Apple Bloom has finally made friends with Babs. When the two of them decide to spend every moment together in a bath, Babs learns that she wants more than Apple Bloom's friendship.
2032496 Thanks, it wasn't my first story, but it was my first in the third. I'm just hoping it was good enough to be 'enjoyable' for those who like the fillies.
2032686 I wasn't sure if I should use that tag or not. It's the fact it's about two fillies engaging in dirty lovins that made me think it would apply. I'll freely admit to be being wrong, but I thought, "better safe than sorry".
2032782 Ah, I don't mind removing it if it's an issue. It doesn't really matter to me, but I'll just go ahead and make the change. I'm also kinda thinking that it might be a little misleading since it's all consensual. I'll learn one of these days.
2032892 Well the dark tag and the way the description is worded made me worried Babs would be doing it without Appleblooms consent. Take away the Dark tag and it just sounds like youthful experimenting.
2032901 Oh yes, youthful experiment is practically the name of the game. Applebloom still could have backed out, and Babs would have dropped the issue. She would've been left to take care of herself, but she wouldn't bully Bloom into having fun. It would've just ruined their new found friendship. Thanks for the save since your argument is pretty solid.
2034439 It's set up so I can write another part, but I don't quite have an idea for it yet. I know where it would go next; however, I need to figure out how I want it all to come together. It originally spawned from a series of e-mails between a friend and I, and I took the task of writing out what we talked about. Kind of like a dare.
I have some other writing I need to do, but my ending does leave me with the feeling that I should write a second part. That's why I left it as incomplete for now.
Short answer: once I find the time and idea for it, I'll make the second part that has been asked for previously.
2035889 That's what happens when you're too lazy to do research sometimes. I did correct it for the other story I posted though.
2038473 Oh they made applesauce alright. Hope you enjoyed.
2047170 Thanks, glad you enjoyed it. As the ending implies, the second part is going to encompass all 4 of the fillies, but I don't have an idea on bringing it together yet. I've never done more than two participants in a clop scene before, so I want to make sure I understand the other two a bit. I wrote ScootsxAnon, and I have to write SweetiexAnon soon. Once I got a good idea on their characters, I may be able to weave some clop that works for the other two. Hot foursome clop with four fillies. I don't feel bad about wanting this.
I can do a human version very easily, but I will age the girls into their teen years and not go kiddie stuff as there's enough lolli stuff. I do envision Babs doing that sort of thing with Applebloom. In my vision using Equestria Girls, Babs and Sunflower live with the Applejack family.
Into my favorites you go.
into my 'to fap later' you go.
2032533
You have a folder for that too?
2032543
yus
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I do not get the Dark Tag.
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2032496
Thanks, it wasn't my first story, but it was my first in the third. I'm just hoping it was good enough to be 'enjoyable' for those who like the fillies.
2032533
Oh my~
I hope you enjoy it.
2032686
I wasn't sure if I should use that tag or not. It's the fact it's about two fillies engaging in dirty lovins that made me think it would apply. I'll freely admit to be being wrong, but I thought, "better safe than sorry".
2032767
Seen plenty of fics that have done that without Dark Tag. You're fine without it I think.
2032782
Ah, I don't mind removing it if it's an issue. It doesn't really matter to me, but I'll just go ahead and make the change. I'm also kinda thinking that it might be a little misleading since it's all consensual. I'll learn one of these days.
2032892
Well the dark tag and the way the description is worded made me worried Babs would be doing it without Appleblooms consent. Take away the Dark tag and it just sounds like youthful experimenting.
2032901
Oh yes, youthful experiment is practically the name of the game. Applebloom still could have backed out, and Babs would have dropped the issue. She would've been left to take care of herself, but she wouldn't bully Bloom into having fun. It would've just ruined their new found friendship. Thanks for the save since your argument is pretty solid.
(Joke) Alt. Title: (Funky) Apple Sex Farm: Saucy Babs
This is absolutely disgusting! Foalcon is the WORST form of bestiality! You should be ashamed, author! May our Lord Jesus have mercy on your soul!
2033924 I'm pretty sure that the word 'beastiality' requires at least one human. Otherwise, it's just two animals having sex.
Are you going to continue this?
2034439
It's set up so I can write another part, but I don't quite have an idea for it yet. I know where it would go next; however, I need to figure out how I want it all to come together. It originally spawned from a series of e-mails between a friend and I, and I took the task of writing out what we talked about. Kind of like a dare.
I have some other writing I need to do, but my ending does leave me with the feeling that I should write a second part. That's why I left it as incomplete for now.
Short answer: once I find the time and idea for it, I'll make the second part that has been asked for previously.
I ship this, but...
It is "Apple Bloom," my friend, not "Applebloom." I had to learn this myself from my first fic.
2033924 Get the fuck off of clopfics if Foalcon ain't your thing, asshole.
2033924
You didn't read the story did you.
I saw the name of the chaper and said, "I'm reading this."
He, pretty good
Would love to read a chapter 2...
2035889
That's what happens when you're too lazy to do research sometimes.
I did correct it for the other story I posted though.
2038473
Oh they made applesauce alright. Hope you enjoyed.
2047170
Thanks, glad you enjoyed it. As the ending implies, the second part is going to encompass all 4 of the fillies, but I don't have an idea on bringing it together yet. I've never done more than two participants in a clop scene before, so I want to make sure I understand the other two a bit. I wrote ScootsxAnon, and I have to write SweetiexAnon soon. Once I got a good idea on their characters, I may be able to weave some clop that works for the other two. Hot foursome clop with four fillies. I don't feel bad about wanting this.
2047494
Too much apple juice perhaps?
Haha, nice.
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NOW!
Thank you
Sexy,kinky and AMAZING!! :) very awesome story :)
=D
This was awesome!
and
This is all i can say "0.o"
oh and btw when babs said "just a lil hotter in here than i expected"...
sigh
2049370 Hue hue...you like that "forbidden/hidden treasure" analogy, don't you?
loved it
Wanky
I can do a human version very easily, but I will age the girls into their teen years and not go kiddie stuff as there's enough lolli stuff. I do envision Babs doing that sort of thing with Applebloom. In my vision using Equestria Girls, Babs and Sunflower live with the Applejack family.