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Brian Jacko


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Fluttershy seeks help because Angel Bunny has been suddenly misbehaving. After doing everything she can for him, she ventures off to see Discord for help. Can Discord really help Fluttershy's ability to get Angel Bunny under control? More importantly, can he still be trusted with his magic?

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The other story... THAT YOU HAVE YET TO FINISH!:flutterrage:

Was this a crossover? Because I feel like I've missed some vital piece of context that prevents it from being really stupid.

2904254 I actually have no idea. That's a good question. I don't "think" it is, but I'm not sure. 2903870 I did consider adding more to that story, but I feel as if it's good enough on it's own. If something really good pops into my mind, perhaps I may go back and add, but right now I'm very happy with that story as it is. I don't want to make it longer either or repeat themes that can be boring.

meh not the most logical or sensible plus it felt a tad unnecessary and forced but it did kinda make sense but only in a one dimensional way meaning that all the MK characters felt forced and 1 dimensional

2904279 This is what SEQUELS :flutterrage: are for. :raritywink:

How I felt as the story progressed. :yay::pinkiehappy::rainbowlaugh::rainbowhuh::ajbemused::facehoof:

I thought the opening was great but then the writing went down hill as they entered the MK universe. Funny-ish just not my bag, and I can say that this was quite a unique read... :pinkiecrazy:

2933067 As long as you got a few giggles out of it, then I am satisfied! This story was supposed to be ridiculous and funny. Thanks for reading!

at first i was like why does the name Shang Tsung sound so familiar, but then you mentioned scorpion and i was like :pinkiegasp: I actulally know what there talking about :pinkiehappy:

2938797 Haha! I'm glad you were able to remember! It's such a classic game, and it is the reason why we have the ESRB in the first place! Good history there! :pinkiehappy:

I would suggest emphasizing that while the corruption or whatever it is gives her a PROPENSITY for violence it doesn't give her skill with her new weapon... either that or she does retain a tiny amount of Kindness in her subconscious. Either one would explain why she can't hit anything.

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