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Scott Grimm


I just write for fun. Don't take things too seriously.

Comments ( 175 )

not bad, there's a lot of potential here. I do believe I'll stalk this story and wait for more.:pinkiehappy:

1928311 Oh sweet Luna, I'm being stalked :applecry:.
Just kidding, I do like the comment and will be sure to pass it on to the author of the story. :ajsmug:

I like it, but there are a lot of unnecessary apostrophes.

I agree with tarox. This dose have good potential (and need of an editor) and mabey you should ask your friend for the "rights" to the story to update it more frequently. Just a thought though. All in all, good story. :twilightsmile:

1935054 If I so chose so, I could update it. However I currently have four other... wait no, 5 other stories I am working on. 4 of which have been posted 1 or them still in the works. And it has been a while since I have updated any of them so I'm working on that first before anything.

A lot of potential yes, not many Lyra/Tavi stories out there. I'd love to see how it goes! Please update this!!!!

1935611 I don't know why that is, that there are not more Octavia/Lyra fics out there. I mean it makes more sense to me than Vinyl and Tavi. Not to say that there's anything wrong with that pair, its just idk a bit strange to me.

Vinyl/Tavi working because of polar opposites. They are totally different which strangely works well for their pairing.

1936174 Well I get it, I just prefer Lyra over Vinyl imo.

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Don't get me wrong, I love Lyra but I always see her with BonBon, it just works. As for Octavia she needs Vinyl because of her being "upper crust" where as Vinyl is sorta perceived as lower class even though she came from money.

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Full plate, huh? It's all good. An update would be nice soon. If thats ok with you, that is. :fluttercry:

1939078 It's funny how many people want an update of this story :twilightblush:
So... I suppose I can have one by tomorrow since I just finished an update on my main story this evening. :yay:

Commence read.

Well, Octavia sure has some explaining to do.

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Hold up... that was posted yesterday. So then THAT means... *GASP* :pinkiehappy:
Update day!!!

Commence read.

Well first the incident with Lyra and then meeting Vinyl.

That escalated in rather quick manner.

(Joke) Alt. Title: Lyres And Cellos: It's Like A Mozart Symphony
All I'm wondering now is what Bonbon and Vinyl are doing.

Fun. Be interesting to see how this plays out. Thanks.

Can'twait for the next chapter!!!!

1949008 heh, I'm glad to hear of your anticipation :ajsmug:

Very very nice, I was wondering when/if Vinyl would make an appearance. Based on Tavi's actions before getting to the bar and meeting Vinyl the next chapters have potential to be very very spicy. Keep it up good sir author, I'll continue to stalk.:pinkiehappy:

Listening to One Trick Pony by Deadmou5 while reading this: almost died from all the lols.
After a quick and drunk escelation of mare on mare action and some unfourtunit miss spellings, I enjoyed this story and am very curious to see how Lyra and more importantly Octavia react to this whole fiasco. As the denizens of the interwebs say: MOAR! :pinkiecrazy:

Will Vinyl play a big roll in this?
Great story though, it has a plot and not just clopping. :pinkiehappy:

1952724 As far as sexual encounters go with vinyl go I can't say. My friend has given me the freedom to take the plot wherever I may chose so, that being the case I have to undertake where to head this story to, so I am uncertain about the sex scenes at the moment. I can however say that she will be a major role in being the antagonist in the story.

1948525 Did you mean Bon-Bon and Lyra per chance? instead of Vinyl and Bon-Bon.
1949949 And moar you shall have! :pinkiecrazy:
1948450 Indeed, but I suppose things escalate quickly in all or most relationships.

1958421 It's so ingenious! It can not fail!

Comment posted by Lokey deleted Jan 15th, 2013

1963271 And more you shall receive! A new update tomorrow. :rainbowkiss:

Watwatwatwatwatwatwtatwatwatwatwatwatwtatwtattwtatwtwtatwtwtwawatwtawtatw

1966214 can't tell you like it, or if your just confused as hell. :rainbowhuh:

Well somepony is not happy. :rainbowderp: Sad thing is that somepony will not be happy at the end of this and that makes me sad. :fluttershyouch:
Is there going to be sex scene in every chapter too? But this story keeps on getting better and better with each chapter, keep it up! :pinkiehappy:

1966423 Since the story was originally meant to be a one shot clop, there will be a sex scene in every chapter if at all possible. I was able to convince my friend to actually have a story behind it, I feel it adds more dimension and depth into everything. Heh look at me, acting all sophisticated and such :duck:

But as far as how sad or how happy one pony will be, I cannot say. We will just have to wait for the development of the story. :trollestia:

Oh shiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiit. I did NOT expect that! So amazing! Can't wait for another. Please update soon!


Yeah i'm greedy.... Sorry.

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Sorry. Just cracked my femur and I was under the influence of some painkillers. I don't think I was entirely there when I posted that comment. (if you know what I mean)

But I read it again, and yes, I liked it.

UPDATE! YES! TIME TO READ! :pinkiehappy:
Edit to come, standby...

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Well...
That happened.
The amount of What cannot be discribed. Nor the amount of MOAR that is demanded.

Ohkay, dis is geeting way out of hand.

Is all just sort'uve lost all cohesion wit meh and I've gone and lost interest.

1966630 Okay, please go into further detail so I can make tweaks for future reference.
Also sorry if you have lost interest. That's not good to hear :twilightoops:

1966487 :twilightsheepish: so I take it you enjoyed this chapter?

oh man this is so wow oh my gods this is wow my brain just

its AWESOME :pinkiehappy::twilightsmile::yay:

Commence read.

Well...Octavia got some esplaining to do.

Well that got complicated fast.

Poor Vinyl, I hope your writer finds some way to make her happy by the end of this.
Also, I'm loving how quickly this updates, please keep it up!

1969046 As long as the demand is up, I will post it as quickly and as efficiently as possible.
And as far as making Vinyl happy, we will just have to wait and hope for the best. I myself don't know how it ends yet, AND I'M THE ONE TYPING THE STORY! (My friend's a slow typist.)

4 days in between chapter 1 and 2, 3 days in between 2 and 3. So we'll either have chapter 4 in 2 days or 3 and a half. That, or they aren't aren't following any pattern. Probably the latter.

Stupid wait times.

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