An old enemy wakes from its slumber, bringing chaos to the world. Forgotten legends of the past are remembered, bringing on an unknown tale erased from history. An ancient group that dwells in the shadows finally rises after all this time, planning and waiting for the right moment to strike. The magic in the air is now alert, searching for one pony. One pony who will wield the power to fight back against the darkness.
Link used to be an ordinary apple farmer, until one event in his life changes him forever. He now roams the land in search for answers. He meets old tribes and creatures long forgotten, finally showing themselves to the world. He finds new places appearing out of nowhere, never marked on a normal map. Nature has started to act more strangely than normal, hiding what appears to be one of the most guarded legends of Equestria. With his will contesting against everything in the world, will Link survive to bring a new era of peace? Or will he fall to the monsters brought out to this world again?
Note: I do not own any Legend Of Zelda content in story. The summary for this story also has been updated as I thought the old one was too bare. Beware of spoilers in comments
Cover art made by GemiNiah, who I am extremely grateful for spending the time and effort for making this, even though they didn't have to.
I also got featured on 3/26/17!! Thank you guys so much for the support!!
Amazing
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Glad you think so
6517359 hey its great and it would kill me if it was on hiautis (bad grammer) or it was cancelled
Already loving this and can't wait to see more
Why doesn't this have more likes?
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It is a pretty new story.
Orca is from wind waker, how does this story not have more likes it is so well written and I hope for more soon
Hm... five stars. Looking forward to what comes next.
Yay
Updated!
*stares at the story* this tale... Intrigues me..... Make more chapters.
Good stuff *thumbs up*
If Link was voiced, what would he sound like?
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I have no clue. I just sort of imagine a dumbed down version of his grunts to imagine what he sounds like
The plot thickens, I am interested to where this all leads.
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I'd imagine MasakoX's gohan or a young Edward Elric would fit the voice of this Link. All though I have been wrong before.
Beware the Cuccos!
Bottomless hat, nice touch I'll tell you that, good chapter and can't wait to see more.
So Caretaker is a Sheikah. I'll be honest, I did not see that one coming. Nice job.
Re-reading this from the start again now that theres a new chapter out, and I am flabbergasted that this story hasn't recieved more likes. Are people just not reading it? Because I don't think that read this would be able to stop themselves from clicking that like button.
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How about now? This is seriously criminal, would you mind if I shunted it into a few different groups?
Very nice development on Caretaker and Link, can't wait to see what else happens with them
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I don't mind at all. I thank you for liking it so much
When did Applejack get hands?
Last sentance it says Applebloom took the peice of paper from Applejacks HANDS?
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Thanks for pointing that out. I fixed immediately.
Wow,this story's growing out in me. Keep up the good work! Also is Link here still a child like Applebloom or...?
6741154 nevahmind!! Read the rest of the chapters...also who replies to their own comments -_-
This is truly very a fun and great story so far I do hope you continue it. Oh that part at the end with Sword crying got me laughing so hard
Story has been great, I may already have a guess on who the mysterious figure Link met this chapter was, can't wait to see what happens next
6777601 Me too!
I'm guessing that was Fi? If so cool. I've always liked Fi.
Neat chapter.
Wind waker too, haha, keep up the good work dude
I can't wait for link to get to ponyville
Awesome chapter! The fight scene was really well done.
Magic Radiation huh for some reason I thinking of the witcher 3 and potions there have the same mechanics
Interesting premise...I'm gonna track this for now...
More please.
This is good, real good
Hmmm...this was really good, though I will say that I wish the story had a bit brisker pace. This chapter was wonderful! I can't wait to see what Link names the fairy.
Haha, once again another great chapter. And hey, you're playing Majora's Mask and Twilight Princess. You will definitely love them.
Good. I love Zelda (hence I picked this up). You have a bit of confusion between keeping the past tense and present tense. It would be easier to read if they were straightened out.
Ouch. The line where Luna says "Leave us...to sleep...thine sister." Killed me. The pain! Thine means yours, or your. What she would have said would have been mine sister or even sister of mine. Also, you don't need to state whose point of view it is after every transition. It makes the passage feel redundant, especially if you open with the characters in question.
Some suggestions: try reading your passages out loud. The errors your brain automatically corrects while you read (or type) will become obvious. Try to keep the action scenes especially free from unnecessary words. You'll be surprised how much a couple badly placed 'that's can hamper the flow of the scene. Look out for repeating yourself, especially in the same sentence!
I hope I'm not coming down hard on you, please don't take it that way. You have a great story going on here, just try to cut the redundant bits and polish up the style a tad. You have my three moustaches. 
The last couple chapters were better written than the previous ones. Your style is improving greatly. Try not to use the same descriptive word too many times, especially in the same sentence or paragraph. Unless you're going for comedic effect, which I'm sure you aren't doing here. Swap up those words to get a rich description!
Take care.
Song. I want to say Zelda's lullaby or the sun song from Ocarina. This chapter was well done, especially the part with the redeads. You had good pacing, making it very exciting. Just letting you know, I'm writing these comments as I read the story, not as it's written. So everything is on a chapter to chapter basis. Keep it up and stuff. Yeah. Stuff.
Ha ha! Link gets his inventory! You should have mentioned that Cluck was allergic to them.
Your style is improving. If you look at your first couple chapters, you will be surprised how they are compared to how you write now.
A small note: When using a comparative (better, faster, deadlier, etc.) You shouldn't put more before it, since the word already implies the comparison. You can't say more deadlier (for example ). It would be either more deadly or deadlier. Just watch out for that.
Oh, another thing. Try to avoid writing etc. in a person's quote. I guess it's fine in narrative, but when you quote it, you can't write it abbreviated. You have to spell it out- etcetera. It may seem like I'm nitpicking the details, but it still makes a difference.
"But Dimension Diver," you say, "how come you only point out what I'm doing wrong? How come you never tell me what to do that's right?" Sorry, but what to do has to come from you, cause that's your style. You have to figger it out yerselfe! Haw haw haaw!
Take care.
There seems to be a slight confusion with words like anymore versus any more, and everyday versus every day. The one is used like 'an everyday occurrence ' or 'he couldnt see anymore.' The two words are used more like 'It happened every day' or 'I can't stand any more racket.' I don't think I did a good job explaining, and it is a subtle difference, but it's there.
I can see what you're getting at here, but the sentence doesn't flow properly. Might I suggest, 'Inside the bubble, everypony's eyes dulled...'etc. It makes more sense grammaticaly.
Be better as pitiful.
Combatant. You probably knew that already and mistyped.
Again, a great chapter. They're getting longer. This is a good sign, since it means you aren't stuck or running out of ideas at all. You have a good idea of what's going on, and it's always exciting when that happens. Don't be afraid of making these long chapters! Huzzah!
It is great how you synthesize a number of elements from all over the the games. I wonder how the plot will progress. Some good writing this is!
However, keep watching tenses. You can't go into present tense when in narrative, unless special circumstances permit. In dialog it's totally fine. There was something that I forgot, but oh well. I'll catch it next time.
Ah. It's that time again. So, the scene was pretty tense, and you keep good track of details, like fatigue, food, and other plot points. I must say though, as good as the scene was, it could be better. Yes, I believe in you! You have tons of potential in this story, it's just a matter of bringing it out.
So, my first piece of advice is when writing action scenes, try to cut out as many unnecessary words as possible. I don't mean make the scene shorter; I mean make phrasing more concise. If you can substitute 'swung his shield into defensive position' for 'brandished his shield,' do it! Finding one spicy word that can take place of a few bland ones will help immensely, as well as help to eliminate awkward phrasing.
Another piece of advice. When in the thick of the action, try to use shorter, more... punchy words. Of course this is just a guideline, but I'm sure you would save 'eviscerated' for a more suspenseful, drawn out sequence, opposed to 'thrust.' Anyhoo, keep going! Don't let my vicious comments destroy your morale!
Ah, one other thing came to mind. Avoid passive tense (not past, passive.) That is when the one receiving the verb's action is the subject, instead of the one acting (simply put ). Example would be something like "he was whacked by the undead" versus "the undead whacked him." Active tense, the second one used is more appropriate for action. Now I can't remember if you were doing that or not, but I'm putting it out just because.