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All of the Above


Retired fanficion writer.

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A family kneels and starts to weep, for the Granny that they can't save. They would do anything to take her place, but you know it's hard to understand mysterious ways.

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Comments ( 24 )

I haven't even read it yet and I'm crying. "Swing Low, Sweet Chariot" is what my grandfather sang when he passed away.

The pour thing...

*poor*

But seriously, this was a really good story. I wish it was longer and that I got to see what was in the scroll. Fantastic nonetheless!

Made me tear up, but it needs some spellchecking and such to make it truly great.

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If you want to know what was in the scroll, feel free to check out the next chapter.

The chariot taking her strangely reminds me of how Elijah was taken to Heaven on a flaming chariot and a whirlwind.

Am i allowed to use the "Home" idea?:twilightsheepish:

:raritycry: that was amazing

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Thanks... who put you up to this?

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I might sound stupid but i have absolutely no idea wut ur talking about. :twilightblush:

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Who in the world is doom trot

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Did he hire you to read this? Then did he pay you to say that this was a good story.

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I have this weird feeling that i should say yes just to make u mad but since im nice im gonna say no

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So you're serious? This is a good story?

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Yea its awesome. This is the first story that I've read on here that made me cry

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No problem man u deserve it

PresentPerfect
Author Interviewer

Hi. Canterlot Guardian asked me to read and review this story, and truth be told, I didn't like it very much. You can read the review here. If you'd like, I can give you some editing advice, because I feel sort of bad about how that turned out. :/

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I appreciate your critique and honesty (Applejack would be proud) And yes, it does need some editing. I just never got to it.

This is a very good and very sad two-shot.

This fic was so sad, yet it felt... A bit heartwarming?.. (don't question my mind and emotions...) :pinkiesad2:

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