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Scott Grimm
I just write for fun. Don't take things too seriously.
Scott Grimm
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Pretty good. I give it four out of five mustaches
About the last picture:
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Why would you do that?!
For everything else:
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Lyra and Bon-Bon are best humanized shipping
If you write another just do me one favor... sex = mare hood. Honestly it bugged me to read sex lol. It was good please continue, please make bon bon a naughty cop with a whip ;)
I find it funny that I know we're you got the pick of Lyra from (I think, did you get it from tumblr?)
2624247derpibooru
2624269 ah well I have seen it on tumblr, oh and it is a good clop haha
I have a feeling this is going to be featured based on the cover image alone.
Now it's BonBon's turn!
2624309 one can only hope lol
Okay, that was quite a bit of fun. Pacing fit well, as did characterization. A few wording choices - referring to it as a sex might be good if she was using medical terminology as part of the role, but it takes away from the scene as part of the narration - but other than that, well done.
Another chapter would be quite nice, although I think it would fit if Bon Bon wore an outfit for Lyra next time. Maybe to give her an example of how to get more into character. Cheerleader outfit might be good.
Although I think it might be interesting if Lyra commented how hard it was to fit into it, and Bon Bon suggested going to Rarity to get them made to measurements...and that led to something happening. Especially if we got a bit of changing room action as one or the other - or both - tried on various outfits to see which they liked best.
Ok so I actually thought this was pretty good. And even though I have liked others more this one is definitely up there. Now I know I saw at least one grammar error in there but I also was playing fallout while reading this so....
I LOVE IT
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I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Good story. I think you should keep writing this types of stories.
2626322 I thank you for the kind words, but really the overall response to it has been less then what I was hoping for.
I guess I shouldn't have such high hopes, but it was a bit of a let down.
I don't know if I'll continue with this story, or clop in general.
anthro pls go
2624309 Yep: your prediction was spot-on.
awsome next one be bad cop
Roleplaying fetish. One of my favourites. I'm a total RPG nerd, o this hits soft spot I my
dickheart. Nice job! But it's time to ruin it.fc04.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2012/175/b/7/fluttershy_wingboner_animation_by_captainfantasticjt26-d54o7iw.gif
Needs Lyra to choose something for Bon Bon now..something like this
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There isn't much Bon Bon out there. Needs more.
Where's the cover picture from? Or who is the author?
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And you're a moderator?
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Moar!
Boner not now
2628682 Not sure if negative comment or positive one.
2628696 I'm sure it's a positive one
This fic reminds me that me and a few guys need to do a riff marathon where we tear apart a selection of anthro clopfics. Because I'll be honest, I hate anthro, and fics like this are ripe for the picking.
I enjoy the blunt honesty of the description.
It's just; "You know what? Anthro clop. Deal with it."
Bravo to you.
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And I thought Equestria Daily's prereaders were the picky ones.
Hey, you got it up and featured (no pun intended).
Congratulations.
Part 2 with stallions fucking em'?
i dont get it?
Mikey likey. Keep doing what you're doing, and things will be alright.
dat rack, cant wait to check it more indept
Hey, this was pretty great! I didn't really have much to go by (Excepting the great cover art and the fact that it got featured) But this was certainly worth the read! There was a couple spelling and grammatical mistakes (No more than anyone else, I'm sure, and you'll probably be told about it a dozen times, so I won't go on.) but it in no way ruined the immersion of the whole deal, and I really liked it. I genuinely felt some of the fiery passion from those two beautiful mares, which was always great in any read. Plus, I just generally love anthro, so I'm just biased.
One thing that should probably just come under accidental mistakes, though... Lyra's described as having hands, whereas Bonny has hooves... I'm guessing Bon Bon was supposed to have hands too...?
Either way, great read, man. Thanks for writing it.
This was really good! I absolutely LOVED Bon-Bon pouting, and using a horn as a dildo? Yes please!
Two quick notes: you seem to use a couple of words just... All the time. I noticed you used 'sex' almost exclusively. Mix it up. Call it a pussy, for goodness sakes. Also I saw a few typos and grammatical errors. Nothing too major, but a bit of editing would help.
Overall though, it was a great, sexy story with great pacing and really good characterization.
2629140 perhaps a little three-four action? We shall see
2629140 perhaps a little three-four action? We shall see
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Chapter 2?
How about explosions and guns... That always makes everything better.
I'm not the only one who knows what this means, right? And if it is what I think it is....
really.
she has a fever? MORE COWBELL
I'm usually not into clopfics, but damn you nailed it! I really enjoyed this one!
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Animaniacs probably! Love that show XD
2630289 that was the whole point of me putting that in there? I just wanted a little joke, to make it a bit more...
2630958 me to.
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2631284 tags:tremendous cleavage