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Ruxify
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Is this all lesbian foalcon or is that Featherweight icon supposed to mean he's in?
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You should really just read it to find out, but if you really want to know:
*WARNING SPOILERS*
Feather Weight doesn't participate in any sexual encounters. However, there is a sexual part in the story that isn't lesbian.
as soon as i read the part about featherweight seeing diamond tiarra, i knew where this was going and i could not close my mouth
shit i was wrong
Wow, shortest rape case ever.
Just a bit of FYI:
Applejack is spelled as one word, not two, like in Pinkie Pie
Just like the drink
Um... I would really appreciate some constructive criticism/comments. I don't really write much and I have barely heard anyone's opinions on any of my fics.
I don't know if I'm just fine where I'm at or if I need to step it up a little.
Thanks in advance.
2874373 it's just so... Half assed? Compared to the first one. Things happen?... And... Stuff
Yeah that's kinda like reading this was like. Nothing on the first one.
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I imagined a moment where they wondered who exactly took the photos which lead their investigation to Featherweight.
so those colts rape the shit out of her and shes like oh okay that sucks but what eves... yer no i like the story and even tho that was to show what ab went through i think she could of went though better emtions and what not and anger sadness depression etc etc
fucking feather weight
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Thank you for clearing that up! It felt like something was every time I read Applejack.
WTF???? I forgot to upvote, fav, and follow?
Corrected!
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God dammit, your avatar scared the shit out of me.
i cant tell if weather fether weight is really dumb or really smart
was diamonds room 534 suppose to resem
ble R34
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Woah, no I just picked a random number out of the air. What a weird coincidence.
2896214 cool coincidence
Featherweight aftershow monolog:
"I never did talk to those two, but they seem to be living hapily. Even by the uncouth actions by Tiaria, she taught me something.
Rape solves everythig. That, is todays lesson.
that great fic, I thanks much reading, tiara rape really was not necessary, but I hope some continuity.
No offense, but don't you think they would have at least been a little bothered by two fillies having sex with each other?
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Who's "they"?
... Guffaw. Yeah, I know it was kind of an obvious gag, but there's just something about a genuine double take that gets me every time...
Come to think of it, I don't think I've ever used the word "guffaw" in any of my writing, ever... So, I guess extra points for making me think of it here.
Anyway, Cute little story line, despite all the rape-y bits. Thank you for sharing this with us.
This needs a Sequel... showing Diamond and Blooms life together
A child was arrested for rape.
A under aged PONY was arrested for rape?!
I'm appalled that such a thing can happen in a land as beautiful as Equestria!!
3037340 I concur
3485666 Sequel? somepony needs to write one!!!!!!!!
Diamond was raped
By 3 Colts that cum faster than road runner high on meth.
I don't know where to start...
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, that i could have completely destroyed my hole F*CKING HOUSE! 
Man I got headache.
I loved how this story ended, honest!
I loved how this made me feel, (and no! I'm not talking how it make my... "tool" feel
I mean, last time i felt this strong feelings, I was listening The Swing set by Derphypony22 Warning: Were sad
There was times when I felt so ANGRY
Not for bad story, because I f*cking hate my imagination! (Why? Cause it's too damn good!)
Every story i read, Every. Single. Story I read: there's always part when I thing: What I would do, if I would have possibility to enter it to the story.
After every story: I spent half an hour to just imagining how could I change the story.
Sorry my bad language. I just (augh)
Even thought it wasn't quite what i was looking for, but yeah, thanks for a good story.
Wtf?!? Granted I loved the first (
Here's what (from my point of view) made this story bad: Diamond gets arrested and goes to court and everyone is disgusted, then Diamond explains it was love and suddenly everyone is okay with it...
WTF!
Later Diamond Tiara gets raped.
Basically I'm trying to say is to fix up up how the ponies should react. Not just: "Oh you raped her because you loved her, oh okay I understand now."
I favorited and liked the first and prequel, but on this one I must leave a thumbs down. I'm not saying that this story is the worst thing in world and it needs to be wiped off of this site, I'm just saying that you need to just fix it up a little.
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Uh... I wouldn't say every pony was okay with it... they were just following the Equestrian law as I made it. And it wasn't JUST because Diamond said, "oh, I did it because love". She had sex with Apple Bloom against her will in Forbidden Fruit because she loved her, but being a young filly (and let me add, not a very polite one at that) she didn't understand that it was a wrong thing to do. In the court, Apple Bloom explained that it wasn't much of a problem for her, and seeing as no real damage had been done, a minor punishment was applied to Diamond. If Diamond said the same thing, but Apple Bloom acted hurt, I'm sure nopony at all would've been okay with it, and her punishment would've been much worse.
A lot of people keep putting a lot of hate on the rape scene, but let me explain once and for all why I wrote it:
1. For cloppers that enjoy a darker kind of reading material.
2. To impose a kind of unfair Karma onto Diamond, as the saying goes, she had to "learn the hard way" why forcing sex on another was a bad thing.
3. Did I mention that this was a clop story?
I'm sorry you didn't enjoy this installment, but hopefully a few of your criticisms could be reanalyzed after reading my intentions.
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Okay, I understand. Though I don't approve of it, it is your story and you can do whatever you want with it, I wasn't trying to be mean, I was just trying to state my opinion on this story.
I've read all kinds of clop but never read one with such a violent rape in it. Truth is I had someone close that experience it, so I really disapprove rape stories (unless it leads it to where they love each other in the end
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3748911 quit staring and ask them out already
I'm not usually a fan of these kinds of stories, but this one was really, really good and kept me on the edge of my seat! Well done, my friend. Very well done.
While I liked this story, I feel like it was a bit too short, I think things like DT's stay at the Correctional Facility and the rest of the CMC becoming friends with SS could have been stretched over a few chapters and not all bunched together. But still, it was a good read.
Wish our court system went this quickly. Plea bargains ftw!
thought it was pretty good. then rape......................... wale then................ kinda touchy subject but alright. endinf was a bit curt but at least it was happy.
Great story.
I just have one problem with it.
Filthy Rich prefers to be called "Rich" not "Filthy" he is rather quite clean
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I'm just sayin
diamond no deserved being raped thats really the only thing i dislike/hate in the story
Beautiful. 10/10
3632644 maybe u can make another sequel to this story please
7207350 I'm glad you liked it, but this story is long done.
7208402 OH COME ON!!!!!!!!!!!
3467434 well u gotta think of all the things that has happend in equestria.
3014714 I completely agree with u in that regard.
2894781 here is a twist in the story what if feather wieght was actually in love with apple bloom and he took the pictures in effect eliminating the competition and really feather weight is a master mind. Bum bum BAAA. So that would make feather weight the most intelligent pony in equestria.
7208402 or sequel proving that feather weight loved apple bloom and secretly plotted this whilst he was flying in such an auspicious location and feather weight is actuallty a master mind who has been stalking applebloom from the shadows watching waiting for the moment to strike and that moment areived when diamond came into the picture eliminating diamond and then while she is in rehab he makes his move and charms young apple bloom away from diamond.
Now hows that for a plot.
Just think of the prospective we could create my clever and devlish mind with your eloquent style of writing.
Just think of what we could do together
This was a fantastic story that "made me smile real hard"
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