they all gotta be sad sometimes... Also, PinkieTwi. Yes.
And yeah, I do kind of write in a bit of an odd way
I myself don't really have an OTP but some people get kind of defensive. It's both amusing and a little scary... I'm happy that you enjoyed it though.