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Ruxify
Preoccupied with making colorful equines kiss and stuff.
Ruxify
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nice story but really weird
... Fucking adorable. And I mean that both ways.
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delicius, grat job, i like it, the most important thing: continued?
sya yes! please 
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I just wanted this to be a one shot, but I may indeed make another chapter if this amazingly good reception continues.
Its weird but I'd be lying if I said I didn't like it
THE AMOUNT OF WAT
IS TOO DAMN HIGH
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Admit it, you like it, and you like it a lot.
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That's it, it's over, and you got what you got.
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Wait what? I'm not following you. What's over, and what did I get?
2740792 Rhymes!
But...
You get nothing! You lose! Good DAY sir!
WHY DO I READ THEESE!?!?!?!?!?!
I did notice quite a few mistakes. I'm sorry, I'm a total grammar Nazi... I can't stand the mistakes... If I wasn't so packed I would help out and edit it for you... but I need your permission first
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If you really want to, go ahead. I have no idea how we would go about it though, as I am a new author on this site, unless of course you email me the changes. Just PM me, and I'll send you my email.
Alright, hit 1,000 views in just a few days! Thanks, guys!
So, here's my take on this story:
I like Apple Bloom (see my story, Raven Mane), and I think that the Diamond Tiara character has lots of good potential. However, I think for this story to work properly, there needs to be more of a backstory as to why Apple Bloom is allowing her arch-enemy eat her out and such. I mean, it's good and I could definitely clop to this. But it comes across as a bit clumsy at times.
Overall, though, excellent. Have an upvote!
2744139 I'll probably send you a PM containing the story changed in grammar and spelling, nothing else. If you want to be reassured that I'll do a good job. If you want to be reassured that I will do a good job, read this story that I edited and its sequal.
I will work on it as soon as I can.
this story i like it ANOTHER!! please
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Alright, fair enough. I have now decided: I will be making a prequel and a sequel to this in the future.
However, I don't think I will go beyond that, just to protect the story from jumping the shark.
Check this out: http://www.fimfiction.net/blog/181458/moar-is-coming
I mean I liked and all but cdn.memegenerator.net/instances/250x250/20962467.jpg
YES. That is all.
2742659 Because you were curious?
As for my comments to the author, reading this was a good experience. I'm no critic, but as an avid reader, I do say otherwise on the plot of the story and how it wad executed.
Nice word smithtry ya got there.
This one gets a 3/5,