• Member Since 9th Aug, 2012
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Brian Jacko


Applejack is suddenly hit hard with depression and can't snap out of it. Will she be able to uncover the truth as to why she feels this way? Will her friends be able to cheer her up again?

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Fix the wall of text and it will be more read-able

1113120 Wall of text isn't the only problem. There're also misspelled words and such. Grammar's non-existant as well. But first and foremost: JESUS CHRIST THAT'S 8K OF WALL. THE MEXICAN BORDER AIN'T GOT NOTHING ON THIS THING.

You could build another Berlin Wall with all that text.
*badun tsh*:moustache:
Sorry, good story though.
I'm available as a proofreader if you feel you could benefit from one.

This looks interesting.
Ouch, did I just walk into a wall? :derpyderp2:

I just took one look at the wall and didn't bother reading it. And ofcourse this ain't the mexican boarder wall, that has holes in it lol

for the ultimate experience
read while listening to the star wars intro music

Overwhelming wall of text. Might want to fix that. :twilightblush:

I'm really sorry about that guys. I'm very new to writing and this is my second story. It's a short story so I hope you guys can get through that "wall of text" and enjoy it anyway. :)

i wish people would do the same for me -.- but its good and il help if ya need static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/derpytongue2.png

Now that's more like it! This is a good story! And I had almost lost all faith in you!

Now, this suicide works because Applejack has gone through jealousy, depression, corruption and a whole lot of guilt. It's much better than Pinkie killing Scootaloo or Fluttershy eating all her animals. Although you seem to write the ponies as HORRIBLE friends. This is the one time you DO NOT leave your depressed friend alone, or else they might commit suicide. Is that the moral of this story? Did you write this to teach something?

Now that's a happy ending! Thank you so much! I'll take you off my list of people I dislike for now. Keep up the good work!

3409647 Thank you, and no, I wasn't thinking about a certain moral lesson for this aside from the fact that everyone, especially the less fortunate needs love.

I was actually suffering with horrible depression when I wrote this, but I wrote this because I was so inspired by the fact that Discord took away wings and horns in season two, but yet took nothing away from Applejack. At least Pinkie Pie can break the fourth wall and can just about teleport. Applejack has almost nothing. Most of my stories are like this where they care and love each other like in this fic.

I too suffer from this condition at times. A little dark, however, I don't think that it was solved on more than a temp basis. Not too crazy about about the random AppleDash.

I know how you feel! :raritywink:

To be honest:ajsmug:... I love this story:heart: but:pinkiegasp: the only thing I did't like, was apple:ajsleepy: appels everywhere, I guess it beacome to much in the end, but I still love the story. It was just Applejack sent Insane with apples...:applejackconfused:

Oh my..that's SO good... probably one of the best fanfics I've ever read:twilightsmile:

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