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Into my favorites you go.

into my 'to fap later' you go.

You have a folder for that too?

I do not get the Dark Tag.

Comment posted by TechnicolorShortie deleted Jan 27th, 2013

Thanks, it wasn't my first story, but it was my first in the third. I'm just hoping it was good enough to be 'enjoyable' for those who like the fillies.

Oh my~
I hope you enjoy it.

I wasn't sure if I should use that tag or not. It's the fact it's about two fillies engaging in dirty lovins that made me think it would apply. I'll freely admit to be being wrong, but I thought, "better safe than sorry".

Seen plenty of fics that have done that without Dark Tag. You're fine without it I think.

Ah, I don't mind removing it if it's an issue. It doesn't really matter to me, but I'll just go ahead and make the change. I'm also kinda thinking that it might be a little misleading since it's all consensual. I'll learn one of these days.

Well the dark tag and the way the description is worded made me worried Babs would be doing it without Appleblooms consent. Take away the Dark tag and it just sounds like youthful experimenting.

Oh yes, youthful experiment is practically the name of the game. Applebloom still could have backed out, and Babs would have dropped the issue. She would've been left to take care of herself, but she wouldn't bully Bloom into having fun. It would've just ruined their new found friendship. Thanks for the save since your argument is pretty solid.

(Joke) Alt. Title: (Funky) Apple Sex Farm: Saucy Babs

This is absolutely disgusting! Foalcon is the WORST form of bestiality! You should be ashamed, author! May our Lord Jesus have mercy on your soul!

2033924 I'm pretty sure that the word 'beastiality' requires at least one human. Otherwise, it's just two animals having sex.

Are you going to continue this?

It's set up so I can write another part, but I don't quite have an idea for it yet. I know where it would go next; however, I need to figure out how I want it all to come together. It originally spawned from a series of e-mails between a friend and I, and I took the task of writing out what we talked about. Kind of like a dare.

I have some other writing I need to do, but my ending does leave me with the feeling that I should write a second part. That's why I left it as incomplete for now.

Short answer: once I find the time and idea for it, I'll make the second part that has been asked for previously.

I ship this, but...

It is "Apple Bloom," my friend, not "Applebloom." I had to learn this myself from my first fic. :moustache:

2033924 Get the fuck off of clopfics if Foalcon ain't your thing, asshole.

You didn't read the story did you.

I saw the name of the chaper and said, "I'm reading this.":rainbowlaugh:

Comment posted by KINGALICORN deleted Jan 29th, 2013

He, pretty good :pinkiehappy:
Would love to read a chapter 2...

That's what happens when you're too lazy to do research sometimes. :derpytongue2:
I did correct it for the other story I posted though.

Oh they made applesauce alright. :rainbowwild: Hope you enjoyed.

Thanks, glad you enjoyed it. As the ending implies, the second part is going to encompass all 4 of the fillies, but I don't have an idea on bringing it together yet. I've never done more than two participants in a clop scene before, so I want to make sure I understand the other two a bit. I wrote ScootsxAnon, and I have to write SweetiexAnon soon. Once I got a good idea on their characters, I may be able to weave some clop that works for the other two. Hot foursome clop with four fillies. I don't feel bad about wanting this.

Too much apple juice perhaps? :trollestia:
Haha, nice.

Sexy,kinky and AMAZING!! :) very awesome story :)

This was awesome!

:heart: and :moustache:

Sorry for taking so long, but part 2 is ready to go and part 3 will begin once I decrease the size of the backlog a bit.
Thanks for readin, and I hope part 2 retains the quality that made you want more in the first place~ :raritywink:

Thank ya kindly, and I'm glad it caught favor. Hope to keep the entertainment going once part 3 is written and uploaded.

HOT :heart: Excellent job with this...

Enjoyed every second... usually read clops because I find them hilarious but... I must say I was suprised. In more ways than one. :rainbowwild:

You sir/ ma'am have written a good story! keep it up! :pinkiehappy:

Comment posted by Dashaloo deleted Jul 15th, 2013

This is all i can say "0.o"

Huh. My first time seeing a fic with Babs Seed and my first time seeing such pairings. You've got my attention. Most interesting story that i'll be checking up on in the future.

oh and btw when babs said "just a lil hotter in here than i expected"...
:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh: sigh

This is really good! Writing a clopfic myself and you've given me many great ideas on how to use different words and how to describe certain things. :twilightsmile:

Keep up the good work and good luck on future projects! :rainbowkiss:

2049370 Hue hue...you like that "forbidden/hidden treasure" analogy, don't you?

gread story :yay::pinkiehappy:
pleass write more:raritystarry:

2623894 how much longer to you expect the hiatus to continue?

I can do a human version very easily, but I will age the girls into their teen years and not go kiddie stuff as there's enough lolli stuff. I do envision Babs doing that sort of thing with Applebloom. In my vision using Equestria Girls, Babs and Sunflower live with the Applejack family.

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