Fire Emblem Crossover
Marked Defiance (Mark for short), a mischievous unicorn, not to mention apprentice to Equestria's Royal Tactician, finds himself in a whole new and dangerous world by accident.
After being saved by a local named Lyndis, he is set on an adventure that will test his skills and quite possibly his sanity. But can he and the friends that he gathers, stop the forces threatening to destroy both worlds?
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If you do dislike it and you press the dislike button, at least let me know why so that I can improve.
This is my very first written fanfiction. I appreciate honest and constructive criticism so that my story and writing will get better as it progresses.
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Crossover of My Little Pony and Fire Emblem (Will follow the seventh game's plot to a point)
Rated Teen for cursing, violence, and sexual themes (No Clop)
For those who'd like to know how I'm splitting the story arcs and it's primary focus, it's as follows:
* = Complete
^ = In Progress
$ = Planned
*Lyn's Story (Where I started and got used to writing while introducing the crossover)
*Chrysalis' Story (I split off into Equestria to practice my original content as well as provide an engaging FE style plot in Equestria)
$Eliwood/Hector/Mark's Story (Where I use everything I learned from the previous arcs to tell a familiar tale in an interesting new way)
Edited by Neiha(Retired) and IRpony. Without these two, the story would be a lot worse. Trust me.
Cover Art by: littletea10
Disclaimer:
I do not own MLP or Fire Emblem (unless you count the GBA cartridge), they belong to Hasbro and Nintendo respectively.
YES A FE7 AND MLP CROSSOVER! I really hop this story will turn out well!
2720513
Thank you, I hope to live up to your expectations and more.
I LOVE THIS MOAR!!! [Will twi and the Others then Warp to Lycia???
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I'm not trying to spoil too much but, yes, though I hadn't planned it in Lyn's story.
2728315 I see [But For Fun you should have that Mark Mistakes Lucius for a woman at first
2728340
Oh, I shall....I shall do that and more, muahahahahaha
Nice. It's turning out well, I have to say.
2732858
Thank you. I'm trying.
Ive been through this site alot and your story is the only that has truly caught my eye.. Its GREAT!!! and I cant wait for more!
2738384
Thank you, I hope that it continues to do so.
Fucking epic! Great work.
LOL mark Assumed Lucius was a woman
2758189
Well it was a good suggestion.
2758193 I can;t wait for his Reaction when he Finds Out Lucius is [male]
2758205
Hector and Mark gun' have a reckoning when they meet again...
2758433
You got that right
This is pretty good, there are some distracting formatting errors, text color changes that aren't to friendly on the eyes, and a few things just feel... off.
Aside from that, this is alright by me
2773813
Thank you, thats good to know. I'll start using a color that's a bit friendlier on the eyes on my newer chapters. But could you go into some more specifics about the formatting errors and what feels off? I want this story to be worthy of both Fire Emblem and MLP.
I thought that this was a great chapter:).
Or imaignje iof during the travel he goes back to being a Unicorn?
2775733
Thats a good idea. I actually didn't think of that until now. I will remember it for the future
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Thank you for the offer, but I don't exactly know what you mean
2778238
Well, I opened myself up for the other fire emblem games when I mentioned the different continents, but this one I'm focusing on his adventure in Rekka no ken (Blazing Sword). If this story does well by the end of it though, I'll probably go onto making sequels.
Also, I was thinking pegasi, but not wild ones. That would be too dangerous *wink*
2778288 HE MUST MEET IKE! HE MUST!
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Go ahead. I'm always happy to get suggestions and ideas.
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(Unless I get overwhelmed
But remember, even if the suggestion is good, if it doesn't fit what I have planned it may not make it into the story.
2778533
Why wouldn't I?
Fans usually have great ideas. That's how fanfiction was made (from what I think anyways). And as a (very new) author, I'm honored that fans of my story would want to help out with either critiques or suggestions.
2778609
Ok, now you're scarying me. Stop reading my mind.
LOL.
2778763
Then I shall await it.
Also don't forget to check out my blog about the main six.
2776519
I'm saving that for later.
2794001
Thank you.
Anything that needs work?
2794029 There are some wrongly placed quotation marks, and some other things I would have to go back and read for, but other than that it's good!
2794180
Thanks, I'll try to look out for those in the future.
Any other advice?
2794347 Other than giving Sain and Kent a Knight's Crest? Nope XD
2794388
Nice
Hey, does anyone know how to post pictures on your user page?
I used the pony creator to make some OCs (Including Mark) and I wanted to post them on my page, but I seem to be having trouble.
Well done. I loved the story. Just a question, you will be continuing on to chapter 11 to 31... Right?
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Why of course. I'm planning on doing the year in-between Lyn and Eliwood/Hector's story in Equestria, then moving back onto the story (w/ Mane six included
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alright then! I'll be looking forward to this! Carry on writing, you're doing great!
2822003
Im glad i've stuck with this story... It's fucking GREAT!
Definitely improving, although there are those little ones that get past. One thing though; The Mani Kati is an Armorslayer on steroids, and is effective against knights. Lyn wouldn't need that Armorslayer at all.
2823100
You have a good point, plus the mani kati is lighter so you'd get a 2x attack. I'll try to avoid those little mistakes in the future.
Still, it would be pretty cool for Lyn to duel wield wouldn't it.
2823256 Indubidably.
The last third of this chapter is italicized, just though you ought to know. Also, why would you use klicks as a measure of distance here? wouldn't 8 miles or the like sound more appropriate to the "times"?
2873287
Well...Sperze is former (griffin) military so I thought it would be appropriate.
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And about the italicized.....I'll try to fix that. Silly little mistakes.
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the thing about klicks I'm trying to get across is that it is a very "modern" military term, not something you would expect a "medieval" setting. Anyway, you should look for excuses to use a word like 'furlongs", at least I would. (But I may be insane).
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Well one thing you have to remember is that Equestria has mixed technology. Ex. Straw thatched cottages, but have trains too.
Besides, I honestly have no idea what a furlong is
(I've only heard the term once or twice).