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-Brutus


There’s always room for a story that can transport people to another place.

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After having her parents violently taken from her, Twilight Sparkle, succumbed to unknown magic and influence, turned her back on harmony and declared war on existence itself, until the combined power of the princesses, the remaining elements of harmony and the pain of a broken heart finally crushed her power in half and sealed her soul into the Moon, while isolating the dark influence far away, in the frozen north.

Now, after twenty years since her banishment, the tides of fate have turned once again, as the tainted, primordial magic known as hatred finally shatters her bonds. A Crimson Dawn emerges, ready to devour the very life of the world."

Disclaimer: I DID NOT WRITE THIS, Femto DID.

He deleted his story while ago and he didn't have the chapters anymore on his computer, but I did so I requested him if I could upload Hour of Twilight on account so everypony out there who liked/loved the story can read it once again! I got only up to chapter 14 and I will release a chapter every two days.

His own words in private message (proof): Femto: Alright, you have my permission to upload it, finish it, continue it, do whatever you like with it. But Silverghost and Crimson Dawn are 'copyrighted' XD

Chapters (14)
Comments ( 82 )

Oh my god, no way... The "shit just got real" story?! :pinkiehappy:

Well this is interesting, are we supposed to know who AJ's husbad is by the description of the two kids or will that be revealed later? because I'm drawing a total blank with that. other than that Nice work!

Ohhh it's back! Ohhhhh! I love this story! :twilightsheepish:

I was such a noob when I started writting this fic, I realized too late how rough and inconsistent it was. I had an obsession with weird ships and characters that no one would give a damn, and completely unrelated to the story, such as AJ and her kids: totally uncalled. I guess I still have time to learn... while I am mentally preparing for a challenge a friend of mine made.

Still, it's good to see that some ponies appreciated it :pinkiecrazy:

oooo i remember this story. I think i still have it saved somewhere too, can't wait to see it continue!

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I got up to chapter 14! I will release a chapter per day, or two. Enjoy this story being restored to its former glory!

I would like to add, SPREAD THE WORD to everypony that you know that liked/loved this story that it's back.

2274737 <---- ALL thanks to this awesome guy. :rainbowdetermined2:

So, uhh, not to sound too harsh, but how about including an actual description in the description? :facehoof:

2275704 Yeah, I need to ask Femto of what his original description was.

Haven't seen the original...but I'm eager to see what's next

2276622 This is the original, down to exact words and all that Femto wrote.

So.... Equestria's version of the Frozen Throne, yes?

Liking it so far.

~Skeeter The Lurker

Oh yes, I remember this chapter.

Well, rainbows definitely dead.

I think it's time to say it.... shit's getting real.

Sooo..... Am I to understand that this excellent story was never finished? Simply because the files were lost?

If that's so... I'm glad SOMEONE is taking the time to revive, what is so far, a damn good story.

~Skeeter The Lurker

2284051 It was completed. Epilogue, however haven't been written when Femto lost it. I probably should pest him to write it so it can be truly 'complete'.

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Do it. To leave it with out such would be a crime.

~Skeeter The Lurker

2284206 2284136 Apparently many still imagine I lost the story. I did not, I simply deleted it, not wanting to be buzzed almost every day to write the epilogue, which by far was the hardest thing to do, since I wanted to continue with a sequel to reveal more of the plot, such as the whole Idea behind Abaddon and the balance between good and evil.

But, I kinda had a nervous breakdown when the 'complaints' about the epilogue didn't stop coming, with Feesh (former pre-reader and editor) abandoning me, and a horrible season 3 forced me to do this. And I have no regrets. As I told Morf in the reply, he is free to do with the story whatever he likes, even come up with his own ending, I don't care.

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Oh. Musta misread that then. Sorry about that.

Sorry to hear about your nervous breakdown. Hope you're doing better.

~Skeeter The Lurker.

try and get the draphts for the follow up story while you're at it. also I love this twilight.:pinkiehappy:

Ah yes, now starts their... odd journey.

and yet another of the many brilliant story's that got me into fimfiction.net and into fan fiction writing and reading.:twilightsmile: so glad to see it coming back into the readable format.

Why blind brony Why!

He missed the like button and now there is 1 Dislike :raritydespair::raritydespair:

Wow, give my compliments to Giuliabeck... Just wow

This chapter was named 'By any means necesary' me thinks..

it's not too often i see the name Brendan being used, other than when i use it. cuz that's my name.

I can feel that this is coming mighty close to a close but I also have the feeling that you still have a few tricks up your sleeve. This chapter was awesome and I can't wait for the next one. Keep writing!

My author's note since an eternity ago? You can remove it...

2315029 Still need that closing chapter you were planning on giving us... that is if you wish.:twilightsmile:

2315080 I'm trying to find the alternate ending, it's in here somewhere :trixieshiftleft::trixieshiftright:

2315179 I already sent ch 14 to ya :trixieshiftleft::trixieshiftright:

no wonder Luna and tia are so fucked in the head, with parents like that? how could they not be

YES!! I knew Twilight, was in there somewhere. This story is about to get a lot more intense.

2319497 There just one more, last chapter but Femto is going over that atm (editing or something)

Comment posted by Femto deleted Mar 30th, 2013

I liked the alternate ending that the original author wrote for this, but this does have more feels...

So, is this the end? Or is there an epilogue scheduled to come out?

I hate for death to be the end for Twilight since she was mostly innocent and this story has already depicted the after life realms that the deceased go to.

Why do you have to make me cry?!:fluttercry: Good chapter though and can't wait to see how this story finally ends.

2359603 I have High hopes that Femto can find and finish... eh hammer out the final ending of the story. I just wish he was able to make the sequel. I'm sad that I probably will never see it though.

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I told Morfonius in a recent mail that I don't want to have anything to do with HoT again, and he is free to do whatever he wants with it.

2362520 awwww... ok:fluttercry:.

sorry about the confusion.:scootangel:

I couldnt stop myself from crying in the end :fluttercry:

Btw I hope you will make more chapters of this story because it's amazing strory.

Ha, this story didn't even jerk my tears!:pinkiecrazy:

All I got is a reminder of why I hate other people.
My heart is cold and dying of hate, anger, saddness, and depression.



I've become so numb. I can feel you there. I've become so tired. Much, much more aware. Becoming that I want to do, be more like me and less like you.



Figure the sorce for that cuz I have no idea.

How can it hurt so much to read this?:raritycry:

I just can't like the fact that Twilight dies. After all this struggle she just dies? Fuck this. This kills the thumb I wanted to give the story... :twilightangry2:

2425429 I wanted to continue it in a different way, then I got lazy and killed her off in a second. Ha :ajbemused:

Edit: Forgot, you should mark the story as cancelled.

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