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Princess Celestia feels that Ponyville is over populated with ponies and she has not been a good leader like she once was. She fears rebellion and being overthrown, so she seeks Princess Twilight Sparkle's help and together, they come up with the most evil and horrific plan. After they follow through with their plan, Twilight Sparkle needs to cover up the facts about what just happened and pretends to give help and aid to those who are suffering and dying, by presenting new medical practices that nopony had ever heard of before. It's up to Twilight Sparkle's friends to uncover the truth about what happened to Ponyville and to discover the horrors that lie behind these new medical treatments.

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Nice story. I`m not sure what to think of this, but it was definitely a nice idea and the writing was pretty good.

2963231 Thank you. I know it's hard to stomach, but I'm glad you were able to enjoy it. I appreciate your kind words.

2963244 Well, I`m happy that I made you happy! :heart:

This is the saddest mlp killer pony fanfic I've read, hooves down.

2963685 I think I have written sadder, but yes, I agree. This is very sad and is one of my saddest fics I have ever done. Life is sad, and the things that happen in this story happen all the time in real life. Thank you for reading. :heart:

2963749 I do! I write many different kinds of stories including some that are just made to make you go D'awww and smile. I see you have already found and added to your favorites my adult "mature" rated fic I did. There are quite a few sad stories, but the saddest story I feel I have done so far is called "Being Honest and Loyal, Even in the Face of Death" That was so hard for me to write because of how sad it was. Feel free to check out any other stories. I have written lots and I will keep writing as long as new ideas pop in my head. Thanks for showing so much interest in my stories! :heart:

2964001 I am sad to admit that I really didn't have a clue as to what you were referring to. The best I could guess is that I heard a song called Move Your Dead Bones from a dance video game series called Mungyodance. I just looked it up and realized it's a film from the 1980's. I guess it goes to show that I'm not too much of a movie guy! I didn't have any inspiration from that movie, but I heard a lot of people talk about re-animator before. I just had no idea it was an actual film. Maybe I should go see it. :twilightsheepish:

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That song was from a soundtrack in the Re-Animator Series. Just look the series up, the pic itself seems to be a ponified pic of one of the Re-Animator films, down to the glowing green goo in the needle.

2967450 Wow. I had no idea. Thanks for letting me know!

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Yeah, but remember, it was a old horror story before it was a film.

This was so terribly funny. I take it the Flim Flam Brothers are supposed to be Monsanto?

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No problem.
You know, ever since "Crystal Empire" parts 1 and 2, I thought about Celestia's true nature. About how she managed to learn those dark spells King Sombra had used.
What if... Princess Celestia was secretly Sombra's apprentice? What if she had planned to kill him after learning everything he knew, like Darth Sidious toward Plagueis, but had to banish him instead? What if she affected Luna's makeover and created Nightmare Moon to gain sympathy? What if she had used Twilight to kill Sombra so that she could get his horn and find the Alicorn Amulet, Sombra's most prized possession?

2996734 You are thinking very deep with this. Those are some creative ideas, but as far as the official show goes.....I don't think they could allow the show to be that dark! That could be a great idea for a fan fic, but the official show makers can't even flat out admit that Applejack's parents are dead in the show even though they give hints about it in the show and they have confirmed those hints are about Applejack's deceased parents. The show can only go so far because it still needs to cater to kids, but that's what fan fic writers are here for! :raritywink:

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It's worth looking into to, though, right?

2997160 Sure! Absolutely! almost anything can be a possibility! :pinkiegasp:

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And what if Celestia taught Twilight as the kind, understanding teacher in her studies, while torturing and training Sunset Shimmer into being her Maul-like assassin at the same time? What if Sunset managed to escape something she did not want to be a part of and became a rival of Celestia? Should Celestia meet Sunset again in the human world after Equestria Girls, I doubt she'd be as forgiving and compassionate as Twilight; and Sunset, barely beginning to learn about friendship, won't have the others to save her from this:

2997467 I don't know much about Sunset Shimmer because I haven't seen Equestria Girls yet. Thankfully, that comes out very soon and I will be buying the Blu-ray as soon as I can. Although, putting it all together from what I heard about the story of the movie, you made some very good points, and I'm sure I'll understand more about what you're talking about when I'm finally able to sit down and watch it. :pinkiehappy:

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I'm sure you'll see my meaning, once you've watched the movie.

This was awesome! Very well written~ Although the ending did seem a bit rushed...But still ^^ :derpytongue2:

3011103 Thank you! I am very well known for that rushing feeling through out many of my stories. I kind of write like Rainbow Dash. Little to no details, fast paced, and right to the point. I know working on slowing the pacing down is something I should consider. I'm glad you were able to enjoy the story. Thanks for taking time to read it, and thanks for the fav! :rainbowkiss:

Riiiiiiiiight.... I have to ask, this is a troll fic right? you cant possibly believe anything you've written, like the stuff about vaccines and fluoride. Also in terms of story, you do know Ponyville is just one small village in all of Equestria, I don't see how it's population could become big enough to pose any 'threat'

3061777 There are lies and misinformation everywhere, but if you do some digging, you will find the truth. This is not a troll fic, and one of the vaccines that inspired me to kill Scootaloo, and ruin Fluttershy's life was based off of the real life horror stories of a vaccine called Gardasil that has killed and destroyed the lives of some girls who got the shot. Look up the ingredients to vaccines, learn about the history of fluoride and how the Nazi's were the first to use it in drinking water on their captive Jews in order to dumb them down and to pacify them so that they wouldn't revolt. Do some digging on your own. You might be surprised by what you find.

Like I said in the story, Ponyville is not a small town anymore. This is way later in the future when the population is much greater.

3061841 I don't need to 'go digging' because I was actually educated, both in biology and history

3061892 And do you think that just because you got an education means that everything the school teaches is right and that it does not hide information that would be upsetting to many?

If you feel you know the truth, then go on your merry way. I'm not going to start an argument with you. I spend way too much time as it is responding to other people's comments and messages to me. I have more stories to write as well.

Thanks.

So, "most unnatural medicine is evil" huh? And what was that bit about being an obedient christian prevents you from getting sick? Sounds a lot like the "cristian scientist" cult to me, they claim all diseases are results of disobedience.

3745600 Christian Scientist Cult? I'm not even sure what you're referring to. Living a Godly lifestyle includes healthy eating and living. The message isn't, being a good Christian will never get you sick. All diseases and problems ARE the result of the original disobedience in the Garden of Eden.

You know when i see the story picture, i thought it would involve Hebert West the Reanimator, a bit sad it didn't.

No! S-s-sweetie belle? Why... :raritycry: :fluttercry: I hate you twilight!!! :applecry: rest in peace sweetie belle and scoot also :unsuresweetie: :scootangel:

3770331 I would like to personally thank you for writing this. Thought I already was aware of what is happening today, this story opened my eyes and made me realize what we have become. So thank you, for spreading the word and hopefully, more people can see this. :heart: Then maybe we can all understand how wrong we are. :heart: thank you.

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